First of all reading this update i had so many distractions !! First i thought u writing good about ballika vadhu and was like whyyy she has written like madhu and radha seeing bv den realised no its not that !!!
That explaination of madhubala whole story was superb n awsome !! I really liked the line where rk said i can see ishq n junoon in heros eyes !!!
Now before the accident i thought it wud be madhu who will meet wid accident becoz she was taking the car but no it was rk !!
the hospital was really very emotional tears came in my eyes while reading madhus convo to rk !!!! I loved the way u wrote madhu's povs !!!!
The more i felt very bad was where when she gets up and screams rk and say i lost.. i got that they lost the baby and was thinking how did u write like that as i always read everything happy happy in ur stories !!
Now comes the 2nd distraction when that lady was holding madhus hands and saying its becoz of your hubby my child is alive i thought rk died and have donated the organs that moment i really cudnt control myself and was cursing u in the mind that y u wrote like dis like seriously yyyt ? but as soon as i read the next line it was such a relief for me !!
And when madhu tells about the meiej story where madhu saves rks life i expected that this madhu wud also do something like dis and showed rk dat see thread saved ur life and nupital chain also worked !!
anyways in the end as u said its all becoz of madhus love he is back and doctor mehul chopra also !! Lol dr.is mehul chopra wid lambe lambe baal !! What made u gave the doctor this name ?
Aww rishbala blessed with such lovely kids !!! yayy finally it was a girl first and i was right (not counting the died baby )
and yeah point to be noted radha and madhu did a good thing to wake up at 4 to watch meiej serial that shud not be missed at any cost !! Lol many nights i watch the epis till 4 o clock !!!
Madbala y dont u get over from the fights issue ?? Ur love is far more powerful than ur ego becoz of that only u both sort it out very fastly
Wow at the end all wows u repeated was excellent and fabulous and the way rk answered that i know u make the same promise through ur eyes and have fulfilled too that line stole my heart !! Becoz of these distractions ek aur baar reading banta hai boss !! Whole story i will read two to three times for sure i guess !! I was saying i am saying i will be saying ur alll stories are awsome and fantastic !! Most loved is lsam still cant forget that !!! Thanks for coming up with such beautiful story wid wonderful wows !! Thanks for pm
Edited by shruthi14 - 10 years ago