Rishbala SS 'ImPassiOned' ||COMPLETED@PG.71|| (30/11)

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: sapnaf52
hurry. ...

200 posts more.. U hurry..!!

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Thank u so much for the dedication! I'm glad I hit the bulls eye once again...😉

now coming to the update... I'm in love with this Rk... so much... i like men who speaks less... i hate when they blabber like girls... men are made to listen not to lecture... (according to me)..😆

first part... laugh worthy... i was laughing and rolfing... thanks to two crazies Sultan and Madhu... both the stupids were repeating the same questions and annoyed Rk... poor boy got sandwiched between them... 😆

LOL!! he locked the swimming poor area so that this silly girl wont drown herself in the water... but man... you shouldn't have done that... instead u should pushed and let her float in the water after drinking the nasty chlorinated pool water... so that you can give her CPR or mouth to mouth respiration and all... this way u can feel her up and kiss her too nah? 😉

hehe... this girl is not at all worried that she is kidnapped and her family would be worried.. she is so enjoying her time wth Rk... oh girl... she was unashamedly drooling at Rk... but who will not love to have a free feast? 😉

hahaha... again and again she is proving to Rk that she is silly, childish and stupid too... when he explicitly tells her not to try to escape... and she is only safe with him (so true) but still she tries to seek help from those rogues and put herself in trouble... thank goodness Rk enjoyed the fight after babysitting for too long and took her safely with him... 😆

loving this story... nicely written...

thanks for the pm... do update the next part soonish!😉

Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

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Lolz this Madhu is crazy... Lion and Tiger...thank god she didn't say Liger 😆 Then she could have fused both the species which even Scientists find it difficult to do hehe...

Good Aani... You have kept up your word so unlike me. I am an utter waste in promises 🤢

And as usual the update was rocking... To your style!

After reading the whole update my first reaction was to scold our stupid heroine... Her escape plan is perfect but she failed to identify a person by his face. Face is the index of the mind and in most of the cases girls tend to have a primary instinct to find the fake one. I wish she could have done it. But I knew why you thought that scene...! Yes it's to make RK realize that there is someone who cares for him, cries for him, feel sad and guilty...!! Unlike that fool Sultan. Man he said that he doesn't worry about him but worried about Madhu??! 😡 How rude? So Madhu overtook RK... And his priority is her!

Rk prefers silence Lol!! But he himself is slowly coming out of his shell... Madhu is indeed a magic in his life. Hope she would cure his wounds with her love... And let that sultan get busy in building Madhu Mahal 😆 I heard that it took 17 years to build Taj Mahal... Let this ullu sullu take the same time...then he will be grandpa to Rishbala's children and he can happily spoon feed them 😆

ROFL poor RK... Sandwitched between a chatter box and a stupid lover boy!! Haha whatever she says Sultan was repeating it like an idiot. He doesn't want Madhu to be unhappy but he himself is gonna make her... It's sure by now that she feels safe only with him, esp after that incident. I guess when the moment comes... Madhu leaving him and forced to go to Sultan RK will realize his love and fight for her... Just a random guess Hehe...

Super!! Sudha akka prediction is true... I always read her comments so I knew it when you replied that she had hit the bulls eye 😉

Wait wait... Sultan is going to arrange bed on dining table or near it?? 😆 This guy became mad in love... Or should I say obsession 😛

Thanks for the PM dear... Good it's short story now!!

Edited by vishuv - 8 years ago

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Hey.. Ur length is perfectly fine.. U came & find time to comment.. Thats enough for me..
Thanks for coming souwmiya..!!

Lol Aani!!! Last week they thought about CPR in emergency medicine class... I so wanted to share this misconception with someone 😆 Hehe even I was under that impression till last week...

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sapana

@sapnaf52

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
200 posts more.. U hurry..!!

hurry to first aane k khushi me tha... 😳
me first...
and again I get promotion from your story. ...

hurry for part 2..
me ne part 2 comment hi nahi kiya.. 😆
part 3 me first,part 2 me last... 😆

part 2...

madhu..is innocent,chatterbox...love her..
and rk..he is rude..
he have bad past..

sultan 😡 ,he is behind to make rk rude
later sultan become dangerous i guess..

wow madhu trust rk..her kidnapper..
why not he is decent guy.
even when she is fully drenched..her clothes were clinging in her body..he didn't lustfully gaze..
(that the different between hero and villan)

madhu slip in pool and rk come for rescue..
mouth to mouth respiration.. 😳

two month 😲
ok...don't worry rk madhu ka achhe se dhayan lakhe ga...

madhu serious talk...!!!
mature talk ...
varna me to soch rahi thi ki she forget ..yar. and enjoy her kidnapping...

finally..comment..karli..

Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: sapnaf52
hurry to first aane k khushi me tha... 😳
me first...
and again I get promotion from your story. ...

super speedy promotion sappy.. Love u.. I was actually expecting u...😉

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Badbuddy

@Badbuddy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

RES for part 2
oh I am super duper late

Great update
I love this jodi...rude Rk and innocent Madhu...

This Rk...he has faced so much in his childhood...
Sultan...this Sultan has changed Rk?? He forcefully sent Rk into the crime world...

But this Rk, even being a kidnapper isn't cheap..he is a dignified kidnapper lol..

Madhu and her chattering...I am so surprised she trusted her kidnapper to do nothing to her...she is so innocent...thank god this Sultan first sent her to Rk instead of taking her to him...

Oh. Madhu...she constantly tried to escape but no...
no any route...poor Madhu

Yeah...Rk saved her...and wow CPR...great...
hehe Rk's dress...that must be big for her..

Slowly Rk will fall for her...poor Sultan...

Thanks for pm..

Edited by kaustavi - 8 years ago

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janu2006

@janu2006

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

@Kaustavi
Thanks dear... Glad u like the update.. Yes.. Rk was influenced by sultan.. More probably he pushed rk in all these..!!! Thanks for coming..!!