Do u want TWO BROTHERS written in 1st person or 3rd person?

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Do u want TWO BROTHERS written in 1st person or 3rd person?

sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey guys , I am again disturbing u all with my queries...As u know when I started the story , it was written in 1st person - like introduction of Maan , RK , Geet and Madhu...Then I switched to 3rd person...In one update I used 1st person again to show Vicky's inner thoughts and in another update , I used the 1st person to express King of Neotopia's evilness...Then as the story became complicated with more and more characters , I stuck to 3rd person narration as if I choose one character's pov then other characters will be left out...their feelings and thoughts will not be shown...and if I show same incident in different povs , then my already lengthy update will become more lengthy...So , I don't know how to write the story now...Please help...Badly needed ur advice as end of the day I expect ur comments on my updates...I will try my best...

Don't give one line decision...just state 1 line reason too for ur choice...

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shiekha05

@shiekha05

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Posted: 9 years ago

#2

Hi dear write it d way ur comfortable n everyones pov is necessary as what they r thinking is also important

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

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write in 3rd person.. Just like it is going now... I lyk it this way... And moreover soo many characters already involved so writting frm their pov will be lengthy.. & rest ur choice...😊

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey write how ever you feel right.

We love your pov n characters pov. You explain it nicely. So we don't have any problem.

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