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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy New year
Wonderful update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start.hhilarious conversation.want to knw wat happens next.please please update soon
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Thanks for your comments guys ! This part is a bit lengthy so I hope the story doesn't get boring .
P.S. - I am writing in train so ignore all types of errors .




Last Part


"Still you might know where to go after running from your house like your friend's house or your boyfriend's house"


"I don't have a boyfriend and I don't want to go to any of my friend's house".


Suddenly he puts the brake, making me tumble forward


"You don't have a boyfriend??" , He asked me surprised.


"Are you deaf?"


"No... I mean... I thought that a beautiful girl like you must be having a boyfriend".


"Do you have a girlfriend? Even you are handsome", I asked him the same question


"No madamji I don't have a girlfriend"


Oh wow ... I don't know but his negative answer made me so damn happy. I feared for a yes but thanks heaven, he said that he doesn't have a GF. Wait...why the hell I am feeling so happy when he said he doesn't has a GF??? Oh Madz don't pressurize your brain so much.


"See just like you even I don't have a partner. Nowadays beauty doesn't matter. Trust & intention matters.", I said with a thought


"True", Madamji since an hour we are talking without knowing each other's name"


"Hi! I am Madhubala Malik"


"Are you the daughter of that famous Nestle CEO Shamsher Malik ??" , he says while looking back at me with a shock


"Yeah... But still you can't take advantage of me because I told you, I know Kung Fu"


"Don't worry I am not going to pull any stupid stunt", he said with a smile.


Uff man what a killer smile.


"I am Rishab... Rishi"


*After few minutes*


"I am feeling hungry"


"It's because you are not eating my brain. If you would have eaten my brain like I am eating yours, then you wouldn't have felt hungry this soon"


"Not funny. Stop your taxi when you see any Dhaba or restaurant"



*At Dhaba*


"What would you like to have Madamji???", Rishi said to Madhu while looking at the Sardarji who was waiting for their order


"Amm... Pizza", I said with an excitement


"Are you crack??" Rishi said to me while smacking his forehead. "This is not Dominoes or Pizza Hut who will deliver 24 hour service. Order something normal. Wait... I am only ordering something... Sardarji , bring 2 plates Chicken Tikka , Butter Naan , Lassi and Gulaab Jamun"


They were having their food when suddenly a group of boys come there to have food. One of the boy looked in Madhu's direction and passed some lewd comments. Madhu & Rishi got so angry that Madhu stood from her seat, went to that boy and slapped him hard across his cheeks. The boy and his group became angry and to teach her a lesson they started misbehaving with her, when suddenly Rishi came there to stop them.


"Kick them Madhubala. You said you know Martial Arts I mean Kung Fu. This is the best moment to practice your kung Fu on them."


"Oh shut up you idiot... I don't know Kung Fu. I was saying that just to scare you so that you don't act smart with me."


"And look where your smartness landed you ... sorry sorry .. Us"


"Instead of helping me why the hell are you preaching me?? If you can't help me then just get lost"


"Miss Rude! Can't even ask for help properly"


Rishi fights with the goons bravely rescuing his soon to be wife " 😉"


"Uncle! Take the bill of our food and your Dhaba's loss from these Richie rich and calls the municipal department to take this garbage with them" Rishi said to the owner while taking Madhu from there



*After few minutes in the taxi*


"Rishi ... You know you saved my dignity from those leeches. Thanks a lot"


"If a husband will not save his wife's dignity then who else will save?? Neighbors??" , RK muttered to himself


"What did you say??"


"I... I am saying that it's my duty to save my passengers from any harm"


"Ohk.", I felt a bit sad when he said that it was his duty to save his passengers. I thought he would say that Madz how can I let anything happen to you , since the time you have come in my taxi I just can't lose you... No worries Madz , better luck next time.


"Madmji ! Why did you run from your house ?? Are your parents evil ??? Or you just got this sudden urge of pulling this stunt of running from house ?" , Rishi asked me while looking ahead at the road


"You can call me Madhu instead of Madamji . No my parents are quite cool . I ran from house because I dint want to marry until I fall in love"


"Madhu , love can happen even after marriage also . How was the boy in looks and nature?? What does he do ??"


"I don't know . I haven't seen his face . I just met his parents . He is Rishabh Kundra that famous business tycoon Mohan Kundra's only son" , I said while looking out from the window


"So you should have atleast met Mohan sir's son and then formed an opinion of whether to run from house or not , whether to fall in love and then marry or whether to marry and then fall in love. Madhu life cannot gaurentee that a particular thing will happen as per your wish. So you should just embrace the situation as it is and then you should do things according to your wish in that particular situation . Your parents love you so much . Just go and tell them that you don't want to marry Rishabh and you want to marry the person who has made a special place in your heart"


"I guess you are right Rishi . So what do you think I should do now ?"


"Go back to your home"


Rishi after sometime drops Madhu back at Malik Mansion . "Madamji just try to meet your parents desired man , you never know you might like him??" , saying this Rishi drove off

"Hmmm... Welcome back Madz to your sexy home sweet home" , I said to myself while picking up my bag


I climbed from my balcony deceiving the watchman and went to my room to freshen up .

After laying down on my cosy bed I just rewinded the time when I met Rishi and those 3-4 hours spent with him really made me happy and really made me miss him badly .


"What's happening to me ?? I am missing Rishi ..."

Whole night I kept dancing on my bed thinking about Rishi , Rishi and only Rishi but sleep was far from my eyes and I don't know when I got some sleep .



*In morning*


"Hey guys whatsup ! Good Morning" , I said to Mom & Dad while descending down the stairs.


"Madhu"


"Hey Mom ! Whatsup"


"Ohhh... You came back. Do you know how much I missed you?", Padmini said while hugging me


"Ohh... So our brat came back home. Welcome back. Now give me my credit card"


"Wait ... You have come back home ... That means you have fallen in love within a night???" Shamsher asked me with a puzzled look


"I don't know Shammo if its love or what , but I really liked him . He is cute, sexy, dashing, handsome..."


"Wait... Wait ... These many adjectives you are using for one single man or 2-3 man??" , Shamsher asked while feigning innocence


I hit my Dad playfully, "Stop your jokes Dad"


"Ohk so tell me, who is he?"


"Rishi ... the taxi driver"


"Rishi ... You mean Rishi Kapoor ... that oldie actor ... What days had come that he has to drive a taxi" Shamsher said with a sigh


"Dad ... Stop it ... there can be 1000 people with the name Rishi Kapoor . Well MY Rishi is young and dashing" I said to my dad while dreamily emphasizing on the word My


"Wait ... What did you say ... Taxi driver ...Of all the people you fell for a driver. No... Business man Shamsher Malik's daughter is not gonna marry a taxi driver


"Dad if you are going to behave like this than I will run again from the house and mind due this time I will not take the credit card with me."


"Comm'on dad you have established such a huge empire to take with you to heaven??? No na ... right ... write it on Rishi's name and then after marriage he will handle the business.


Shamsher smacked his forehead thinking of his daughter's audacity ...



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*3 months later*


*Knock Knock *


"W*F! How did you reach here?" Rishi asked me with a shock quite evident on his face


"Through teleportation".


"Not funny Madhu".


"Ok. I came here by climbing the pipe of your balcony, then by walking towards your bedroom and knocking on your bedroom door and now I am lying on your bed. Any more detail you want".


"But Why?"


"You aren't happy seeing me here?" I said quirking my eyebrows.


"No I mean at this hour".


"I thought you will be happy seeing me here but it seems your sleep is more important than ME who has come to meet her lover after doing this daredevil stunt of climbing those slippery pipes to reach your bedroom balcony." I acted hurt


"Do you know if I would have slipped from the pipe while reaching your room?? and here look at you ... you are not acting romantic at all Mr. Rishi " I tried crying to make my acting look more authentic but DAMN why aren't these water I mean tears coming from my eyes .??


"Madhu just because your name is filmy, it doesn't mean that you will be good in acting also" , Rishi chuckled with his cute dimpled cheeks.


"Oh man his dimples ... I just want to touch it ... No why to touch it when I can Kiss it and bite it" I thought mentally about this when Rishi clapped his hands to bring me out from my la la land.


"Yeah actually I wanted to tell you something."


"What "


"Rishi! You are such a chicken. Usually boy's iniate this but look at me... OK ... Lemme breathe".


"Oh Madhu! You are not going to give any exam that you are breathing and calming yourself"


Oh shut up Rishi! Let me gather the courage to what I have to say, you Dumbo . Rishi I... I ... Love" I came closer while saying those 3 magical words


"You love...? "Rishi asked feigning innocence and coming closer to me closing the gap between us


"I ... I... Love ..." our lips were only an inch apart


"Say it Madhu. You love "


"I ... I... Love... I love your room" I said with a mischievous wink. Oh man, my handsome man's face became all dull and gloomy.


"Awww Rishi... sorry for spoiling the romantic kiss but don't worry after marriage I will not only kiss you but we will do more than a kiss" , I giggled at him looking at his cute dull face.


"Don't worry baby after marriage this room is going to be yours only, I mean OURS. So you can love and romance our room" , he said with a grin.


"Rishi!!!!!!" , I said while keeping my head in his lap drawing patterns with my fingers on the book he was reading


"Hmmm..."


"Rishi listen na after marriage how many kids do you want"


"What ..."


"Are you seriously deaf?? Why do you always make me to repeat the same thing twice?"


"I asked you a simple thing"


"But why are you asking me this now? What will we discuss after marriage then?"


"Oh Rishi I don't want to waste our time with this issue after our marriage , so it's better to utilize the time before hand on such issues so that after marriage we can directly get into main business" I winked at him . "So now tell me how many kids do you want after marriage?"


"My birthday is on 12th October. When is your birthday Madhu?"


"What ... What is this Rishi ? Here I am asking you about kids and you are asking me my birthday"


"Just tell me quietly. When is your birthday?"


"29th ... 29th August. But why are you asking me this?" , I was hell confused on why Rishi was asking me about birthday.


"Hmmm . See mines is on 12th that is 1+2=3 and yours is 29th that is 2+9=11"


"So what?? Stop calculating the digit sums like astrologers." , I said looking at him with a puzzled look


"No it's not about astrology. But about kids."


"How??? I dint understand"


"See like astrology adds the birth date even I have added our birth dates to see how many kids we want. Mine digits adds up to only to 3 and yours adds up to 11. So we will go with your birth date. We will make a cricket team of 11 cute chubby-chubby kids."


"W*F . You psycho. You dint even think about the pain I will have to undergo for 11 kids."


"We will have 2 kids after every 2 years gap so there's no question about continuous pain you will have to undergo."


"Stop it... Stop discussing about family planning"


"Madhu baby ! You only started this planning session by asking how many kids we want. You just killed the romance first with I love your room and now this planning."


"I will kill you Rishi."


"Do you love someone else? Or do you have someone in mind other than me?"


"No... why??"


"Then if you will kill me than whom you will marry?"


"Rishi... I threw the pillow on him but to my bad luck he caught the pillow."



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*Marriage day*


"Dad where are Rishi's parents. I want to meet them. I haven't met them even once."


"Chill darling! After marriage you are going to stay wit them only so you can meet them whenever desired" , Dad said while helping me hold my lehenga


"Oh Dad ! You have met them when you talked about my marriage and all but I am going to be their daughter so even I want to meet my new parents before marriage" , I said while fixing my jwelleries


"Have patience Madhu . See your handsome husband came" , Mom said while bringing me downstairs

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"Rishi , where are your parents ?? I want to meet them before we go ahead for marriage rituals"


"Sure biwi" , he clls his parents


"Meet my parents Madhu"


"Mr and Mrs Kundra . That means you are Rishabh..." , I was shocked was an understatement . I was stunned & appalled


I looked at my parents who were all giving me that 32 teeth smile .


"What's all this Dad ? I am ... No actually my mind has got numb..."


"Well dear yes he is Rishabh . You know why I wanted you to marry him ?? Because I could see that he is a perfect gentleman and he will be a perfect husband . We fathers always have that extra eye and sense to judge the man in first look , if he will keep our princess happy or not and I could see that in Rishabh's eye . And so I knew that instant that he is the one who is going to be my son in law and then I showed him your photo and he instantly fell for you . But since you were hell bent on falling in love and then marrying , Rishabh was willing to wait for that moment of you falling in love which could have taken a lot of time . But then you made the plan to run from house . Well Honey ! we both (Shamsher & Padmini) were awake when you came to keep the letter . After you tip toed out from our room , we read the letter and called Rishabh that instant and told him about how you have run from the house . He dint wanted you to go alone late in night in taxi or auto fearing of loosing you so he disguised himself in the form of taxi driver and then you have witnessed everything.." , my Dad said to me while proudly looking at Rishabh


"Rishabh..." , I said with tears forming in my eyes . I don't know but I just wanted to hug my Rishi... No... No... My Rishabh so tightly... I couldn't believe this that he loves me to that extent that to just see me safe at night he came in disguise of a taxi driver.


I just couldn't control my emotion and hugged... No I actually pounced on him all off a sudden and hugged him tightly without leaving any space between us.


"Wohaaa Biwi... You are a little monkey... Who pounces on their soon to be husband like this for a hug ??"


"Rishu... Why did you do all this ??? You really love me to this extent ??" , I said to him crying


"Biwi stop ruining your makeup . I want you to look best today for our marriage . Shhh... Biwi this is My Love For You... I can't love you like your father but I promise you that I will love you not less than how your father loves you . I will always shower you with my love and always pamper my bratty Biwi forever"


With this Rishabh wipes my tears and kisses me on my forehead and holds my hand and takes me to the wedding altar...





Quite lengthy na . 😉


Edited by RagingBlaze - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 my love fr u ...fantastic
Rishi da taxi driver was da same rishabh who malik wanted to b madhu husband
A v sweet n cute story
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cute update.
Madhu was just adorable.
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Beautiful ending baby!
Loved it so much...
Seriously this madhu is so like you... A crazy girl!
Hehe... This Kung fu queen & her audacity... She cant make a request? But only knows to order... Right Kameeni ...Lol
You know what i laughed my ass off when madhu ordered her dad to give all his business to her lover so that he can handle it & also be rich enough to marry the shamsher malik's daughter.
Wait a minute! Is shamsher malik the CEO of nestle?? I thought it was Paul Bulcke... Lol
Haha... Madhu sneaking into his room & trying to bring fake tears... Her drama... Her 'i love your room"... Their talk on babies... All r cute funny moments... Really loved it... And their wedding day scenes were really sweet... Rishu stole my heart... Aww... He cares & loves her so much ...
Overall its one cute lovely story...
Thoroughly enjoyed it... Thanks baby!

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it yaar thanks for pm
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Lovely ending.
Rishabh is so in love and adorable too.
sweet story.
would love to read an epilogue to this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow...why this doesn't happen in real yaar...someone loves you like this... ufff...fabulous writing... shaandar story...thanks for making my day...
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Such a perfect ending! 😃
Loved d lil adventures of this crazy Madz n her Rishi! 😉😆
So, Shammo n Padmini had sketched d plot along wid Rishabh...Madz had underestimated her parents n they turned out to be smarter! 😆
Enjoyed reading it!
Thanks for d pm.

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