TWO BROTHERS ch 102 & 103 pm sent /pg 86 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: as-Sweet

Congratss for new thread.. :))


I am really sorry...I have send u pm...Ch 53A & 53B is send separately as they are saying that my file size is large , so message can't be send...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
ch-53 (a) Mahira is angle, daughter of king tusk..Their relation is lovely..Mahira's mom serves king & predicts things & this prediction of kings end..Rk-madhu so adorable, i love them & thei every scene..Vikram's body giveup & vicky is here, really..!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ch-53 (b) Mahira's past unfolds..She is close to her mom bt queen send her away permanantely & that pervert kings wants to marry her bt she escape through vicky..Vicky-Rk's brotherly love highlight of the chappy, beautiful, hope they'll come soon 2gthr :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Overall a very fabulous update..!! Thanks for pm dear... !! Loved reading it :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by sanghita0000 I am really sorry..I have send u pm..Ch 53A & 53B send seperately as they r saying my file size is large, so message cant be send... Its okk & yeah i got the pm..thanks :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanx fr the pm
the stry is becoming interesting day by day😊
I am thoroughly njoying dis stry!!!
plzz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Thank god you continue this story. I like this story very much. Superb update dear. Waiting for more and more. Thanks for pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pls pm me thanks in advance
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Ohh...firstly thanku dear ..for continuing ur story...

Amazing update as usual..

Got to see a glimpse of maira ka past..i was thinking to hook...her wit Vicky..

Bt aftr hearing her story ..am like on thoughts ...yeh dono ho sakta hai kya...

Bt now I hav a feeling ..dat maan is the heir of tusks..a wild guess...correct me if am wrong..

Wats the strom ur talking about...I am really really curious to know the same...

Ohh...Vicky and rk a dat small moments dat really came as a surprise..

Dat hug was so serene...loved it very much... he is having those brotherly feeling and protection for rk..

I wish he would hav jus forgotten dat anger and revenge for once den even he could have been wit dem ..happy and wit his real loved ones..

Am really really curious wit the mystery behind queen of neotopia..i mean something big is been hidden by her..nd am sure its of king ka death ..y I have a feeling dat wat was predicted dat his son gona be killing him..is truth..bt whch son is gonna kill is a real mystery..

Oh I felt bad for those cute fairies..who was burnt to death..nd bt at d same time..maahira..was able to save herself..i mean coz of Vicky...he was d savior..x

And loved d bond btwn king of tusks and mahira...

Like the bond btwn madhu and rk...dey are so understanding ...i wish she knows her and his truth soon..b4 geet mess everything... with her stupidty...

Past small Vicky was so innocent and nave...poor feel really bad for him...

Coz of his dad he is so alone and cruel and lonely...

Rk is so true dat he loves sam so much...

Yaar Vicky ke liye kisiko la do yaar jaldi...

Geet and maan ka moments dat was again lovely..bt even dis two love each other ...geet ka insecurity and jealous for rk is surely gonna bring problem for all..

And also the strrom whch is gonna ...hit all..

U have left so many puzzles unsolved ..i am really really hooked to story to know about the same..

Continue soon..will be wiaitn..

Waiitn

Waiitn

And again thanks for continuing the story..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Out of 40 readers , 20 readers commented...

Some If member "girijamkrishna" taunted me by saying "I will stay away from Ur story dont call those who does not comment are nonsense, if ur story has some new sense they will definately give good comments" ...I pmed her asking who she was and how dare she pmed me? In reply , She pmed me...Her exact words were "I am also a member see my profile U should not post like STAY AWAY FROM MY SS OR FF WHATEVER

when forum is open for every member , If U not giving access to Ur story and PW
its OK but such words hurts every body.

Its India and rights are there to speak don't forget and don't reply to my post"

I am in a very bad mood...So , I don't know when I will post my next update...I will try to post it on Sat 7 pm...But I think I will again not be able to write today...My updates will not be good in coming days as i am stressed out...So bear with me...


Ch 54 is updated...Comment if u find it worth commenting...

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