RiShbala TS 'FITOOR' ||COMPLETED @PG.38|| (20/07) - Page 4

Hello peeps...!! thanks a lot.. for ur responses on this story.. :)) i have replied to all comments but yet again in no praticular order.. its all messed upto pg 9... 😆 😆 😆 well.. u guyz were concerned abt Rk's parents that whether they are alive.. or dead.. & even became ghost... lol.. so no they are all well & good...

Here is next part.. Plzzz do leave ur response in form of LIKEs & CoMmENTs... i will send pm of this one & damn you^ updates together to all... 😛

FITOOR

PART-| (CONTINUES)

You have noo idea.. how good it feels To waKe uP eVerY mOrning Knowing Ur miNe & Am Urs...

.."Umm.. Then where is ur parents' the lil girl asked
"i dont knw" he replied
"Donr knw..?? Then how come u here.."
"we live in mumbai.. We came here 3 days back..Mom dad said me to attend spring festival in auditorium.. In which the havoc happened a lil while ago.. & the went to meet the doctor somewhere in the hall" he ended
"ohh.. Thats why u were alone in the hall" she absorbed the information
"yeah..& u too"
"Noo.. Am part of spring festival association.. How do u think i knw all the steps of the song..?"she said slyly.
Realisation drawn on him "now i get it.. U are a part of the group.. But as they said.. Tiny you..!!"He teased her again
"yeah whatever.. I"ll grow up soon" she said & he agreed nodding his head.
"So.. U have no idea.. Where ur parents are NoW"
"No" he said getting tensed.
"dont worry.. Lets get to my parents.. Then they will get u to ur parents" she said getting idea.
"okk.. I dont have any other way out either"
"hmm" she hummed.
"whatz ur name.. Btw" she asked after sometime
"Rishabh.. Rishabh kundra"

She nodded.
"Nyc bracelet.. Btw" he complimented
"Thanks.. Its my fav.. I love these stars" she said gleefully pointing at the stars on her bracelet.
"i too lyk it.. Shining STARS" he said looking at her bracelet.
"There.. We reached" she declared merrily & rum to her home taking Rishabh with her, narrating Her parent's rishabh's part of story.. While he stood there silently..


.."Do u knw ur parent's number baby..?" Padmini.. The lil girl's mom cooed him.
"yeah.. I knw" He said getting comfortable at padmini's motherly gesture.
"Good Rishabh.. Tell me.. I"ll contact them" shamsher said & dialed the number.
"Rishsbh.. I have talked with ur parents.. They are safe & they are at hotel Residence now.. Letz go... I"ll drop u there." Shamsher said caressing rishabh's head & rishabh nodded & smiled thankfully at him.
They begins to walk out but Rishabh stopped on his tracks, & looked back at the girl, who is standing there smiling brightly at him. He too cant resist & gave her his famous dimpled smile.
"Bye... Take care.."She waved.
"Bye... Ermm.. Whtz ur name.. I forgot to ask..!!" He said scratching his head at his stupidity.
"heheee.." She giggled "Madhubala.. My name..!!"
"Madhubala... Ahaan..!!" 10 years old Rishabh Smirked & leaves from there, locking up all these beautiful moments in his heart..❤️
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2014______SHIMLA


Kaise suni tune meri khamosi...
O parvardigara..!
(how did u listen to my silent wish... O parvardigara..)


Its getting dusk.. & a car is running through the deserted road... Light gently breeze caressing the shiny hairs of the Guy ,driving the car. Fitoor song playing on Fm
Just like the slight gentle breeze, a slight gentle smile is playing on his lips, listening to the song.

After 10 years he is Back on the Same Road from which his Journey of FitOor started. He is on his way to Luxor Auditorium, the Same Auditorium he came years back. The Spring Festival is going onn.. The same festival he once attended years back. His Heart holding the ever Longing wish to see her... Her.. The Same Girl he met years back.
Years back, riahabh took leave from madhubala.. Form shimla.. But he cant ever take leave from her memories..her tiny dancing form..her innocence..her gleaming eyes..her smile..her holding his Hands..her immature-mature talks..her helping nature..her..the Whole of her.
He can never get over her. Infact in all these years, his hidden feelings has grew more stronger. He adore her.
After coming back he lost all contacts with shimla & her.. Madhubala.. But his heart never left her. Being a child he cant reach her.. With time Madhubala became his most beautiful dream in his heart. As he grew up, he got connected to social networking site & came across Madhubala's dancing institution page ^Junoon Institution-- shimla.. He tried to track her down but wasnt successful as in that page only madhubala's name was mentioned as a member but no other information.. Seems like she isnt active in social networking site.
In all these years..She has became his Fitoor. He can think of her but cant go to her.. Coz there is no future.. No future of him.. No future of them. No matter how much he want.. He cant change the fact & his Fate. From the age of 9 his heart problem started. He heart is weak.. Weak enough to destroy him & his future. That year also, 2004 he & his parents went to shimla to meet Dr.Sultan, to discuss Rishabh's health. Doctor said with time his heart would deteriorate.. & would become ineffective. Only way out is heart transplant, but that holds a grave risk , as if Rishabh's body dont accept donor's heart then thing would take worst turn. He might die. Since then Rk's parents are busy in arranging funds, consulting doctors, finding donor who can give him his/her heart. And he definitely cant drag his dream, his madhubala, in his uncertain messy life.
He decided to admire her only & never to meet her again but with time he cant stand fix on his decision & Now He Is On His Way To See Her.
"There is no harm in seeing her once.. I wont meet her" he thought sadly but content.
He got to know that she will perform today so he is here in shimla.
"They said am tiny" he chuckled remembering her complaint in her baby voice.
He parked his car Car in parking lot & anxious, curious, rishabh steadily walked inside the dimlitted hall holding all his old memories & making place for new memories.


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"Ye fitoor mera.. mujhko laya hai tere kareeb...
(this craziness of mine brought me to you)...

p.s ignore spelling mistake & also ignore Dr.Sultan ... lol.. i knw its hard to digest...lol...

Plzzz dont forget to llyk & comment.. 😛 😛 😃

Aaniya congrats on the new story.

Sooo cutee.

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

First of all Congrats with another story of yours👏👏[/DIV

Thank yiu so much ishu..
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[DIV]Secondly Thanks for dedicating this chappy to me😳I am obliged😳😳Dil forest forest ho gaya mera😆😆

Pleasure is all mine... Dil forest.. Hahaa.. Kya baat.. Kya baat.. Kya baat..!!

Thirdly this story was so so so cute😳😳😳

This song is one of the current song in my playlist and I actually love this song😳
Actually i heard this song in a function.. & i cant think of anything else than rishbala..
😳😳Aww that line was so cute when small Rishu was swaying his legs since he is small and his legs didn't reached the floor😳😳

Small lil kids.. Are like that only.. Cute..

What😲😲😲Earthquake... But it played its card well By making Rishbala meet each other😆ROFL🤣🤣🤣
Hehe.. Yeah.. U see rishbala use evry element of earth..
camel's nest😆😆😆This is EPIC

Hehe.. I too dont know froom where i came...

Gosh😲😲😲These 2 kiddos are so smart than their age😆😆😆The deserted road dialogue and that life dialogue by Rishu proved it that these both kiddos are quite intelligent😛😛😛

So what is the truth about Rishu's parents??? I mean in the beginning of the story he says that he doesn't know where his parents are?? And he says the same thing at the end when Madz asks him about his parents. Plz whatever you have planned just make sure that you don't kill his parents😆😆Or are they dead and are ghosts or there is something else to it???
Cool. Girl.. ! Chalo agreed to u..Rk's parents is all good.. But they dont have must part in this...

It was an intriguing start and a cute one😳😳Update soon and when I say soon then it means SOON and yes update Damn You TS also😆😆

yeah.. Yeah.. I know ur soon means S O O N..🤣 but am one lazy lad🤣
Thanksyou so much for reading .. & this lovely coomments..!!

Hello aaniya here is the third part comment of your first update😉

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Aaniya congrats on the new story.

Childhood love story of Rishbala that's interesting.

What's with Rishu parents, are they there or no coz he does not know about them.

These two are too cute, so young then too lost in each others eyes.

Continue soon, shall be waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the PM dear.

thank you so much ananya...!! No worries.. Rk's parents r safe & sound.. Hehe ... Rishbala are pda couple naa.. Thatz y lost in each other eyes.. Thank you are coming.. & reading..!!

Originally posted by: RM14

<font color="#cc0000">Wow congratz for your new story Aaniya..🤗🥳</font>

<font color="#cc0000">i am so happy for you dear..😃 and how can i forget that you shared your idea of writing with me..😳 awwthanks s lot for the dedication..🤗love you..❤️</font>

<font color="#cc0000">feeling like a celeb ..😎 </font>

<font color="#cc0000">but really proud of you..</font>

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Thank you so much deepti.. Being in forum.. U r always there.. We met in ur rishbala thread.. & u are always supporting through..
color="#cc0000">now coming to the story ..</font>

<font color="#cc0000">superb start and just superb update dear..👏 👏</font>

<font color="#cc0000">the two kids just wow..⭐️</font>

<font color="#cc0000">so damn cute ..in love with these two..❤️</font>

<font color="#cc0000">loved how you described it all..b'fully written⭐️</font>

<font color="#cc0000">eager to know what will happen now..😛</font>

<font color="#cc0000">waiting for next part..😉its interesting ..</font>

<font color="#cc0000">and ya thanks for pm.😃</font>

<font color="#cc0000">keep writing.👍🏼</font>

am so happy.. That u like it.. The flow of the story too.. Thank you so much for coming & reading...!!

Awesome and Cute start of the story

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

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Superb start😊

thanks dear...!!😊