RM 3S : THE VOWS final part - pg.29 (17/07/15) - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rishbalafan9

Fabulous write..i loved the way you pen down madhu character...me too feels same regarding the school of marriage...and RK is the mircale husband a girl can have...😊

And the kiss you described very evocatively...eager to know more about the story...
Update soon...😊


Thanks dear for ur lovely comment...
Yeah...that fear is common for all girls...
Haha...true... He is indeed a miracle hubby...
Um... I felt that was a sloppy kiss... I will write even better kiss in next part...
Will try to update soon...
Thanks dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Love-Blossoms

God twnnie its hilarious

Mera rk finally bada ho gaya 😆 hehe... Yeah i know...yet another funny story... Lol.. Finally he did it befote marriage... Lol...
He is no longer a virgin 🤣17 mein hi kar liya isne
Wonder which chudail was first dips or ria ya phir koi aur 🤣 many... But surely dips in the list... I like dips... Hate ria...
Rk dude I know u r experienced but ur biwi needs to be trained man how come will u train her if u keep ur in laws with u 😉 lol... Twinnie... His inlaws r not sleeping inbtn him... Okay... They r staying at the next house... Our rk will train her in every available space he gets... Lol...
Ab ye mat bolna ki sasuma n sasurji will also learn to do it from u 🤣 gah... My rk wont teach sexclass to oldies... He has a range...
Deviji were u a freedom fighter in ur last birth
Direct freedom ki tention kyun ri do u have some secret lover
That if he doesn't allow u to get out u won't be able to train him like he ll train u in doing it had hai bala 🤣🤣🤣 i like it when u call her deviji...lol...
Aw my rk man don't u know by ur overloaded experience that malliks have got khandani avatar of being stubborn dickheads haha...that they are... But my rk knows to tame the maliks...
Y dude did u become a architect from CEO that u constructed a house kya zamana as gaya hai nowadays ppl can do any job without degrees 😆😆 I so wish I don't have to study more n I can make my house without degree 🤣...hey... Even architect can design for buildings... n wat the is madhu modern girl or charlin Chaplin me zamane ki honeymoon in rishikesh n haridwar 😆🤣 bala ji didn't your mummyji tell u that u shd.go on a romantic place if u want Hatte katte bachhe 😆
... U cracked me here... hatte katte bachcha...LMAO...
Woman u go on teerath yatra in haridwar let me take my rk to Paris n put him to some use otherwise if he stays with u he ll become bhaktjan singing hanuman chalisa at bed pe cricket time 🤣 haha... Take him darling... He is all urs...lol
Overall awesome os twinnie really?? I felt i didnt write well... Well... Thanks twinnie...
I m wondering which vow will he actually not fulfill getting bala mad n she leaves him so that I can do it with him 🤣 ... Haha... He is my rk... He will keep up his word... His vows r more important than his life... Lol...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: bevi-najim

Wow wonderful and awesome update

Loved it really it's chooo chweet story
I loved all the vows by rk to madhu those words r perfect
And madhu 's too
Every girls dream that they life partner look they family like they own family
Like we do but it rarely happen ok leave it is a international problem
But ur madhu is lucky girl
Ok continue soon sudha
Waiting for there hot sr


Hi dear...
I missed u & ur comments... Where were u?? Long time no see...
Thanks for ur lovely comment...
Glad u liked the vows...
Yes u r right... We could find such rk's rarely...
Yep...madhu is indeed lucky...
Lol... SR? I will try to make it hot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: veni7842

Lovely start Sudha dear...
I can totally understand madhu worries regarding her parents , I even sometimes feel like madhu that who will take care of my parents after my marriage...u plhave written her feelings and fears so nicely dear...
Rishab , such an understanding guy..the vows he gave to madhu in cafe is awesome, even I sometimes dream of listening those kind of words from my future husband .lol

Also the wedding vows are amzing...cannt express hiw much i love those words while reading..also an amazing feeling to hear such words frm our life partner Madhu is very lucky to have such a nice guy in her life...
Wow he built her a house as a wedding gift and requested her parents to stay near her...loved him so much in this...
Honey moon in Kashmir :p :p..eagerly waiting to read nxt parts...
Loved this so much :)...
Love you for this story...title is amazing


Wow...such a beautiful comment... Made my heart do a chintak dance... Thanks dear...
U r right... Its a common fear of all girls... I have it too so thought to write on it... & i have dreamed like u too to hear those words from my life partner if i decide to marry lol...
So it was easy for me to write those vows easily as i always wished every men shld say those vows & keep up with it too...
Hmm... Madhu is lucky... Hope we r too...
Glad u loved this simple story... & its title too...
Thank u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: shruthi14

If i remember correctly u were not going to write till august right? Den how come dis one anyways I am happy seeing ur story

How can he be sooo what to say short of words so perfect and caring !!! I m waiting for this type of man and hope somebody like this meets me after 8 years lol!
I definitely didn't expect hot Sr but yes a passionate kiss in ur story but this rishbala didn't have that passionate kiss may be becoz it's madhu's first time!!
She shud have said that she has a secret lover I thought she wud say and it wud have been fun to see rks reaction but poor innocent told the truth!!
Lol honeymoon in haridwar wud be perfect hahaha
I really loved the way he gifted that house to madhu and her parents that moment I fell in love wid dis rk but what to do madhu already married him! this rk has a very big heart
"With this ring, I give u My heart, My soul, My very life, I belong to you & only you. I'll make my life's mission to keep you happy & safe"
This was so beautiful words really very touchy and romantic!! So overall totally loved with so sweet and simple rishbala !!
Loved the way u presented this part !! It is really a sweet simple and pleasant story !! Thanks for pm continue soon


Finally... I m here to reply ur comment... I always perfer to reply to urs at the end... Best for the last... Well i loved all my readers comment but ur r little special... My lil sis...

Oh baby... I got some free time & this story was haunting my head so wrote it... Now i m back to busy mode... Will surely turn after august only...

Thanks dear for this long & lovely comment...
Glad u liked this rk...
Dont worry u will get one like him in future for sure...

Haha... They r open to each other... They dont lie.. So madhu too accepted the truth that she didny have any secret lover... More over she really didnt want to piss off her hubby on SR...

GOOD...that u didnt expect hot sr... U shld grow a little to read that... For u & other kids i shld really write little decently... Lol...
Yeah i agree that was a sloppy kiss... Only u have pointed out correctly... & ur reason is rite... Madhu is inexperienced...
Really yaar... Those places r my fav place... I would really ask my future hubby ti take me to those places i have mentioned... For a change... But i know that would make me a fool... Lol... So i wrote the same here... & gave the obvious expression from Rk...

Thats my fav line of this os too... Good u liked it too... Felt it touchy...
Thanks dear for liking this sweet simple story...
Love u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Sorry dear...
I was busy & quite unwell too...
Tmrw i ll give u the next part...
Its half written already... Need to fill in few parts...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Waiting and waiting for update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: rishbalafan9

Waiting and waiting for update...😊


Sorry for making u wait dear...
I will try... Really try hard to give u the update tmrw...
Pls wait a day more...
Thanks...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Oh no... I m wasting my time in sending 100+ pms when i get only 60+ liked after a week since i had updated... This is too bad... I m simply wasting my effort i guess... I have better things to do...
I shld really concentrate on that instead of writing crappy stories here...
Next update i ll send only 60 or 70 pms... Of my own choosing... I have a pretty good memory power so i ll very well remember who r my loyar readers... Who regularly comment on my works... Remaining i m gonna stop sending pms...
Sorry...
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Ammmaazzziiinnggg! ⭐️Loved it sooo mmmuuccchhh!
ur writing style reminds me of lazy /bookworm.
Trust me , ur story writing style resembles her storywriting style n i jus love it .
waiting for nex👏
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