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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/127214752

Edited by AdhooriKahaani - 9 years ago

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sneha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Very nice start

Thanks for writing one more story on rishbala

Cont..plz

Waiting ...😉

Edited by lovermg - 9 years ago

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Ishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

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First of all Congo Shongo ji for your new story 🥳🥳

🤣🤣🤣 Now I understood your undying LOVE for Dehradoon comes from Raichand & Jiaswal Family's home town 🤣🤣🤣🤣 That is why I found Dehradoon as the main center of Attraction in your every story . 😆😆😆

Ohk so RK is a psycho ooops I mean psychiatrist and even he has a past 😲😲 And Madz is also facing some turbulence 😲😲😲

That' not fair babes 😡😡😡 you are a die-hard lover of Pkyek and Dehradoon and you din't include Raichand's and Khurana's , I mean vampire and werewolves 🤣🤣🤣 OK jokes apart .

So RK's car has stopped in the middle of the forest and he hears an enchanting and a melodious voice and he goes in that direction and founds an ethereal beauty called Madz 😳😳😳 and then she touches RK WOW 😳😳😳 That looks cute . But who is she ?? And how did she knew RK's poem ??

I am guessing it to be a mind game story as in Madz will not be a real character and she will be just an illusion and she will be a mirror image of the girl whom RK sees in his dream and RKs mind will be playing games and showing that Madz knows his poem and is a real character 🤣🤣 I know this is just a lame guess but what's the harm in guessing 😉😉

Sheee yaar I thought that RKs car would stop in the middle of the forest then he will come out of his car to see what is wrong with his car then air will blow making him mess his hair then he will se a person with a bat tatoo and when he goes near to that person he sees Madz running in a super sonic speed having icy blue eyes and helps him and RK will always feel attracted to Madz 🤣🤣🤣 Just like in Pkyek OR you could have shown the story taking place in Ooty b/w those long canopy trees as happened in Raaz movie bcz your title says Raaz so that's what I thought 🤣🤣🤣

OHK now no more blabbering . 😆😆

Well the start is really very unique and gripping 👏👏👏 Quite a Mysterilicous Prologue 😳

BUT YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO UPDATE SOON AS IN WITHING 2 DAYS 😡😡😡🤣🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey you are back!!!! happy to know you are back with yet another superb, suspense filled story which am sure going to enjoy a lot!!!! loved all your stories as your writings are always different and so is your narrative skills... My favorite is Dark Love...it was superb with lots of suspense and am sure this one will be much more thrilling and filled with mysteries... you have unique way of thinking which is very difficult to predict... so am super excited to read this.

Coming to the prologue, it is awesome...RK found someone singing his poem which he wrote a few days back and didn't even share with anyone... he is shocked and he also found a mystery women whom he thought was special... both of them have some secret... mystery women whether she is imaginary or real sure have recognized him or knows something i guess... it is very interesting concept...they are connected for sure if the mystery women is real and would love to read more...

Continue soon 😊

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Anish

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Interesting and nice prologue
Pls continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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manna43

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Amazing start.I like mysteries. Continue soon.

Thanks for starting new rishbala story n pm.

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jalebi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wow... U r back with yet another mystery story...

I m so glad to have u back here & read ur super awesome mysterious stories...

I can bet and say no one can write better than u in mystery... Suspense... Dark story... Genres... U r the best it it...

Ahaan... Rk a psychiatrist... Interesting... & madhu is having some psychotic problem i guess as she is always miserable & mysterious ... Wonder what happened to her... Hope Rk will find out her Raaz... & there is Raaz behind Rk's life too... God! My horsey brain is running wild but i couldnt guess...

When she was singing his song & walking i just thought she was ghost... But u said its not a ghost or supernatural story...

Hmm... I think madhu knews rk already... The way she stared at him & touched him... & now she is gone...but where? God... Please pretty... Its my himble request... Do continue this intriguing story... I would love to read more...

Thanks for the pm..

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