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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! beautiful update...enjoyed reading it 😳 RK making a sulking face...how cute he would be? Yeah and expecting Madhu to convince him. Moreover Madhu's mindvoice 😆 True RK behaves like an uncle. They went to Mc Donald and had their fun time...Piya went to the play zone to enjoy.
Everything went on a good note right? then why...?
Rishbala are lost in each other but they missed to see the car. Poor RK! Thank god Madhu and Piya was Ok. Madhu will take care of RK...

RK is fine. But he is so afraid. Is it because of his past haunting him again? Did he think that due to his lack of concentration he risked their lives? Why...?

Thanks for updating . Do update next part soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
rk remind his past memory ...
waiting for next part...
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Originally posted by: vishuv

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Wow! beautiful update...enjoyed reading it 😳 RK making a sulking face...how cute he would be? Yeah and expecting Madhu to convince him. Moreover Madhu's mindvoice 😆 True RK behaves like an uncle. They went to Mc Donald and had their fun time...Piya went to the play zone to enjoy.
Everything went on a good note right? then why...?
Rishbala are lost in each other but they missed to see the car. Poor RK! Thank god Madhu and Piya was Ok. Madhu will take care of RK...

RK is fine. But he is so afraid. Is it because of his past haunting him again? Did he think that due to his lack of concentration he risked their lives? Why...?

Thanks for updating . Do update next part soon!


Why he is afraid will be revealed in the next chapter and you will see how madhu will take care of him and then best couple competition is also there Na

Thanks for liking it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Sana didn't read the last part...read now.
Wow! Rk getting lost in Madhu's beauty! He gladly accepted to participate in the best couple competition also. His mood is super good! The way she made both of them sleep...and also woke up
Rk is still a kid.
Their visit to orphanage was fun. Mahu advising kids that no one is less than the other...complexion doesn't matter...I was so happy to hear it! Oho how much time will Rk make both Madhu and me blush?😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Grumpy RK is cute.
RK calling Madhu in pain.
His fear seems to be related to his past.
superb part.
continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vishuv

Hi Sana didn't read the last part...read now.

Wow! Rk getting lost in Madhu's beauty! He gladly accepted to participate in the best couple competition also. His mood is super good! The way she made both of them sleep...and also woke up
Rk is still a kid.
Their visit to orphanage was fun. Mahu advising kids that no one is less than the other...complexion doesn't matter...I was so happy to hear it! Oho how much time will Rk make both Madhu and me blush?😳


Glad you are liking the story

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Posted: 9 years ago
poor madhu how can she take care rk nd pia both
nyc update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 12
Madhu bought piya and Rk in their room... Piya who was cling to madhu was fast asleep , madhu slowly made piya lie on her cot... Rk was sitting on the corner at the foot of the bed hiding his face on his palms... Madhu came and sat near him and carese his hair, Rk at once hugged her hiding his face in hiding his face in crook of her neck...


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Madhu too hugged him and she could feel how restless Rk is... madhu broke the hug and cupped his face and caressed his face with her other hand and said Rishab go and get freshed i will bring food.. Rk nodded in no and hugged her again...

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both stayed like that for some time.. After some time madhu again said but more lovingly Rishab go get freshed , i am here only, hmm... Rk looked her for sometime and then stood up and went to bathroom to get freshed... by that time patil too bought food for them... Rk came out of bathroom wearing track pant n t-shirt when madhu was setting food on the coffee table in their room... Madhu came near him and hold his hand and bought him near the coffee table and made him sit on the couch, she filled his plate with food and asked him to eat but he refused and tried to move from there but madhu held him back before he moves away and sat in front of him... She cut the piece of roti and dipped in curry and bought it near hus mouth but Rk said Madhu please am not hungry , you have food... Madhu refused to listen him and asked him to open his mouth, finally Rk open his mouth and madhu fed him... Before eating Rk said you also have to eat with me , Madhu tried to refuse saying she will have food later but Rk was stubborn that she have to eat with him and madhu gave in to his demands and Rk too fed her.. Both fed each other and then Madhu made him have his medicines.. and ask him to sleep ...

Madhu went near piya's cot and took her in her arms and sat on the couch waking her up to have some thing to eat , she forcefully wakeup up and made her eat then and made her drink her medicine and patted her back to sleep...

Rk was sitting on his side of bed watching all this... Madhu made piya sleep In Her cot and went to change...

When she came out of the washroom she saw Rk sitting on the same position where she had left him...

she came and sat near him and caressed his hair and asked what happened Rishab, hmm?? why haven't you sleep till now??... He didn't say anything just sat there holding madhu's hand tightly as if she will go away if he didnt hold her back...

madhu made him lie on the bed and she to laid beside him but both didnt leave each other's hand


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she turned towards rk and with her free hand she closed Rk's eyes and started caressing his hair and soon Rk fell asleep still holding Madhu's hand...

At Mid-Night...

Rk started murmuring Maa papa why did you leave me and go , i am all alone in this cruel world... i know it's my fault , if i hadn't forced you all to go this wouldn't happen.. please come back... he started sobbing in his sleep ... madhu was standing near window gazing moon lost in thoughts but her trance broke when she heard Rk murmuring in his sleep, she came near him and started to wake him... he again started speaking please come back please ... all this all happened because of me, all because of me ... madhu hold his face and said No Rishab its not your fault did you hear me its not your fault... I am not at fault asked Rk

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madhu again replied no Rishab its not your fault , he asked again really its not my fault, madhu again replied no its not and kissed his forehead at that moment rk opened his eyes and saw madhu... he pushed her away from himself but Madhu didn't leave his side instead held him more tightly in her arms and said calm down Rishab ,calm down but started wriggling out of her grip but couldn't come out as every second her grip was getting tighten ,he gave up the struggle and hugged her back...

After some time Madhu made him lay on his side and started to pat him to sleep but Rk held her hand and asked her Madhu can you please hold me tonight in your arms tightly please?? He looked at her waiting for her answer, Madhu stood up and went to her side of the bed , seeing her going and not giving answer he just closed his eyes tightly in pain but when he felt madhu shook him , he opened his eyes and saw her , she pulled him and made him sleep on her lap carefully because of his wound on his head... Rk hugged her from her stomach tightly and slept when he felt Madhu kissing on his head lovingly...

In the morning...

Madhu woke up and went to get fresh as Rk was fast asleep ... Madhu freshen and came out and saw pabbo sitting beside Rishab and he kept his head on pabbo's lap and she was caressing his head... Piya was still sleeping in her cot ... Madhu too came and sat near pabbo... Madhu asks pabbo , why Rk is scared of hospital??? Pabbo replied no not hospitals but that hospital where he was admitted... Madhu gave her a puzzled look not understanding what she was saying... Pabbo continued madhu Rishab is not scared of hospitals but scared of that hospital where he lost his parents... The hospital where he was admitted a day before is the same hospital where he lost his parents... Madhu gasped loudly hearing this...

Sorry guys for this small update , as I am not well ...
But it is picturised update

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
early waiting for next update..
Edited by sapnaf52 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks poorva 😊

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