RiShbala TS 'AvenginG yOu'||COMPLETED#12||(26/04) - Page 10

Beautiful written loved it sorry for the late comment

awesome update 😃

Emotional ending
Rk purposely hurt madhu
Granted he was lied to by his brother n the wrong pictures were published
But still he broke her for revenge
Now he knows truth he's all devistated n pleading for her to forgive n forget
But how can she ??
I myself love happy endings with both the hero n heroin uniting
But after reading story I'm stumped to which she would choose
She could forgive but I doubt she'd ever be able to forget
Awesome writing had to use tissues throughout lol
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Awesome and Emotional Ending

Thanks for pm. Happy anniversary dear. Nice story. Half knowledge is always dangerous. So is here. Rk never tried to find out the real reason of all mishappenings with sultan n create the tsunami in madhu life. Why u kept sultan name for madhu fiyonce. Ahh it was confusing. I think open end is much better option as only confessing the fault is not enough. How could madhu differentiate the truth n fakeness as he was same expressive in past too. Its quite impossible to gain trust again specially with broken heart n dreams. Really i dont find rk side impressive here that madhu should believe him again who knows if he is doing acting again as he was not satisfied with her condition. May be. Thats my thoughts only. I know i m too much negative sometime. But cant help it. Bye.

Congratulations for the new milestone.

Awesome story aani.i would like Madhu to forgive rk.i know the wound in her heart by rk will hurt her so long .but life learns us to forgive and give a chance.you know I am the one to say it better than anyone else.thankd for pm.congrats for completing 20 stories.write more

very sad rk cheated madhi with out knowing the full truth poor she n even cant truat his love n dwfame madhu poor she whether its not intentional tgat pics published but he took their private momnets pics he doesnt need to forgavness poor madhu in this she she lose everthing her love trust n also her dignity even if she love rk but she cant took back her trust n dignity nice dear thnjs for pm

it's just so perfect I love all ur stories so much

Thanks for pm...


OK...I knew from last update, something was wrong ...but this...
Rk broke her heart...tarnished her image ...that too without knowing full truth...
Yes, Rk was mislead...he hated her, wanted to revenge her...but revenging by this way...I think his half information can't be excuse for his behaviour...he could've punished her in other way...

But ...because of this, he got her...got chance to love her and earn her love...Yes, he is in pain...he is seriously regretting. ...everybody has the right of forgiveness...and most importantly I think she still loves him ...so I hope she forgives him...

Loved this story...