Rishbala TS: Mera Astitva Meri Pehchan [COMPLETED Pt 2, Pg 12]

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Different and bold concept yaar!!! True that can't imagine madhu but instead of showing rk saving her from there u actually showed the reality!!

I hate this sultan!! Despo cheap person! But yaar rk is no less but glad that he saw madhu and changed his mind!

I loved the first part!!

Lol I didn't first see its ts and I was searching for next part!!

Please continue soon!! No long waiting please!

Thanks for pm

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Congrats for new story.. Different and intresting concept.. Waiting for next part...

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bianyamen

@bianyamen

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

I salute you and your writing 👏.. the concept is new and interesting

eager to know how it goes from here 😉

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Interesting story
Eagerly waiting for nxt update

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Amazing story.

Different, emotional and very touching storyline. Do continue soon

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Diff concept... & liked it...

Nice dear...

cont.. soon..

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manna43

@manna43

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Superb start.Madhu is a sex worker yes can't imagine.But u write so convincingly her hardships that I love her determination to become a businesswoman by coming out from that shit.Rk is a nice boy here quite understanding.

Love the concept.

Thanks for pm.

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Awesome updt Poorva.. I was Rofling when seeing sultan, rk ran upstair..saying he will do more rounds with her.. & aftr hearing madhu's story he was sniffing like a baby🤣 u mixed funny element in such serious topic.. Well written..👏 continue soon..