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yep..she has tried to seduce rk naa, not bittuji.. So she knows, RK is the man of integrity😆yes..rk must be hurt.. & one strong point is that madhu gave her V to him, no matter who is her hubby & who she dance with. Thanks for coming dear.
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done.. Have replied to all comments...!!
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thankyou sooo much everyone for likes & comment..!! Thats my spanich to write the next part...!!
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Guys.. thankyou so much for lovely responses..!!
and so .. so sorry for late update.. first exam.. then festivals.. and now more exams..🤢
Have replied to all comments in earlier pages..
I hope this update worth ur waiting..!!
Dedicated to all who have asked for this update..🤗


Nymphomania
Part-4


Closing the shower madhu wore a pair of jeans & loose top. She opened the bathroom door & stepped out. They have plans to go around to view the city today. She frowns seeing rk standing still, like a statue lost somewhere. She opens her mouth to call him when she spot the phone lying on floor.
"Ma'am..ma'am..are u listening Mr.Choudary asked u to be here.. Hello.. Madhu ma'am.."
Madhu hears the voice of Trishna, her husband's assistance on the other end of the call & she knows everything has crest fallen. After few minutes of silence the call got disconnected. She looks up to see Rk & he is still in the same position but now she understands that he is not lost, he is shocked, even shock would be an understatement. The quick flickers of emotions on madhu's face was replaced in seconds by the same stone cold expression. Her eyes becomes cold as her jaws tightened to an expressionless straight face. The walls which she build around herself, again cover her to protect her. She step forward & pick up the phone like nothing drastic has happened.
"We are going back" she stated coldly in a business like tone & leaves the room taking her belonging leaving Rk alone standing in same position, all blank.

---*---

Madhu was driving the car through the highways with rk sitting beside her on passenger seat. His face muscles pulled together, eyes fix on the road ahead. Madhu keeps her face & eyes straight. Her outer self is calm but a storm is going inside her. He turn his head sideways & looks at madhu. All things came back to him from the time he joined the company to the time they united themselves. His heart crush down as he experience betrayal. What is he ? Just a usable & disposable material.
"Stop.. The car !" He said through his clench jaws, his eyes fix on madhu blazing with anger. Madhu feel his heated gaze on her but she decided to ignore him & continues to drive. Without any more word Rk pulled out the keys from ignition, switching it off, Causing the car to get disbalanced.
"Rk, what are u doing ?" Madhu yelled at him turning the steering wheel to prevent it from hitting & the car stops with a jerk. Rk flung the car door open & stepped out. Madhu looks at him with concern, she knew he is hurt beyond words. Rk came to madhu's side, opening the door he pulled her out of the car. Madhu quickly mask her concern with her sneer, but she dare not say anything to anger him more.
"Why u did this to me ?" Rk demands gravely slamming the car door shut. Madhu stands between rk & car with straight face.
"We are getting late" she spoke trying to divert the topic.
"I asked, Why ME ?" Rk pinned her against the car sticking to his question.
"You.. What ?" Madhu asked sternly looking directly in his eyes as she understands there is no way to escape from him. Rk looks at madhu's eyes which has no hesitation, no guilt (as she has masked her feeling). This hurt him more.
"U are.." Rk clench his jaws to not to use any derogatory words on her, on a girl. Madhu looks on as her heart hammer in her chest but her face is as usual in her control.
"U are married & still u sleep.." Rk trailed off not knowing how to put it in words.
"We did it in mutual consent" madhu boldly said what he could not speak & remove his hands from her shoulders gently.
"How can u be like this ?" Rk ask in disbelief & madhu continues to stare him calmly.
"Lets go" she said turning away.
"It was just sex for u." Rk spoke backing away "You Used Me For Ur Pleasure"
It pricked madhu's heart to hear it from him, but she cant give in.
"U were involved too.. U had pleasure with me too.." Madhu spoke straightaway. Madhu's each words filled rk with hatred. He banged his fist against the car beside madhu making her flinch back.
"U are right.. I was involved too & MY EMOTIONS were involved too" he spat back "Emotions which u dont acknowledge and what else can i expect from a woman like u, who only knows to pleasure herself." That was a sharp blow on madhu's heart & her dignity.
"Rk.. Enough" she said lowering her eyes but her voice strong.
"why ? Did it affect u ? The truth affects u ?" Rk asked gritting his teeth. Madhu didnt said anything neither she look at him.
"U know where u have hurt me ?" Rk asked tilting her chin up harshly to make her look at him.
"Here.." He points his heart & madhu's eyes softens.
"It was Lust for u but is Love for me." He said intently as his voice harden.
"The same love which is void, which was never there" he lightly pushed her back against the car & stepped back.
"U are disgrace to womankind.. And I hate.." He stops speaking any further, turning on his heels he walk away from her alone in the highway, parting his way from her.
"And u hate me.." Madhu complete Rk's words for her falling on her knees beside the car. She said what he couldnot said to her. Hate is a big word. Her vision clouded as hot tears curtains her eyes. Shaking her head she quickly stands on her feet & shoved the tears off her eyes. She enter her car & switch on the engine.
"Rk.. U cant expect anything from a woman like me.. True..! Am sorry for fetching it for this long. I hurt u.. But now u'll be okk.. U are away from me.. U'll be fine" she whispered softly as a tear drop rolled down her cheeks. She brush it off & drives the way back to her home.

RK keeps walking on the secluded road with varied of emotions in his heart. He wanted to hurt her with his words , he wanted to vent out his anger on her but he couldnot.

---*---

"How are u ?" A man in his forties asked while dropping ice cubes in his glass contained drink. Madhu walks across the hall all composed & stands at a decent distance from him.
"Good.. Mr.choudary" she spoke professionally.
"Ur phone was unreachable" the man, Balraj choudary spoke facing her.
"I lost it a week ago in the party" she answered.
"Bhatia project got signed ?" He asked.
"Yes"
"Good.. U hadnt came back to office from past one week after signing the contract" Balraj asked casually steeping towards her. At his mention, madhu got flashes of her all intimate moment with rk as they spend a week cooped up in a room in their own world.
"i was on leave" madhu spoke keeping straight face "but it didnt hamper the business. There were no major deals in this past 1 week & bittuji handle all small works here."
"i trust u in this Madhubala. I know u wont compromise with work" he appreciate & madhu nodded her head acknowledging his appreciation.
"I heard u were attacked"
"Yes..i was!"
"Is it because of my rivalry with peoples ?" He asked seriously.
"No.."
"Then..? Who is it ?"
"Padmini" madhu replied in monosyllable.
"That woman again.. Should i take action on her ?" Balraj offered.
"Thankyou Mr.choudary but bittuji has already arranged a jail trip for her"
"hmm..if u need my help regarding the matter do tell me"
"Sure.."
"I hope u are fine"
"I am" madhu assured.
"Thanks for coming in short notice madhubala" balraj forward his hand to her for handshake.
"Thanks my job Mr.choudary" madhu faintly smiled as she took his hand for handshake.
"would u stay here tonight ?" He asked formally.
"No..i would prefer to go back to my apartment" madhu politely answered.
"Okk..am staying here for a month. I want u to fix my meeting with Bhatia regarding the project"
"sure mr.choudary, i would like to take ur leave now" Balraj nodded & madhu went out dialling a number.

"Bittuji.. Rk is alone in highway, make sure he reach his home safely" she spoke locking her car door.
"But madhu ma'am.. Where are u both since morning ? U check out without telling me" bittuji asked from other end. Madhu falls silent hearing it. Just few hours ago they were together & now they have parted forever.
"bittuji do what i say please.. Take care of him" madhu said wearily & cut the call. She dont have any energy left to Continue her strong woman charade anymore. First rk then balraj now bittuji.. No more..!

---*---

Rk was walking through the darkness of the night when a car stops in front of him. He was ready to lash out when he saw a plumpy figure rushing towards him.
"Bittuji ?" He asked seeing him.
"Mr.kundra.. U here.. Come i'll drop u home" bittuji said smilingly. Rk glare him as it didnt take him a minute to understand that madhu has sent him.
"What she want ? On one hand she is using him & on other hand she is pretending to care for him" rk thought enraged.
"Sorry bittuji.. But get lost" he snapped knowing that bittuji is tail of madhu.
"Rk.. Plz come with me, i wont leave u alone" bittuji kept pestering him blocking his way.
"move bittuji" he said irked.
"No.." Rk was going to push bittuji aside when he saw a speeding car coming towards bittuji & he pulled bittuji away as the car zoomed past them.
"Thankyou rk.. Please come with me" he pleaded. Rk gave in & he entered the car. Bittuji quickly type a message & seat in driver seat driving the car.

---*---

*BEEP* *BEEP*
Madhu pick up her cell & read the message from bittuji that Rk is with him. She took a deep breath of relief, laying on her back in the bed she stares blankly at the ceiling. Without her control tears slide down from the corner of her eyes. Its been years she had cried & now she feels like crying again. She buried her face under the pillows & give in to her tears.
"it was not lust.. Not lust" she muttered in muffled voice remembering Rk's bitter words.
True, she was attracted to rk from first met but what drew her attention was his behaviour, calm, composed, passionate. After all what she did to him he never have her for his advantage, he never manhandle her. His every refusal made madhu fall for him, respect him & her feeling for him came out as her aggression. His presence around her made her lively. It was him who was on her mind, not lust.

---*---

*After few days*

Bittuji observed the changes in madhu. Most of the time she remains silent & other times she behaves very cranky. Its like she is being eaten from inside but she never shows it. Her frustrations comes out as aggression, contrasting her behaviour. Bittuji tried to talk to her but she never spoke a word to him. After that fateful evening rk never show up in office either.
"sure enough.. Something happened between rk & madhu ma'am. I cant see her like this. I need to talk" bittuji thought & entered madhu's cabin.
"u have to tell me, what happened" madhu looks at bittuji confused with his sudden question.
"what ?"
"U are changing. Its like getting back in ur invisible shell" madhu understands what bittuji is trying to say.
"I am fine" she spoke straightaway.
"No.. U are not" bittuji exclaimed.
"Bittuji, lower ur voice" madhu hissed
"i'll wont. Did rk did something.. Tell me" bittuji remains adamant.
"Bittuji.." Madhu is going to snap on him but stops seeing her cabin door flung open & rk barged in her cabin. His body relaxed but his face has that angry expression from that night. Madhu continues to looks at him as her heart felt peace seeing him after all these days. Bittuji looks at the duo carefully.
Rk came forward with a envelop in his hand & throws it on madhu's desk breaking her daze.
"My resignation.. I came to collect my belongings" he informed her curtly. Madhu came back to her sense hearing him. She took years to build herself uniformly & she wont give anyone, not even her love, the chance to dictate her, to break her. True, she hurt him but it didnt give him permission to crush her.
"Mr.kundra.." She spoke sternly in business tone "its office hour now, u cant collect ur belonging now. I'll make ur belongings packed. U can come & received them by evening"
Rk glare her for her audacity to talk to him after what she did to him & she too continue to look at him, not backing away.
"Office.. Rules.. It dont sound good from ur mouth" rk said sarcastically indicating her past acts of seducing him in office. Madhu's eyes harden as she reverts back.
"u are no one to tell me that" Bittuji looks at the duo burning each other with their gazes. He know madhu dont leave anyone who dares to talk to her like that but now she hasnot taken any step against rk yet, And on other hand Rk never talks to anyone in disrespectful manner but now he'd doing it to madhu.
Rk broke their heated eye lock & marched out of the cabin & madhu fiercely pick Rk's resignation letter, crumpled it into ball & throws it in the dustbin angrily. Bittuji's doubt got confirmed & he rushed out to get Rk.

---*---

"RK..RK..RK..STOP !" Bittuji ran & stand in front of rl's car with his arms wide open. Rk applied the breaks before the car runs over bittuji.
"Bittuji u find my car only to name ur accident" rk scowled stepping out of his car as the place got crowded.
"Rk we need to talk" bittuji stated.
"There is nothing to talk. I resigned from work" rk state the fact crossing his arms over his chest.
"Not that.. I.."
"i dont want to talk about her" rk cuts off bittuji "and especially not to u. Why she send u here ? To order something.. To blame something.. Listen bittuji i respect u, so please dont create a scene like this" he ended pointing at the crowd.
"Rk, for sake of that respect, hear me once " bittuji pleaded & gesture security guard to disperse the crowd.
"Once for all.. Say it & spare me" rk give in agitated.
"Not here" bittuji said. Rk spare him a look & enter his car as bittuji too followed him.

---*---

"I Never thought i'll be the one to say this to u, bit i dont have a way out either. I cant keep mum." Bittuji said to rk as they stands on deserted road beside rk's car.
"Hell with ur philosophy.. God ! Why even i agreed to listen to u" rk said frustratedly banging his fist against the car.
"Cause u love her still" Bittuji said softly looking at him.
"I dont" rk spat but his eyes tells another tale.
"Its in ur eyes" bittuji contradicts.
"There is nothing in my eyes, damn it.. She played with me, do u get that & i dont want to talk about her" rk screamed at bittuji.
"This shows ur love. Ur hurt, but still u dont want to talk ill about her to other person" bittuji said as rk looks away.
"And life played a game at her" bittuji spoke having rk's attention back "u have asked me why madhu ma'am is like this.. Why she is enclosed in a shell..Cause life forced her to be like this & she dont want to come out of it either. She is scared of getting hurt again. But it was u who knock her shell & she was willing to come out of it holding ur hands" bittuji's words had an effect on rk & he asked him straight forward.
"What do u mean bittuji ?"
"the sufferings she went through her life, i cant justify it with my words.. But long story cut short is.." Bittuji begins to tell Rk madhu's past.
"i used to work as manager of shamsher malik, small scale business man & thats how i know madhu. Madhubala is daughter of Malik & padmini but her bad luck, padmini is not the ideal mother. Padmini wants money, she was not happy with the simple life style. She had many affairs even after her marriage with malik, without his knowledge. That time she conceived madhu, & she wanted to abort her but on malik enforcement she had to give birth to madhu. Malik loved madhu dearly, but the love was short lived. Padmini never looks at madhu for once. Malik's business died down, financial problem raised & padmini's affairs disclosed in front of malik. Doubt clouded malik's mind as he started doubting madhu to be his own blood. Thats when the miseries started for madhu. Malik didnt disown madhu for his love for madhu but he distanced himself from her. The poor girl craved for her parents love. All these took a troll on malik, he had an accident which landed him in mental hospital cause of 😆 Brain hemorrhage.
Padmini got set free from marriage & continued with her affairs, changing her partners/husbands in every few years. She didnt leave madhu cause madhu has inherited some decent property of malik. She kept madhu in worst condition possible & what worst could be for madhu to see her mother with every other men. She grew up & from there her hatred for her mother started. She despise her. I once tried to claim madhu's custody but by then padmini had became influential. Madhu was 13 years when i lost contact with her.
I meet her again before two years from now when she was 19. But she was changed. She was Mrs. Balraj choudary. She revealed her past to me & that was the last time i saw her crying."
bittuji took a deep breath & rk holds his breath awaiting.
"A child has to pay for his parents deeds. That held true for madhu. The men who looks after padmini's needs they got madhu in their sight. Thats the point where harassment began & its affected madhu mentally & emotionally. First she was scared then her fears took form of aggression. Padmini's lover sultan he made madhu go through hell. He was eyeing madhu & when padmini got to know she was angry cause her lover find madhu more attractive. Madhu turned 18 by then. Padmini transferred the inherited property of madhu in her name, sold madhu to sultan & broke up with him. Sultan decided to make money through madhu but before he engaged her in business madhu ran away somehow. While escaping she came under balraj choudary's car, a business tycoon, having a life taking accident. He took her to hospital. Madhu's life got saved but her wounds from past remained unhealed.
He offered madhu a small post in his comoany & madhu begin her mew life. Madhu was sharp & balraj was impressed by her. Balraj loved his wife & after his wife's unfortunate death he didnt marry again but became a womanizer & money maker. He offered madhu to be in his bed which madhu decline with her resignation. Sultan was Closed to getting tab on madhu. She was in danger when she got proposal from balraj to be Mrs. Choudary. He wanted to something legally, trustworthy & loyal to handle his business.
Its beneficial deal for both of them. Being wife of such influencial businessman no one would dare to eye her. She would be protected. And balraj being man of words shared professional employee-employer relationship with madhu & was rest assured that madhu would never ditch him cause of money. He transfered some Business units in name of madhu for her to handle it & locate to another country for business expansion. That's how madhu became the owner of such large firms in such a young age of 21 & for world she is Mrs.Madhubala choudary.
" bittuji ended & rk looks on blankly leaning against the car.
"But all past happenings is imprinted in madhu's mind which result in her drastic change in behaviour. She was under psychiatrist supervision for months but everything cant be healed medically, those invisible scars can only be healed with love" bittuji finally said tugging Rk's hand, turning him to face him.
"I saw her living, the happy gleam in her eyes when she is with u. She wont say it to u by herself. She is scared, she is still enclosed in the wall she build around herself. For once hold her hand & help her to conquer her fear, u'll see & whole new madhu who'll enlighten ur life" bittuji spoke with hint of tears in his eyes.
"And she never betrayed U. U are the only man she ever had in her life."
Rk closed his eyes as the last line was like a slap to rk cause in his anguish he has accused her of being with other men. How can he forget the night when he took her, made her his, but still he let his anger overpower his senses.

---*---

Madhu leaned on the huge glass window of her cabin was looking outside, at the twilight, drowned in glumness & somewhere anger too. She dont want to feel anger but still she is feeling it cause of Rk's behaviour.
"All men are Same.." She muttered through her clenched jaws. At the very moment rk entered madhu's cabin & locked the door seeing her lost.
"What are u doing here ? Get out !" Madhu yelled hearing the locking sound of door.
"Every time ur words wont be followed madhubala.." Rk spoke with authority stepping towards her. His audacity rile her more & her suppressed emotions came out as hot tears formed in her eyes. She clamp her jaws together & tries to walk past him but rk swiftly grasp her arm & pulled her back to wall, trapping her between him & wall.
"Rk..move..! Else u'll get a hard slap from me" she hissed enraged with her eyes burning with tears. Rk looks at her intently with grief stricken face. He can clearly see the vulnerable madhu through her eyes. Without a word he embrace her in his arms, hugging her tight, burying his face in the crook of her neck. Madhu momentarily became shock but soon started pushing him back.
"Leave me.." She cried.
"Am..sorry" rk whispered softly still hugging her close.
"what do u think.. Whenever u want u'll push me out & when when u feel sorry u can have me" madhu finally give in to her tears & starts hitting him. Rk breaks the hug & holds her both hands on her back immobilizing her & drew his face closer to her brushing off her tears with his mouth. He is seeing the same miserable madhu from that night.
"Slap me hard, if i ever leave u" he whispered huskily making her stop fighting him.
"I love u" he confess the already known words but madhu remains silent neither did she look at him, silent teats made its way through her eyes. Rk gently cups her cheeks, leaning down he placed his lips on her sucking her lips softly, expressing his love for her. Madhu stood still loosely wrapping her hands around his neck, neither protesting him nor responding him either. Rk deepened the kiss a minute later uniting their craving tongues. Madhu grips his neck with the feeling of his tongue & at the moment rk knew madhu has give in to Him. He gently part away their moist lips & make madhu look at him by cupping her face.
"I want to be the only hand u ever need to hold.. I want to be in ur life & i need u in my life" rk spoke all unsaid words in a simple sentence.
"U..u mean it" madhu asked softly for assurance. She trusts him & his love more than anything but she wont be able to face the pain of being left all alone once again.
"Trust me once madhu.. Hold my hand" he said with so much sincerity which made madhu ready to fight once again with destiny for him. She tip toed & wrap her arms around his neck, conveying her love for him, Promising silently to be with him & for now their mind clouded with one single thought, i.e, Balraj Choudary.

---*---

"u want to leave all these & go away with him ?" Balraj asked coldly sipping on his drinks as rk-madhu stands at a distance holding hands wuth bittuji behind them.
"Yes" madhu replied softly.
"U sure.. U arent making a mistake ?" Balraj asked madhu raising an eye brow.
"I am here to correct all mistake" rk spoke to balraj.
"hmm.. If u go with him u have to break all ties with me & u wont get a single penny from my side" balraj said.
"i dont want anything Mr.choudary" madhu spoke politely cause this man has never misbehaved with her.
"Wont u miss this comfortable life ?" Balraj asked.
"No..cause i have the comfortable arms to hold me through all even & odds" madhu smiled touching rk's heart.
"well thats ur choice.. But i'll miss ur company. U handled the business so well" balraj sighed as he knew it will be difficult to get someone hardworking & loyal like madhu. Rk's tensed muscles relaxed & madhu sigh a breath of relief. She was scared of balraj's decision but now she knows he wont force her into anything ever.
"If u two ever need any help, am here always." Balraj smiled "I am happy for u madhu."
"thankyou sir.. " rk shook his hands with balraj thankfully & balraj patted his back. Entwining his fingers With madhu, they walked out of choudary mansion to start a new life together.

---*---

*After some months*

"rishabh" rk was sleeping by lying on his stomach when he heard madhu moaning in her ears.
"Hmmm" he just hummed sleepily.
"I am so hot" madhu whispered licking his ears sensually keeping her half body weight on him as she climbs him from back as Both of them are just wrapped in sheets.
"i know.." Rk chuckled hearing her.
"i mean i am so hot & wet down there" madhu swat his arms for chuckling at her.
"Not now biwi.. Am so tired & sleepy" rk mumbled with closed eyes.
"U are so lazy rishab" madhu complains & rk opens his sleepy eyes.
"Ur libido is so low" madhu said poutedly. Hearing her rk turned around making madhu slip from his back & landing on bed. Rk leans on her keeping his one arms on bed supporting his body weight.
"Are u serious ?" He asked incredously looking at her as she batter her eye lashes & snake her arms around his neck.
At evening they had plan to go out for a candle light dinner as rk got promotion in his work field. After leaving from Balraj mansion madhu joined in as teacher & Rk in company. As they got ready, Rk eyes kept stuck to madhu's body beneath a thin Lenin fabric saree & madhu's eyes feasting rk's while body as always. Stumbling on their feet, kissing & light caressing not to ruin their dress up they reach their car to go to venue. Madhu couldnot help herself & starts groping him. Feeling it hard to control, as always Rk took u turn & came back home. He scoop her in his arms after getting out of his car & before reaching their bed room they started ripping each other clothes off. So from evening madhu was claiming him again & again & now saying he is lazy.
"Its 1 at night.. I cant miss the first day after promotion" rk tried to make madhu understand.
"ok.. U lie back then" madhu pushed him back to bed & get over him.
"U relax..i'll have my way out" she spoke sexily tracing her Lips over his.
"How ?" Rk whispered back, knowing her intension to straddle him.
"By seducing you..!" She huskily replied, what she always do.
"U're truly a nymph" rk laughs softly, pulling her to himself for a cozy hug, and much more things aftermath !! 😉

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Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 8 years ago
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lovely ending.. it was simple and nice without much drama... quite unexpected though...
hmm... too much of harsh words from Rk but can't blame him becos he was so hurt... he thought madhu used him as a piece of shit and disposed him... but it wasn't the truth.. he was her one and true love...
Thanks to bittuji for understanding that something was wrong between Rk and madhu and letting Rk know abt her dreaded past...
that past was bit funny... LOL!!! Balraj wishing to marry madhu at that age was too much... but one thing i shld appreciate... he treated her well and didn't force on her...
when she said she found some safe arms and she wanna call it quits between them he let her go with Rk without creating any scene... so like Ballu in this story..
Padmini is such a bitch and i m glad u didn't bring her here and let her trouble Rishbala more...
finally... they r happy and living a normal satisfied uncomplicated life... just living and loving each other...
thoroughly loved this story... Thanks dear!!
Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Super update...
Madhu past is very bad..
Feel sad for her..
Padimi character is worst..
I didn't see like that padimini character anywhere..
Balraj is genue person..
Alwats I read ,Balraj was madhu's Father,Uncle like that.
But here totally different...
I like this balraj .
For her safety ,he married her..
Bittuji is connecter of RK-Madhu...
He is a good supporter for her..
Finally I, come to my hero. . ,I accept his angry..
His angry is correct in his position...
There is no complain for his words and attitude towards madhu..
Because if she said about that matter to RK,There is no problem like that.
Because of her ,both of them hurt.
I feel bad for him very much.
But finally they patchup ,because of bittuji.
Last part is so hot..
Madhu always has eye on him...
Happy Ending...

Edited by dharsii - 8 years ago
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finally ...u update..
rk ko shock laga...
angry vi hogaya...
he think she only used him for her pressure...
but he loves her...
madhu...love this madhu so much...
she didn't bring her emotion in face..
also she care rk..so send bittuji...
mr ..balraj...
love his characters here...
i think he is negative...but u surprise us...
he help madhu lots and also support , give respect ...
bittuji thinks something happen between madhu and rk..
he tell madhu past...and patchup rishbala..
madhu past really worst...
padmine..is she is mother?
she sold her own daughter..
knowing sultan use her for money earning...
sultan hate him..
thank god madhu escape...
and meet mr.balraj..
both married for their own benefit..
bittuji made padmini trip for jail...
hope she didn't get back tricket
finally rishbala patchup...
i am worried also..what will balraj say..
but he agree...
finally mr & mrs kundra...
madhu become teacher!!
may be PT teacher..she have amazing defence technique..
she is really nymps..
unique story...
love it...

Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!! Thank god, nothing had happened as I thought!! I thought that Balraj would be torturing Madhu, but glad Balraj actually helped her from that cruel Sultan..

Padmini!!!! She is the hatest character I have ever read...sold her own daughter...god, she is a woman...but she doesn't deserve to be called as woman!!!

Poor Madhu, she had to bear all this...from childhood, she was craving for love and finally she had got Madhu...but that misunderstanding...
Rk hurt her a lot by those cruel words but he is right to by thinking like that..listening of husband word, he simply couldn't think straight.. he was hurt too beyond control...

But Bittuji... he came as a saviour and told Rk all the secrets...Bittuji is simply gem of a person ...

Madhu's libido is too low ..haha ...they even couldn't go to Rk's promotion party...Madhu is truly a nymph...

She as a teacher after this?...After this business woman, teacher? .It feels so weird...

But I must say, Balraj here. ..so true to word...he actually saved Madhu from all harassment type problems...and atlast, just gave her permission to go from there. .wow!! Didn't take advantage of her at all...I truly liked his character...

Thanks for pm Aaniya...it was a superb update ...totally loved it...but it ended(sad)...
And thanks for the dedication...
Edited by kaustavi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
unres.. great update aani... i like the way ended story.. sry for short comment as i dnt knw how to describe it anyways thx for pm and update ur other story too..
Edited by abhiya2405 - 8 years ago

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