Rishbala TS: Mera Astitva Meri Pehchan [COMPLETED Pt 2, Pg 12]

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Wow very w'ful story...👏

Loved it ...❤️

Very well written ...⭐️

And very touchy story ...and description is superb..⭐️

Loved how Rk helped Madhu..fall in love with her and how Madhu also love Rk and built her own identity...👏

Loved Sultan here too..he is a true friend and helped his friends by every means...👏

Aww Rk-Madhu and their bundle of joy Shivi...so sweet...😳

Kudos to you to touch such topic Poorva...👏

Title is superb to . .⭐️

Thanks for the superb read..keep writing.👍🏼

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Superb ending
Brilliant story really
A true love story
Thanks for pm

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Nyc update. ..

Feeling very sad for madhu n her life...she has to suffer too much b4 she had a good life

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Ending.😊

Rishbala Love Moments were so Beautifully explained.😊

The Whole Ts was Amazing.😊

You did a Nice Job,Keep it Up.👏

Please write like this.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Amazing update and ending dear...
but u didn't gave any punishment to that Dipali...
One slap toh banta tha yaar...
finally they got their sweet family...
loved it

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janu2006

@janu2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

awesome ending..

thanks for pm dear

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purnimabansal

@purnimabansal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

superb story...
marvellous...
speechless...can't say any word

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

awesome story

loved it...

how tough madhu life is.trying to make it better by studying..

but one rk came and everything changed..

he too misunderstood her.well I can't blame him exactly can I.

it's very sad that girls are forced into such business and then they had to live with it but still other societies are going to be blame the helpless girls only for everything.

loved it

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Oh my my Poorva darling !! This has to be the lenghtest part ever I have come across in any story . But it was mind blowing , painful , sweet and romantic . I never thought that Sullu would act so mature but girl ! He was so sweet here and actually behaved like a bro to Madz . I hated RK's parents for behaving so business minded and honestly I hate such kinds of parents who value everything in terms of profit and loss rather than human emotions and heart . That part was so bad for me when Radz said that she tipped the police to conduct raid and then bailed Madz out . Instead of slapping Madz , I felt like slapping Radha for her high handed behaviour . And regarding Deepanshi , Dips and Ballu and his gang - no comments . The less I talk about these 2 sis and Ballu and his gang , the more pure your post will remain hehehe . Aww I loved my possesive Rishu and how he was hell bent in making Madz realise that she also loves him . All the romantic and sweet moments between Rishbala were so adorable and beautiful . And I loved this name Shivi and how they fought against all odds to be one soul . It was really a very beautiful story with a wonderful concept . Not every writer experiments with such hard hitting concepts , but you did that . Good story and totally enjoyed it ...