Rishbala TS: Mera Astitva Meri Pehchan [COMPLETED Pt 2, Pg 12]

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super start poorva ! Loved it. True, I can't imagine Madhu to be a sex worker. But am so proud of her. Inspite of all the hardships she faced she is so determined to be a Business Woman. RK is so understanding 😊
sultan is an impatient desperate man 😆 Mukund behind Madhu😕 ?
You have done an amazing job poorva ! Hats off 👏
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Hi! Back with final Part...

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Hi everyone.. I am back with final part..

Madhu watches Rk drives away, Her lips automatically curved into a Smile. She never in her life thought that anyone can ever help her like this and especially Rk. She thought he was a playboy and even he wants to sleep with her but he didn't. "Ouch!" Madhu shouts as someone roughly pulls her hairs. "Aunty.. What happened.. What I did?" Madhu ask in pain.
"Why are you smiling like this huh?" Geeta ask furiously. "I have seen him many times.. Are you trap him in your beauty?" Geeta asks as She Slapes Madhu hard. Madhu cries and try to push geeta away but geeta was more stronger then her and all her tries gone vail. "Just because he was rich that doesn't mean you will trap him.. I know your all dreams.. but I will never let you go. I will cut your legs. understand..." Geeta threaten Madhu.
"Geeta.. What happened?" Rashmi ask trying to pull Madhu away from Geeta's clutch.
"Tell her to behave.. And we are letting her to study that doesn't mean she can do anything..." Geeta says furiously. "You have only one relation with him and that is Sex... Mind it." Geeta shouts pushing Madhu.

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"Hi Handsome." Dipali says as She pulled chair for her and sit next to Rk and Sultan. "So how is all going." Dipali says with a sexy smile. Rk suddenly gasp loudly feeling Dipali legs crawling on his leg. "What happened Rk.." Dipali says and started caressing her leg on him. Sultan slowly looks down table and chuckles seeing His friend awakened Situation. Chuckling Sultan kicks her with full force. "Ouch!" Dipali screams jumping from her chair. "Idiot.. Can't you see my legs!" Dipali shouts furiously.
"Oh! I am sorry I was Stretching my legs." Sultan replies coolly.
"My legs! Shit.. Rk I will come later." Dipali says picking her bag and walks away without forgetting to give a sexy smile to Rk, leaving Laughing Rk and sultan.
"She irritates you a lot Right!" Sultan says laughing madly.
"Don't ask me.. She is hell irritating.. Always eat my mind.. I can't even say anything to her as she is bhabhi's Sister." Rk replies sadly as his laughter dies down.
"Poor you!" Sultan laughs loudly and got a hit on his stomach. "Sorry Sorry.. Anyway Where is Muku.." Sultan ask Rk as they walk toward their way to classroom. Rk moved his head in negative indicating he didn't know about him. "Must be Running behind Madhubala. Don't know what he find in her" Sultan says irritated.
"Don't say like that.she is a nice girl... And for you kind information Mukund went to Australia to meet his uncle." Rk says furiously and Suddenly breaks into smiles seeing Madhu coming from the other side.
"Why are you taking Madhubala side?" Sultan ask frowning.
"Shutup. Let's go now." Rk shouts pushing him inside.

Rk Disinterestly tries to listen to Professor but nothing was going in his head. Feeling board he turns his around and find Madhu sitting on last bench alone looking in pain.
Madhu tries to listen to what professor is explaining when suddenly her phone starts vibrating. Giving a quick glance to Professor she slowly takes out her to switch off when stops seeing a message from unknown number.
*What happened? U look tried.*
Frowning Madhu looks everywhere reading Message and smiles as she saw Rk waving her.
*How did u get my no.?* Madhu types with a smile.
*I am Rk. Whatever I want I'LL Get that.* Rk replied attitudly. *So What happened* Rk again send a message.
*Nothing.*
*Don't lie. You look tired.* Rk replied with concern on his face.
*I am fine.*
*No u are not, I am your friend u can tell me.*
*There was 11 Customer last night... I am tired. And my legs are paining very badly.*. Madhu replied as she looks at Him uncomfortably.
*Oh! Do you want help. Can I come?*
*No, it's ok. I will manage.*

"Rishabh! What are you doing?" Professor Sinha shouts loudly seeing Rk with mobile in his hands. Madhu looks Rk worriedly and prays to god for that he didn't check his phone otherwise everyone will got to know about her true identity. "If you were not the son of Trustee then now I would surely throw you out of class.." Professor murmured knowing full well what will happen if he throw him out. "Sit. Always irritates me." Professor says while Rk Ignored him totally.
Half an hour later, Rk got a message from Madhu.
*Sorry.*
*It's OK.* Rk replied her back leaning on Bench.
"Rk! I am asking you something!" Sultan shouts seeing Rk again on phone. Rk shakes his head and put his phone down but again his phone buzzed. "Rk did you find another friend? Or Girlfriend?" Sultan asks him. Rk look at him wide shocked while Madhu gasp silently hearing sultan and quickly throw her phone inside her bag.
"Rishabh you came.. Good. Come sit. Me and Dipanshi wants to talk." Radha says as she spot her son. Rk looks Radha and Dipanshi Bhabhi who was polishing her nails Curiously.
"What happened?" Rk ask sitting on Sofa disinterested.
"We were thinking about your marriage with Dipali." Radha says happily.
"My Sister is the best." Dipanshi says attitudly. Radha too nods her head in agreement.
"WHAT!!" Rk shouts loudly.
"She will be perfect for our family." Radha tells him proudly.
"No!" Rk shouts furiously.
"don't worry. You can marry her later.. I know you are young. You want to enjoy your life.. Now We can have only engagement and then Marriage later." Radha says while Dipanshi nods happily.
"I don't want to marry her. I don't like her.. And you can't decide that." Rk replied angrily.
"How dare you say like this.. What you think of yourself.. My sister is best." Dipanshi shouts throwing her nail polish on floor.
"Dipanshi you go. I'll talk him." Radha tells her in cold tone. Dipanshi glare Rk and walks out red in fury. "Rishabh.. Dipali is perfect.. She is rich, beautiful, smart. She is Perfect.. And she is of our Status." Radha says.
"Yeah.. Just like Dipanshi Bhabhi.. Right mom." Rk tells her getting up.
"Don't say like that.. Can't you tolerate her a little?" Radha ask all going furious. "You are going to marry her." Radha says.
"No.. Never.. Ever.." Rk replied going out of the room.
"What the think of yourself.. We will decide what is good and bad for you.. Rishabh!!" Radha shouts furiously seeing Rk climbing upstairs.

Hearing his mother blabbering outside from his room, Rk plug in his ear phones and listen to the lyrics of the songs. Rk starts checking his phone to see important message when he accidentally press calendar. Rk was clicking back but stops as Calendar was showing tomorrow's reminder 'Madhubala birthday'. Rk thinks for a minute and decided go and wish her other than sitting here and listening to Mother blabbering.
Madhu patiently waited for her customer to come but now it has been 12:00 o'clock since no one came. But she can't do anything other than waiting for men to come and have sex with her. Hearing a knock on Door, Madhu open her door and found Rk standing there with his hand behind hiding something from her. "Rk you here. Did sultan came?" Madhu ask worriedly and quickly drag him inside her house.
"No he didn't." Rk replied with a smile. "Happy Birthday!!!" Rk shouts happily giving her a small birthday gift and cake. Madhu look at Rk fully Shocked. "Madhu what happened?" Rk ask her tensely seeing her Shock look.
"What is there to celebrate my birthday!" Madhu replied disinterested.
"Why? Birthday is the best day in anyone's life." Rk ask shocked.
"Only For you people but for me its just like same normal day." Madhu says shaking her head in disbelief.
"Huh.. I am not understanding what is your problem?" Rk ask still confused with her talks.
"See Rk. Our lifes are completely different. Your Parents relations are Sacred not like My mother who used to sleep with mens. I even don't know who is my father?..." Madhu says as she looked outside. "When you came to this world your family must have celebrated your arrival but here my ma was worried for me, for my future. True she loved me but still She didn't want me. This place is different here children are born due to unprotected sex not because they are needed to complete a family... Children are considered to be shit of dirt here.." Madhu says as tears started flowing from her eyes. Rk didn't know how to reply her so he hugs her to calm her down.

As her emotions walked away, Madhu realize she was hugging Rk. She slowly moves back nervously breaking their hug. Rk sighs loudly not wanting her to leave him. Seeing awkward situation Madhu nervously looked everwhere and suddenly spot a Gift box lying on table. Madhu slowly picked a small gift. "Wo.. I brought this for you.. I thought you much be happy to have this but..." RK says sadly.
"No.. No.. I am very happy.. Thankyou for gift." Madhu replies not wanting to hurt him.
"Then Open it fast." Rk says excitedly.
"GOLD BRACELET!" Madhu shouts loudly seeing a beautiful gold bracelet with Small pieces beautifully placed on it.
"You like it?" Rk ask nervously.
"Rk! Are you mad or what? I... I.. I can't take this.. This is so expensive.." Madhu says pushing box to Rk.
"You don't liked it.. That idiot Nisha! I will not spare her.." Rk says going all angry.
"Who Nisha?" Madhu ask confused.
"My cousin. I asked her what should I gift you.. She told me this.. I shouldn't have listen to her instead that Mercedes was perfect for you." Rk says carelessly throwing bracelet on floor.
"GOD!" Madhu screams and quickly pick Bracelet from floor and securely placed it on its respective box and then put it on table. "Mercedes?? Are you out of mind!!!" Madhu shouts fully shocked. "I don't want any expensive gift.. Please.." Madhu begs nervously.
"So what do what? Tell me anything." Rk ask her curiously.
"Why you want to gift me?" Madhu ask him putting her hands on her hips.
"Urm... Wo.. You helped me nah in studies that why.." Rk replied Taking enough time to think. "So tell me.. Any wish you want to fulfil" Rk ask curiously.
"I.. I don't have any wish.. " Madhu says angrily.
"Okay.. Then.. Left cut the cake." Rk says giving her knife. Madhu smiles and takes knife and happily cuts the cake. "Happy birthday to you.. Happy. Happy birthday.." Rk sings loudly on top of his voice. Madhu panics and quickly push a big piece of cake in his mouth.
"Can you do me a favour. Can I stay here only for night. Actually I and mom had... We argued against each other. So.. I.." Rk explains her.
"You can stay here.. Don't worry." Madhu says with a smile.
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"So What future plan.." Rk ask her as they sit waiting for light to come.
"First will find a job.. Then. After some experience I will start my own.. Then.. I want to help all sex workers... And try to send all foreign to their country... Will educate then to make him stand on their own.. Or will give them good jobs.. at last.. I want to punish Balraj and his son Shekhar.." Madhu tells him in one breadth.
"Oh God! So much.. I didn't thought anything till now." Rk says fully amazed.
"And what about marriage?" Rk ask her.
"No." Madhu replied in a second. "I don't trust any men in this world.."
Next Day..
"Bhai, Now what." Rk angrily says munching Popcorn.
"Where are you?" Rohit whispers looking at Dipanshi who was busy reading magazine.
"Friend's house.. I will come back soon.. I will not die here." Rk replied as he looked at Madhu who just came out from bathroom fully fresh and looking extremely beautiful in just plain pink Salwar. Rk looks at her with a hint of Smile on his face. Madhu was indeed a very beautiful girl he have ever seen his life. She is not like other girls, She is different. And that is the only he like her.
"Rishu! I am with you.. I don't want this to happen with You just like mine.." Rohit whispers breaking Rk's thought.
"Anyway what is today's Temperature.."
"Today is Extremely Hot yaar.. I couldn't tolerate it.. Winds are blowing very fast.." Rohit tells him.
"Are you a Weather Forecaster? And whom you are taking?" Dipanshi ask frowning hearing him as she put her magazine on table.
"Nothing just talking my old friend he lives in Dubai.. There is so hot.. So.. We were just..." Rohit blabbers and hurriedly cuts the call.
"Whatever.." Dipanshi mutters flipping her mobile phone Screen.
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"let's go out." Rk tells Madhu.
"Me? Where?" Madhu ask him curiously.
"Anywhere.. It's your birthday. We will celebrate.. And watch movie..." Rk replied pulling her with him.
"Wait.. Wait. Stop the Car." Madhu shouts loudly like a kid seeing Big Temple . As the Car Stops Madhu quickly Step out without waiting for Rk. "Come." Madhu says forwarding her Hand. Rk smiles and quickly hold her Hand.
"Whose temple is this?" Rk ask her as he climb few stairs.
"Shivji.. Wait I'll bring Flowers and all." Madhu replied while Rk slowly nods.
"I come here daily..." Madhu says as they enter inside. "Come.. Sit here." Madhu says sitting near Shiv lingam.
"Where is Shivji?" Rk ask confused not finding as Shiv Idol.
"What?.. He is here only." Madhu tells him pointing at Stone Shiv Lingam. "You don't know?" Madhu ask him Shocked.
"Sorry.. I didn't know about this of Shivji." Rk replies while Madhu chuckles loudly.
Madhu gently Pours Water on Shivling while Rk looks at everything curiously. Madhu look at Rk and ask Rk to to hold her Hand as she pours. "Whenever I used to ask my mama about my father she used to say that he is my father." Madhu says happily looking at Shivling making Rk smile. Seeing Rk smiling Madhu too smiles back as they Look at each other eyes. "Let's Go." Madhu says breaking their eyelock feeling weird sensation.
Hua hai aaj pehli baar
Jo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon (x2)
Rk and Madhu walked out as they Hold each others hands unknowingly. Rk and Madhu looks each as they realize they are holding each other. Madhu blushing tries to lose grip but Rk smiling hold her hand more tightly.
Ye jaan lekar ke jaa meri
Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon..
Madhu shakes Rk as She Spot pani Puri Stole Roadside. Rk Shook his head in negative asking Madhu not to eat such a unhygienic food. Madhu frowns and poking her tongue and she run toward stole while Rk run behind her.
Madhu happily eats her Pani Puri while Rk tried his best to eat as tears fall from his eyes feeling too spicy. Madhu laughs seeing him and Make him drink water. Madhu Sympathetically looks Rk seeing red face due to spiciness.
Zameen se aasmaan tak hum
Dhoondh aaye jahaan saara
Banaa paaya nahi ab tak
Khuda tumse koi pyaara (x2)
Madhu points at Goolewala and walks toward Stole pulling Rk. Rk suck Gola and thumbs up to Madhu liking the Taste of Gola. Madhu chuckles and Throws Ice to Rk. Rk looks her shocked, fuming Rk too throws ice from his glass.
Baaton mein teri hain badmashiyan
Sab bewajah ki hain taarifiyaan
Main likh doon aasmaan par ye
Ke padh lega jahaan saara
Huaa na hoga ab koi
Yahan hum do sa dobara...
RK looks at Screen emotionally as heroine cries hugging her dead hero. Madhu rolls her and tried to console him. Rk sniffs Loudly gaining everyone furious expression. Smiling Madhu pulls Rk out with her.
Main duniya bhar ki taarifein
Tere sajde mein laaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon
(Rab se laaya hoon.. Rab se laaya hoon..)
"Rk I had a great time.. Thank you so much.." Madhu says as she step aside to let Rk enter first. Seeing Rk didn't replied Madhu ask him. "What happened?"
"Bhai called me my Dad came and he was hell furious on me.." Rk replied tensed.
"Oh! He must be angry on you.. Right?" Madhu ask him.
"He is.. Bhai told me not to come today.." Rk tells her.
"You can leave here.." Madhu says seeing Rk looking her hopefully. "Rk.. I don't want to hurt you but.. There are so many luxurious hotels.. But why you are leaving here?" Madhu ask him.
"I don't want luxurious.. I want to spend time with someone.. Sulu father's is not well so he was taking care of his father and Muku went outside.. I have no one to share my worries.. And I feel like sharing my problems with you.." Rk replies making Madhu smile.

Few Hours later.

Rk opens his eyes in frown feeling too hot, He looks and realize electricity is gone seeing dark. "Oh its so hot..!." Rk says as he looked at Madhu who was busy lighting candles light.
"Electricity is gone.. You can sit near window.." Madhu tells him looking in her book to Study. Rk nods like a obedient child and sat on sofa placed near window.

"What is that voice?" Rk ask in frown hearing sounds from other side of the wall. Madhu sits next to Rk and turns completely red hearing Mourns and groans from other room.
"I will not say anything.." Madhu says in red. Rk looks at Confused and finally realized what the voice is and chuckles loudly. Madhu hurriedly put her palm on Rk's mouth but Rk continued to fall. Madhu looks him at last she too joined in laugh.

As they Laugh, Rk looks Madhu admiringly as his heart started beating faster and Faster. He slowly brought a candle closer to her face as his hands gripped her hand. A small dim of light falls on her making Madhu extremely gorgeous. Feeling his hand Madhu looks Rk and found him looking her with full desires. Looking into his dark Madhu lost herself within itself. Rk slowly place his Palm on her Cheeks and slowly caress them. He gently tugs back her hairs behind her ears seeing them disturbing his view. Madhu grip her Dupatta tightly. Seeing her Face turning red he couldn't take it anymore and moves his lips closer to hers. Madhu closes her eyes in anticipation as she feels Rk breathe so close to her. Rk cupped her Face and slowly touched his lips with hers. As there lips Mate Something happened between them. As Passion started arising, Rk and Madhu passionately starts kissing each other while there started removing each others clothes.

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Madhu mourns feeling Rk takes her left bossom completely inside his mouth while his other Hand massages her Right bossom over her bra. Rk slowly unhook bra and her bossom jump out. Rk looks her chest for her a Second and again he takes them inside his mouth. Madhu push Rk from her chest and rolls top of him. She started kissing his body roughly while her hands slides inside his underwear. Rk groans feeling Madhu's hand on him. He closes his eyes feeling his blood flowing in perfect places. Rk pushing her a little sit on his knees and pulls down underwear showing his manhood. Madhu mourns as Rk Starts kissing her on her milky white waist . Rk couldn't take it and Quickly tear off her underwear and starts caressing and kissing between her legs. Madhu felling too much sensation and tries to hold his hand. Rk push her floor and came on top of her. Rk takes her lips in his. Madhu wrapped her legs on his waist waiting for him to come and take them to heaven. Rk holding his manhood and enter inside her. Mourning they started rocking against each other to fulfil their desires.
Madhu open her tiredly and getting she look around.

Madhu gasp loudly feeling Herself Naked on floor. Madhu put her palm on Her mouth Realizing what she had done. Quickly wearing her clothes she looks around praying to God and relieved seeing Rk is not here. She falls down on floor thinking about last night. She don't know what happened to her last night that she did this. Never in life she behaved like this, Whenever She has to sleep with anyone she just lie down on bed and let him do whatever it wants but yesterday. Now Rk will think That she is a lose girl who really wants to sleep with mens. But last night he too responded with her touches? No.. No.. It was not his fault anyone can lose his control when a girl herself throws her clothes. He must have suddenly got turn on and ended up sleeping with her. Madhu wipes her tears thinking how to explain this to Rk. But what about her? did she has any feeling for him or it was just...

"Where were you last night?" Mohan ask reading his newspaper.
"Friends house." Rk replied slowly.
"Rishabh your mom told me about Dipali and we think she is a perfect like us through your brother was against this. So we are thinking to send proposal to Dipali's family. So what's say?" Mohan ask in Business tone.
"Whatever you want." Rk mutters and walks toward his room.

Rk slowly turn on his Shower letting cold Water to spread on his body as he thinks about last night. What a blunder he did. He was the one wake up and realized what he did and run away from her. He can't see Madhu's reaction after what he did. Now what Madhu will think about him? He has risked his friendship with Madhu. Madhu must have thought he was doing this because he paid money for her to Geeta. She thought he owns her body and Silently obeyed to whatever he wanted. Rk warped towel around his waist and stand infront of mirror looking himself. He touched the marks on his abs and realize they are love bites given by Madhu. Madhu surely had done everything to fulfil his desires. Rk suddenly frowns thinking just like him Madhu had touched many mens. She probably have kissed everyone everywhere. Rk grip Basin tightly as Jealousy walked inside him.

Rk Leaning on his car waited for Madhu to come. Spotting Madhu he walked toward her. Madhu looks down seeing Rk as recollects about their last night incident. "Urm.. Mad.. Madhu.. WO.." Rk tries to say but nothing was coming out from his mouth.
"Rk.. I want to talk... with you about.. last.. night.." Madhu says tries to calm her heartbeats.
"Even I want.." Rk Says.
"Good.. I think it Was a.. mistake... We should forget that and move on in our life.." Madhu tells him taking a deap breadth.
"Hmm..." Rk slowly nods realizing she is correct.
"Bye. Then." Madhu slowly says walking away when suddenly she colided with Dipali.
"Can't you see Madhubala? Anyway I don't care. I want to talk with Rk." Dipali says irritated and pushing her she runs and hugs Rk. "I knew it.. I knew it.. You too loves me." Dipali says hugging Rk. Madhu slowly turns other side seeing them hugging and Making a fake smile she walks away.
Seeing Madhu walks away Rk shudders and push Dipali away. "What the hell.. I don't love you.." Rk says walking behind.
"Oh come on Rk.. I know you love me that's why you told your father about our marriage.. And today your parents send us marriage proposal." Dipali says coming closer to Rk.
"Oh shit.." Rk mutters jumping inside his car.
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"Why don't you accept this proposal.. Dipali is sexy yaar.. You will enjoy whole life." Sultan tells him while winking at Natasha.
"Shutup.." Rk says furiously.
"Ok ok then you can just do engagement then afterwards you can say like you both are not perfect with each other... Whatever.. Whatever.." Sultan replied lazily resting his legs on chair. "and you can just enjoy with her.." Sultan says winking.
"Ok!" Rk nods his head agreement.
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Month later.
Rk lying on his bed tries to Call but Sultan was Not giving any importance to his Call.
*BEEP BEEP*
Rk falls down his Mobile reading Sultan's Message.
*Going to Spend some Time with your sexy.. Tonight hot night : )*

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Rk hurriedly climbs the stairs of chawl to reach Madhu's house. Rk looks at the Door shocked seeing the door is locked from inside. Making his mind to brake the door Rk walks behind and with full Force he try to push the door but the door automatically opened making Rk falls down. Rk looks above And found Sultan Laughing madly while Madhu helped him to get up. "What was that?" Rk ask fully shocked.
"What do you thing.. Only you can lie." Sultan laughs Rolling on floor.
"Can someone please tell me what is happening here?" Rk ask furiously.
"Ok ok.. So it's start when.." Sultan says all going in flashback mode.
"Sultan!" Rk warns him.
"Sorry.. Ok.. So.. I was so desperate to sleep with Madhu but then They didn't allowed me.. I even tried to pay them but they didn't. But then I secretly sneeks upstairs to see who is girl with you slept.. And then Madhubala appeared making me shocked.. But then she explained me everything and even told me that you helped here.. Then.. I realized how good she is.. And I try to have fun so I messaged you to see if you will come or not.. But really Rk you impressed me you came here in 25 minutes.." Sultan says happily.
"I thought you would have..."
"What you thought I am too horny men who is so desperate to have sex? Even I have a heart.. Sultan never sleeps with a girl who is not interested in sex.." Sultan says touching his chest where his heart is beating.
"Sorry." Rk says hugging him. Rk suddenly felt a huge burden is lifted from his chest. When he read message he thought Sultan slept with Madhu.
"So still you are a virgin?" Sultan ask curiously. Rk and Madhu look at each other and looks down.
"It means you both did?" Sultan asks shocked. Rk slowly nods.
"I think you should leave now." Madhu says uncomfortably.
"Okay.. But if you want anything call me.. I am like your brother." Sultan whispers making Rk shocked. "Come now let her study.." Sultan murmured pulling Rk.
"Sultan.. In just half an hour you become her brother?" Rk ask still can't digest the fact.
"Why I am still shocked." Rk shouts.
"She is my sister now.. After all You love her." Sultan says as he parks his car outside Rk's house.
"What!" Rk shouts.
"What! You don't?.." Sultan ask shocked.
"No! Why you thought I love her?" Rk ask him. "Are you a love Guru?" Rk ask him coming out from Car.
"No.. But Seeing you I thought so..." Sultan tells him.
"No!" Rk murmured walking inside his house.
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Weeks later.
"Heard that song several times yaar.." Sultan replies Rk he plugged out earphones.
"Hi Madhu." Rk turns with a frown and looks at Mukund who was talking with Madhu.
"Yes!" Madhu replied.
"WO actually you know na.. I couldn't attend classes because I went to Australia to meet my family.. So could you please explain me." Mukund explains Madhu.
"Yeah Sure." Madhu says with a smile. Mukund Smiles and pulling his chair sit next to Madhu while Madhu starts explaining him. Rk fumes and again looks them hearing their laugh. He knew Mukund just wanted to sit otherwise he didn't care about his studies.
Not taking anymore, Rk walks and throwing his books on Madhu's Table he pulls a chair and sits. "Mukund.. You didn't talk with us.. And what is this? You are studying." Rk ask making a Shocked face. "Come on yaar.." Rk says pulling Mukund.
"But I want to Study.. Did you forgot our final exams are coming.." Mukund says irritated and pushed Rk.
"Rk.. Stop it.." Sultan says pulling Rk.
"I don't care.." Rk says gripping his hand.
"But I care.. Understand.. Don't irritate me go now.." Mukund says angrily.
"Mukund, Rk... Stop fighting." Madhu whispers seeing them looking each other murderously.
"Mukund.." Rk furiously punched Mukund.
"Rk what are you doing.." Madhu shouts furiously. Mukund was about to hit Rk but seeing Madhu he stops. "What happened to you?" Madhu asks.
"Madhu he was flirting with you." Rk says glaring Mukund.
Madhu closes her \ in irritation. She don't know why he is behaving like this. After what happened between them, Now she just wanted to be away from him. She was getting attracted toward Rk, was trying her level best to ignore Rk but he!.. Why he caring for her so much?.. Pushing her thoughts away Madhu angrily whispered, " So What? Rk be in your limits.. And please don't interrupted in my life." Madhu says irritated now.
Rk look at Madhu fully Shocked. He didn't expect this from her. True he did wrong and he wants to make everything normal but she! Fuming in anger Rk Shouts, " Do whatever you want to do.. Now I don't care.. Go to hell."
"Sultan! Leave me.." Rk shouts angrily as Sultan brought him to a empty classroom.
"You love her." Sultan whispers amazed.
"Sultan.." Rk frowns hearing him.
"You truly love her.. And that is why you are jealous of Mukund.." Sultan says thinking deeply.
"It's not like that..."
"It is.. Many times I have seen you watching Madhubala.. And that day when I messaged you you came there hurriedly.. And the way you fought with Mukund.. I am sure you are fall for her.." Sultan replies.
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"Rk, I am happy that you came here." Dipali says drinking her wine. "I always knew.. We are made perfect for each other." Dipali says as she slides her hands on Rk who was lost in his thoughts.
"I am sure you are fall for her." Sultan words are continuingly ringing in his eyes.
"I can't believe this.." Dipali says.
"Hmm.." Rk ignores her and drinking he try to listen the lyrics of the song sung by artist on stage.
Kya tujhe ab ye dil bataye
Tujhpe kitna mujhe pyaar aaye..
"Anyway let's dance." Dipali whisper hotly in his ears and pulls him toward dance floor.
Aansuon se likh doon main tujhko
Koi mere bin padh hi naa paaye...
Dipali and Rk starts dancing in rhythm. Dipali with a sexy smile pulls Rk more Close. Rk smiles seeing Madhu dancing with him and Winks her.
"I love you.. Handsome." Dipali whispers. "I can't take it anymore.. Let's Go somewhere else." Dipali says naughtily.
Yoon rahun chup, kuch bhi na bolun
Barson lambi neendein so loon...
Jin aankhon mein tu rehta hain..
Sadiyon tak wo aankhen na kholun..
Mere ander khudko bhar de
Mujhko mujhse khaali kar de (x2)..
Dipali Close the Door with her leg and pulling Rk close she starts kissing him on his neck. She push him on Bed and came on top. Rk rolls above Madhu and kisses her with passion.
"Rk.." Dipali mourns making Rk back in Sense. Rk looks her Shocked, Pushing her from his grip and runs. "What happened?" Dipali asked him shocked.
"I.. I I want to meet.. Her.." Rk says amazed.
"Who?" Dipali ask angrily.
"Madhu.. I.." Rk says.
Jis shaam tu naa miley
Woh shaam dhalti nahi
Aadat si tu ban gayi hai
Aadat badalti nahi..
Kya tujhe ab ye dil bataye
Tere bina kyun saans na aaye
Aansuon se likh doon main tujhko
Koi mere bin padh hi naa paaye
Mere ander khudko bhar de
Mujhko mujhse khaali kar de (x2)
Madhu stand there still as a men kisses her. He pushed her roughly on bed and come above her. Tears fell from Madhu's eyes as She thinks about Rk.
Haathon se girne lagi
Har aarzoo har duaa
Sajde se main uth gaya
Jis pal tu mera hua (x2)
Rk drives his Car as fast as he could to reach his Madhu. He ignores Traffic signal and drives harshly.
"Madhu!" Rk breaks door and push the men away from naked Madhu. Rk punchs him hardly. "Don't dare to touch her.." Rk warns as he walks toward Madhu.
Kya tujhe ab ye dil bataye
Kyu teri baahon mein hi chain aaye
Aansuon se likh doon main tujhko
Koi mere bin padh hi naa paaye
Mere ander khudko bhar de..
Mujhko mujhse khaali kar de (x2)
Aa...
O o aa o..
Madhu runs toward rk and cries clutching bedsheet Rk possessively hugs tightly Madhu and kisses her face. "I love you." Rk whisper still hugging her. Madhu smiles, " I lov..." Madhu stops as Geeta Words echoed in her ears.
"Just because he is rich that doesn't mean you will trap him in your beauty.. I know your all dreams..You have only one relation with him and that is Sex... Mind it."
Madhu Pushes Rk away from her. "Get out." Madhu shouts.
"Madhu?" Rk looks Madhu shocked and again try to pull her close.
"I said get out." Madhu furiously shouts.
"Why you are doing this? Don't you love me?" Rk ask her hurtly.
"No I don't love you.." Madhu whispers looking away.
"Don't say like this.. I know you love me." Rk says Madhu's face closer.
"I don't.. Get out. My customers are waiting." Madhu shouts pointing at door.
"Don't you dare.." Rk warns her. "I will kill them. You are mine." Rk says possessively.
"What do you think of yourself.. You paid of me many times that doesn't mean I am yours.." Madhu replied. "Out!!" Madhu shouts pushing Rk out. "Please Balraj will kill me.. Please." Madhu begs. Rk looks her furiously and walks out.

1 Day later..
In Morning, Madhu looks outside and still find Rk standing there leaning on his car. Madhu looks him as tears fall down from her eyes. Rk spot her and came forward to talk. Madhu climbs down stairs but ignoring him she runs as fast as she could out of the chawl. Rk runs behind her but Madhu smartly disappeared from his view.
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Madhu walks inside her college and found everyone staring her. Ignoring everyone Whispering, Laughing, Madhu walks but stops seeing Students gathering around on notice board. As She came near board everyone gives her disgusting look and stand far from her, Madhu looks shocked seeing board as tears fall from her eyes. Her Picture was there in which she was wearing her yesterday night Vulgar dress and down there it was written F**K me.
"Madhubala Malik, Principal called you."
Rk parks his car on middle of the college gate and runs inside. "Mukund, where is Madhu." Rk ask spotting Mukund.
"Don't ask me about that B***h" Mukund says disgustingly.
"What the hell.." Rk roars loudly.
"Look there what that B***h is.." Mukund says pointing on notice board. Rk pushes him and runs toward notice board. Rk furiously frowns and throws the paper. "Who did this?" Rk shouts loudly. Everyone shudders seeing Rk's anger. "You tell me.. Who did this." Rk ask pulling someone coller.
"I don't know.. We just came here and saw this.." He replies worriedly.
"Sir please sir.. Don't rusticate me.. Please sir I beg you.. I will die.." Madhu cries as she fold her hand infront of principal.
"Sorry Madhubala. We can't let you continue in this university.. Our college reputation will be spoiled.. Sorry." Principal replies. Madhu cries and falls down.
"Why are we even talking with her.." One of the Professor says.
"I won't leave." Madhu says still crying.
"Throw her out.." Another Professor shouts.
"Mam.. Please don't do this.." Madhu cries as professor take her out. She throws her but Madhu could fall down a strong pair of hands gripped her tightly.
"Dare not." Rk threaten them.
"Rishabh you stay out from this.." Principal tells him.
"I will not." Rk says.
"You don't know anything about her." Professor replies.
"I know everything about her.. And I love her." Rk shouts furiously. Everyone gasp hearing him.
"Are you out of your mind." Principal shouts.
"Yes I am.. Madhu will not leave this college.. And its an order." Rk shouts furiously.
"How dare you.." Principal shouts.
"I will sue this college.. If you don't let her continue in college" Sultan threats them coming from behind.
"Rishabh think about college reputation." Principal says getting irritated.
"Reputation.. What reputation? Throwing a brilliant student from a college.. A girl who faced several hardship in her life.. Did you forget when she brought trophy to this college which was never won by any student from our collage.. You even said you are proud of her.. And now shame on you all?" Rk says furiously holding Madhu's hand. "She has to do that to earn to save herself.. She had no option.. But by rusticating her you are doing worst.. "
"Whatever you want to say I don't care.." Principal shouts.
"you can't rusticate her without any valid reason.. And when academics are going to end and only exams are left.. Ask any of the students here if Madhu ever did wrong? Did anyone know about her.. She didn't told anyone about her.. You all should be proud of her.. " Rk angrily says.
"Rishabh what will other students think.. What we will say to there parents?" Professor asks.
"Somehow he is correct.. Madhu helped me many times.." Adi says.
"Yeah.. She worked so hard." Kavya says from behind.
"So Mr. President of student association.. What would you like to say.." Rk ask turning to Vaibhav.
"I think Rk is correct.." Vaibhav replies thinking. "Madhu will study here.. Otherwise we all students will backoff from exams.." Vaibhav tells Principal warningly. Rk looks Principal curiously.
" You don't have to..I think.. We can let her.. Continue." Principal tells walking away.
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"Madhu. stop.." Rk shouts running behind Madhu.
"Rk.. Don't do this.." Madhu replied running in full speed.
"Sultan hold her.." Rk shouts spoting Sultan. Sultan hurriedly caught her tight. Madhu Struggles from his grip. Rk came with a smrik and hold her hand. "Come." Rk says opening car's door. Madhu tries to run but rk hold her tight and drag her inside car.
"Stop this.." Madhu shouts.
"I know you love me.." Rk whispers pulling her cheeks.
"I don't!" Madhu says pushing him.
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"Hello Aunty.." Dipali says entering Kundra Mansion.
"Hello beta. How are you." Radha wished throwing her file on Table."Dipanshi went to boutique." Rk tells her.
"Aunty I didn't came here to meet her. I want to meet you.." Dipali says. "Aunty.. Rk don't love me.. He loves someone else.." Dipali says with a sad smile.
"What!" Radha shouts frowning.
"Yes.. He loves someone else. Her Name is madhubala.."
"Who is her father.. What he do... she is from our status. Right?" Radha started firing her questions.
"I.. Aunty.. Madhubala is a orphan. And she is a.. Sex worker." Dipali says.
"What the hell!!!" Radha shouts getting up. "Mohan!" Radha shouts running toward Her room.
"Rk is only Mine! Madhubala.. What do you thought of yourself.. The day Rk said your name I realized he loves you and I asked my men to stalk you and he find everything about you.. I was the only one who placed your photo on notice board.. I thought principal will rusticate you but Rk! But now Radha aunty will not spare you." Dipali says evily.
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Madhu take a deep breath not finding Rk around her chawl. After a lot of pleading, Crying, Begging, Fighting and Slapping he went away that also because his mother had a asthma attack. But somehow she knew he will back so.
Few hours later.
"It's a Police raid!" Someone shouts from outside running. Madhu gasp hearing him and quickly wears her clothes and Men who was sleeping with her run away partially naked. "Arrest!" Inspector shouts and A lady constable appears and handcuffed Madhu. Madhu never objected nor cried as she knew somehow she was incorrect.
"I think Balraj didn't payed to police this time." Someone whispers.
"Madhubala.. You got bail." Lady inspector says opening lockup gate.
"Who?" Madhu ask her.
"Radha kundra." She says. "She is waiting outside."
Madhu slowly walks out and find a Expensive car standing infront of police station. Constable points her and walks inside. Madhu stand there confused And worried.
A women of Mid Fifties came out of the car wearing expensive saree and jewellery. She comes and slaps Madhu hard on her face. "You B***h how dare you! What do you think of yourself? Trying to trap my son... Today I just send you all to police station but tomorrow I will do worse than this.. Understand! Just go from here." Radha says and pushed her.
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"Madhu! How you got bail?" Rashmi ask spotting Madhu. Madhu ignores her and run toward her door. Ignoring knocks on Door Madhu falls on the bed crying.
"Shivji! Why are you doing this to me.. I was happy in my life.. Then why are you doing this." Madhu shouts looking above.
Half an hour later.
Madhu suddenly open her eyes as someone ruffles her hairs and she find Rk there sitting on bed with her head on his lap. "Rk? How you get inside?" Madhu ask shocked.
"Here? Just like I enter inside your heart." Rk says kissing her on cheeks.
"Rk!" Madhu warns him getting up from his lap.
"I love you." Rk replied with a smile.
"Your Mother..."
"I know what she did.. They lied me that Mom had attack and they locked me inside but Sulu helped me.. Then I came here and Rashmi aunty told me everything.. I am sorry for what my mom did." Rk says with full regret.
"Hmm.."
"Okay so let's marry." Rk says excitedly. "And then after few years I want a baby.. Probably one because I know you want to fulfil your dreams but then I want a girl.. Okay?" Rk whisper in her ears after wearing his clothes. Madhu slightly blushes hearing him as she thought about them with their baby girl but then controlling herself she acted.
"What! I.. Are you mad!" Madhu shouts shocked.
"Madhu you love me right.. Don't dare to say no." Rk says with a Shrug.
"I.. Don't." Madhu slowly walks back.
"You..." Rk Walks toward her until Madhu got hit with wall. Rk slowly smiles and leans down taking her lips In his.
Rk slowly snuggle Closer to Madhu after their passionate love Making. Madhu slowly sniffs showing her back to Rk. "Why are you crying?" Rk ask getting up.
"I love you." Madhu whispers pushing him away.
"Then why are you crying?" Rk ask cupping her face.
"You will never be happy with me.. Neither this society nor your family will accept our relation.. And everyone will say I married you because you are rich." Madhu tells him sobbing loudly.
"I don't care for anyone except you."
"But I... Rk I am not pure. So many mens have touched me.. !" Madhu replied.
"You are pure from your heart." Rk says kissing her forehead.
"Rk! What about society!"
"Where why that society when you was raped? When you was torched.. When you are struggling.. They are nothing infront of you..." Rk ask angrily. "It's 03:13 now.. Tomorrow be ready we are going to get married because I know mom and Dad are surely gonna do something." Rk says kissing her.

Madhu hearing a loud bang on door opens it and find Geeta standing there murderously. Geeta grabbed her hair and with full force drag her to there house.
Geeta furiously pushed her on floor. Madhu look above and find Balraj and his Son Shekhar sitting on Sofa. "Welcome!" Balraj says evilly throwing his glass of whiskey on floor. "You b***h.. What you did.. And why Radha kundra get bail.." Balraj ask her grabbing her face. "Say!" Balraj shouts loudly seeing her struggling to find words. "And don't dare to say I don't know.. There is something.." Balraj ask her.
"One men always used to come to meet her.. I saw her once smiling at him." Geeta says.
"You idiot women.. Why you didn't told me before?" Balraj ask furiously. "Because of you all our customer and our womens were caught by police and even beaten.. I have to pay triple money to police.. Now who will pay. Your mother?" Balraj says beating Madhu with her stick.
"Just cut her into pieces and throw her somewhere.." Geeta says frowning.
"No no no.. We can't. Why to waste her body we will sell here to foreigners.." Balraj says thinking.
"No! Please don't.. I love Rk." Madhu begs.
"How dare you! You b***h!" Shekhar shouts picking a glass piece from floor and showing her. "I will cut you. Dad.. Before you sell her let me have a pleasure to have one night with her.." Shekhar ask grabbing her hair.
"take her.. But be gentle." Balraj replies. "And tell someone to throw Rashmi's body somewhere."
"No!" Madhu shouts crying loudly hearing him.
"Silent!" Shekhar shouts taking her to bedroom.
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Madhu stood there emotionless looking at Balraj who was taking a bag of money from a man in exchange of her. "Here! Take your girl." Balraj says pushing Madhu toward him. Balraj chuckles loudly and picking up bag. He suddenly frowns feeling someone behind him. Madhu looks behind Balraj and cries happily seeing Police.
"Hands up!" Police commissioner shouts. Balraj tries to run but eventually got caught by inspector.
"Madhu!" Rk shouts coming out from Trishna's house with sultan and trishna behind him. Madhu runs and happily hugs him.
"Arrest them." Commissioner shouts and walked toward Madhu. "Are you fine?", Madhu slowly nods still hugging Rk. "It's late. Tomorrow I will come again for your Statement.." Commissioner says.
"How.. You?" Madhu ask them.
"Thanks to Trishna!" Rk says smiling. "She heard everything.. I was somewho felt something is wrong when I came I didn't find you I asked Trishna.. She told me everything.. Sultan's uncle is Police Commissioner.. We informed him about this.. But then we are all hide inside trishna's house and waited for them to sell you.. And now you are free." Rk says happily.
"Thanks." Madhu sobs and hugs Sultan and trishna.
"Can we go to my house now? I am hell tried.. Whole night I running here and there.." Sultan mourns loudly.
"Let's go.. Soon to be Mrs. Kundra?" Rk ask pulling Madhu close. Hearing him Madhu shyly nods.
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8 years later.
Rk lazily opens his eyes and turns to look his wife who was soundly sleeping hugging her pillow. Rk rolls toward her and seeing a tiny slit on her top Rk slowly pokes his finger inside and starts caressing her waist."Rk!" Madhu mourns feeling sleepy.
"Turn on?" Rk whispers in her ears. Madhu gently push him away.
"She is sleeping!" Madhu tells him still closing her eyes.
"She is not here.." Rk says.
"What! Where this naughty girl run away?" Madhu shouts getting up from bed.
"Chill biwi.. Chill.. Let her enjoy with her Sulu pulu uncle.." Rk says pulling her close to kiss. "Nowadays you not giving any importance to your husband.." Rk says pouting. Madhu smiles and gently kneels down.
"Can I see her." Madhu ask him after there kissing session was over. Rk slowly nods and within a second his wife disappeared from his view. Rk chuckling falls down thinking about his wife. After marrying each other when they went to his house, somehow he knew what hungama his family will create and they did except his brother, his mother cried his father disown him but he didn't care. He went from there holding his wife's hand. After clearing their exams he, Madhu and sultan started their own business. Now they there business is doing all great then they ever expected. And After 4 years they blessed with a baby girl. Shivi. Madhu named there daughter after shivji as believes Shivji have given all happiness in her life. Through their is some guilt inside her, Madhu feels she snatched Rk from his family but he didn't felt that. She even started NGO who helped Sex worker and kids to make their life better.
"come now!" Madhu says dragging her daughter.
"Mama!" Shivi shouts frowning. "Papa! Mama didn't let me play with that dog." Shivi tells him pouting.
"Rk she was playing outside gate. What if someone kidnap her?" Madhu tells. After living 22 year in such place Madhu had heard so many about kidnapping girl and selling them outside this country. Madhu was hell worried for their daughter and that is the only reason Madhu is possessive for Shivi.
"Shivi.. You know na.. We have to go to award ceremony. Your mama is going to get award .." Rk says picking Shivi in his arms. Madhu was going to get Best Women achievers for her work.
"Yes papa. Papa when I will be big even I will get award?" Shivi ask excitedly.
"Even my princess will get award.. Now.. Let's get ready." Rk says putting Shivi down on bed.
"Okay! I will bring my fork!" Shivi says excitedly running toward her luggage.
"Are you happy we came here?" Rk ask Madhu.
"I am.. Rk. You should meet your parents.." Madhu says gently. 7 years later he and Madhu shifted to Delhi but as Madhu was getting Award so they came to Mumbai for few days. But then they are in touch with Rohit.
"Will see.." Rk replied with a Shrug.
"Why can't you hate him.." Madhu ask angrily.
"I can't.. You gave me everything I want.." Rk replied happily kissing her.

Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago

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lovRishbala

@lovRishbala

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Res unres

Me first 🥳

So happy

Filled with mixed emotions

And loved the ending

Awesome update

I am fill with pride because of rk

He is the that any guy in this world will wish for , he is very understanding and proud of sultan as well

Every dream has its accomplishment at madhu achieved and rk is a very understanding as he not like other egostic people

Dipali is really very evil she will have to pay for her deeds

Rk's brother is also very kind not like like his parents and wife

This rk took forever to realise his love for madhu even sultan realised before him

The scene was also very funny where rk reached in 25 mins

Felt very sad for madhu but at last she got what she deserved

Rk really fought for his love

Loved ur guts to put light on such topic proud of myself that I am reader of such a great and innovative writer with such a great skill to write

Keep writing such updates

Thanks for pm

Edited by lovRishbala - 9 years ago

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

I seriously wonder how could someone be like Rk with such a big heart to marry a sex worker... Sorry..dont get me wrong... I know madhu was forced...but she could have tried to fight back... She got the opportunity to go out & study and all... Thn she could have easily got herself some decent job & fight back those evil people... She was weak in that place... She just like her mother, made sleeping with men her life... If she wanted money to study then she could someother job... Not this... She could have seek police help... She did nothing of that sort...

I feel sorry for madhu & i seriously wish no girl shld be put in her state...

Well she suffered a lot in her life... But gladly got a nice man & got settled in her life peacefully with him & their child shivi...

I wont blame Rk's family... They forcing to marry dipali was wrong... But not accepting to marry madhu was understandable...

It was a different try by u... I appreciate that... Though i felt their love was unacceptable...

What rk did to madhu was noble... And praise worthy...

Thanks!

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago

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..snow_flake..

@..snow_flake..

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Sorry for delay yaar..
Finally I read it.. 😛
It was an awesome update.. 😊

Edited by ..snow_flake.. - 9 years ago

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

its quite a roller caoster ride😊
phew so much happenned
glad to know they r finally together

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poojitha96

@poojitha96

Navigator

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Awesome ending yar

Really a heart touching story

You very well described The felling of rishbala

Tq for the pm

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

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Unres

First of all a standing ovation to you! For writing this amazing story 😃 Madhu madhu she made us proud. She is truly amazing! Very happy that RK saved her from the horrible world she was living in. All the scenes you portrayed were so scary. No women should experience this nightmare !

Dips is truly evil and vile. How i hate her 😡

Sullu bro super ! You are not that desperate 😆

Happy to see Madhu getting to live her life !

Thanks for PM !

Edited by vishuv - 9 years ago