RiMa SS - Go Goa Gone !! Updated 5th part on page 23 - 21/9/2015 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2...
Thanks for sending the update thru pm... But i would like u post the second part on ur above post so ur new readers can follow the story... & also i wish u put an index on the prologue post by giving the direct link of the updates or at least the page number so we can easily find where the updates are... Hope u will do this so it will be easy for ur readers... Sorry if i m bothering u...


Okay coming to the update...

Excellent update... I loved it so much..mainly madhu's drram part... It was written so well... So scary... The socket looking dark without eyes... No flesh but only bones & skull...plate full of bones ... Gosh!! Thats so scary & creepy... From where u got such ideas?? HW horror movies huh?? I could see the effect here... But i should give credits to ur words... U were brilliant there... I loved it baby... I think madhu's dream will come true... If not all atleast her parents will die... Hope madhu & mukku escapes... Poor mukku i dont wsnt him to die... If they are vampires then i guess rk will turn madhu a vampire too... Then they can be one forever... I would love that...
So even mukku had strange dream... So something is really fishy... Poor madhu trying to explain hee parents that something seriously is wrong but no ome is trusting her...
Okay cool... Madhi encountered with rk... & even guessed he was the one she have seen at her house...
& the girl she saw was also true... So its not any hallucination... Or they ghosts? Bcos they say nah only dog's eyes can see ghost... & truffy might have recognized the ghost Rk & it keeps barking at him... Oh god... My thoughts are going wild.. i couldnt guess whats happening around them...
If i wanna say a word for this update... Then it would be... WOW!!
u do imagine crazily & little creepily... Lol...
I m loving this story... Keep updating... I promise to be regular & give quick updates...
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Oyeee i m confused now
Is rk a ghost??
n who was the girl
Its interesting there is lot of mystry waiting for it to unfold
Superb update dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!!!! What an update yar...it's scary and creepy that Madhu is seeing and feeling things... That dream especially was creepy...

I am basically a horror and scary movies buff but reading a creepy part was amazing...

What an entry of RK... And Madhu finally remembered where she seen him...

Nice update...waiting to see what happens next... Thanks for PM though
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Ishu this is the first time ever I'm reading ur ss 😆 never read any before actually I'm too lazy to read such long stories & updates toh jab bhi kabhi free time mile I read it 😳 & I'll definitely say u r a very good writer dear ur english vocabulary is superbbb 👏👏...
I wasn't aware of this talent of yours I knew you write stories but dint know ur so good at it ... 😃
The story & plot is interesting suspense bohut hai which I'm liking & its damn scary Yar I was feeling so damn scared while reading it 😆 but its nice , good work dear keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey thank u so much for sending chapter 2
Scary and weird things are happening in house
Eagerly waiting to see rk reaction for madhu accusation.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
thankyou for sending chapter 2
very interesting story.
is RK a ghost?
so excited for next chapter. continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
its very intresting update !
is rk a ghost & who is the girl madhu saw ?? soo many ques , waiting to read next chapter thanks for sending pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So scary and amazing update
I think rk is ghost in this story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woah! Madhu's dream was damn horrifying...N she spotting d boy n a girl again, nobody else being able to see them, Mukku having a weird nightmare n on top of that...Madhu encountering that guy for real...everything about this is creepy !!!!
Now I'm waiting for d next part excitedly! !
Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A mysterious update.scaring one.Madhu is seeing unknown persons .r they dead or someone behind them .creepy dreams of madhu n mukku.rk's entry n madhu recognized him.All things made a horror story. However I am scared of horror movies but ur story is gripping one .I like it.
Thanks for pm n continue soon.

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