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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ViShti128

Such a heart touching update. Its nt nly in dis chap dat Madhu is gng 2 sacrifice her LOVE 4 Rishabh 4 d world, bt in real lyf 2 it happens. Its nt necessary dat a girl sent 2 n escort service will always b a tainted one. Did any1 ever go n asked a girl sold 2 n escort service dat she joined d service wid her own will or she was forced?? N even if c did join wid her own will, what was d reason behind it?? Ovio no girl out of fun will join n escort business. I feel so miserable 4 my two babies, they r suffering so much. Dnt they deserve 2 b happy wid echothr?? N who was dat man embracing Madhu?? Is it Karan?? Or is dat man Mukund?? Madhu will never go 2 makkhi so chances r high dats its Karan. RK never saw Sultan, Mukund n Tony is in jail so my logic says its Karan. Y y y??? So much pain, hatred, betrayal ol2gthr in 1 lyf which is so small?? U again left us hanging TK, pls update soon. CURIOSITY is a KILLER!!

Good guessing 😃 But we'd see what happens next.

Unfortunately, the world we live in judges us too often on labels alone.
Surname, religion, gender, caste, color of the skin, profession, wealth - things we often do not have too much control over. Yet, we give in to instant judgment and associative adjectives. Madhu too is wary of the baggage of adjectives she carries, and does not want to transfer the weight onto Rishabh too.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: silverfire

Oh God! I'm crying again.😭😭😭. Madhu broke his heart. This is unbearable.💔💔💔.

I can actually feel his pain. This is enough.plz. No more.i can't see them like this.
Why is everyone hurting them so much. Don't they deserve happiness in life.
Why, madhu why??? Why did u reject him n push him into hell?

Madhu thinks she is giving him space to move on in life. Can't she understand that there is no life for him without her. She is doing a grave mistake. She is thinking of what the world will think of Rishabh than Rishabh himself.
I just want him to leave everything n go somewhere away from all these ppl. They just don't deserve him. At one point I wanted him to leave everything in India including madhu n settle in London with the only family he has. Becos every single person in his life has cheated him n stabbed him in the back. But no. I don't even want him anywhere near that mami.😡 Just let him leave everything n go away. No more pain for him. Madhu's past will always haunt her even if it doesn't bother Rishabh. She has to come to terms with that n learn to think only about Rishabh n their life together. Until that happens they can never be happy together. RK will waiting for her till then.
Who was that man with madhu in the end. I know she won't go back to her past life but clearly RK has misunderstood her.

I have no words to describe ur writing. Ur updates r just like a movie in front of our eyes.
Beautiful writing n an awesome update..
👏👏👏.


First of all, hugs. I feel for Rishabh too. Sorry I was so cruel to him. Nobody gets him, really, in the story. Not even Madhu. And he is too nice, so I almost want him to feel a bit angry again. Enough is enough, as you say.
As for Madhu, she is so messed up. I don't blame her, but she needs to voice out her fears and emotions. Probably needs professional help to get over things. It's not like she wants to live without Rishabh, but she is too conflicted.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tainar

It's a very emotional update. But what's wiry the ending? :( I thought the story is near ending then a misunderstanding? Please don't take it the wrong way, but the characters have been through hell and back already. They are already at the breaking point. Both of their lack of self-worth has been re-established far too many times, for them to ever go back to being "normal".
I am terrified by the onslaught of the misunderstanding. What will Rishabh do? Will he think that Madhu willingly joined the trade and he has been playing the fool. He knows Madhu can't pay him back. So will he demand she pay him back by sleeping with him? They have come too far to go back to just transactional sex.
Sorry. I don't see where you are going with the story. :(


Sorry for disappointing you yar. Where I am going will become clear soon enough? I don't want to stretch the misunderstanding too much. It's not even a misunderstanding, just anger. Overdue anger.

I know we all like happy endings and we like them soon. I also know I am not particularly kind. But life is much less kind than me and I'm trying to be honest to the point of the story.
At least I guarantee happy endings, unlike life.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twinklev20


Very emotional update...😭

Though I am feeling sad for Madhu's condition, am feeling worst for RK's condition over past few updates...😭...😭...😭...he doesnt deserve all this just because he shares love and care with whoever comes his way...😡...be it his earlier relatives...or Madhu, or Manav, or Trishna, or Mami...NOT AT ALL...all the rest are being so selfish...😡...no one thinks for him...😡


But rather than this lovesick and disheartened RK, i wud always love a dashing RK......who takes control of any situation he is in...👏...and wins it...👏...doesnt let anyone ruin it...like when he had negotiated with Deepali in one of the previous chapters...👏.👏...


But whats the twist with the new man now...😲...am sure he was Karan Mathur ...😡

Whatever, but my RK doesnt deserve all this pain...😡

Plsss have mercy on his condition in forthcoming chapters...😔...if possible...😔...



You're right. That's the tragedy of RK's life. Even those who "think of him" don't really think of him.
Madhu's fears are somewhat justified, but she's forgetting that at this point RK needs her love more than anything else. Then, after that, they can maybe figure out the rest.
An unhappy life is worse than no life at all.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rdave1

You know I adore your writing so please please don't take what I'm about to say negatively. But what the FU(K?

I thought we were finally making progress and guessed Mamiji might have been an obstacle but she turned into a bloody road block. After everything they have been through I thought we would be moving forward and I still understand both of their hesitation but this was too much for my heart to bear. All the other cruel and heartbreaking things they have gone through, I understood and stood behind your vision of your story. All of that heartache and pain was necessary for the story to move forward. But this especially the end, just put them back at the 1st chapter, everything they had accomplished was undone.

The only glimmering hope after the last chapter was Trishna and she tried her best but in the end it was all for nothing.

I know you said you are winding down the story but I honestly wasn't this expecting this kind of a blow from this chapter.

I hope things get cleared up in the next chapter without destroying the vision you have but we need happy now.


What the f**k is probably right 😊
My mind is cruel, what do I do?
Anyway, there was a point to all this, right from the very beginning, that's why it shaped up this way. It is cruel and the path of love has way too many obstacles for these two poor souls, but love is there, isn't it? It will find its way and in the process break down other things.
It seems all dim, I know, but it's not back to square one.

Even Madhu needs to know what it feels like to lose Rishabh. He defeated his demons and his inability to trust or love. She needs to do it too. And in the process, we all need to get a moment to think about what uncaring societal judgments do to good people.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashitha235

When Madhu said no I was really disappointed with her. But when I read about her turmoil I felt really bad for her. She was tested by destiny so cruelly yet every time she accepted it and tried to find a way out. Now that everything was going to be right she had made a choice which gave immense pain not only to her but also to her love. She thinks her love is small and tainted, but she doesn't know only the strong and true lover can take such a painful decision. It's true that society never lets people from such profession to live in peace. She thinks that her past will haunt them and people are going to question and insult Rishabh. Manorama's words were a reality check for her. It is natural for her to think in that way, as what she had gone through was not less than a hell and she is a human. Insecurity and fear still exist in her. I think I can guess why you gave this twist. Madhu doesn't know the depth of Rishbah's love, she doesn't know what all he did to get her back. She needed to know that fact, she needed to know what true love is and how it is to feel, only then her insecurities will go. Both of them have seen hell, but when they unite there should be nothing that could separate them. I'm just guessing.

Rishabh's pain broke my heart, it was terrible but still he let her go. He is really a great man. He deserves happiness and hope he don't misunderstand her. After all the heart break he is still in a state to think rationally so hope he will not jump into any conclusion.

I think the person who she met is Karan because even Rishabh recognized him. What happened between Karan and Rk is still mystery and Karan had called madhu Bhabhi so I think you are going to bring that part.

Amazing writing. It was emotional update but I think there is going to be something good in the next chapter.

Thanks for update and pm😊


You're kind of exactly spot on so I am not going to say much :)👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Very emotional update

You broke my heart along with Rishab teekay😭. Madhu is also in pain. She dont want to break Rishab's heart but she is helpless. She witnessed Manorama's disgust foe her and dont want to create gap between Rishab and his only family. She dont want him to carry the taint of her past, and that taint won't leave her in this life time. Rishab initially beleives that Adhu doesn't love him.. But thank god Trishna supports him and tell him that Madhu do love him and refusing because of Mami. She urges him to get her. So sweet of her I love Trishna. In the airport Rishab again wants to try talking to her and find her hugging another guy. I just hope its not Sultan because Rk shocked seeing him. Madhu don't know Sultan but Rk does know him. Another guess is Karan, Madhu must have asked his help I guess. Rishab shocked to see him because he know Karan had hots for her. Another wild guess is Vikram😛. Because you simply love him too much..


I swear I laughed like crazy when I read the last line.
It's only because of you I didn't include Vikram in this story at all 😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow, what a emotional update. 💔 my heart is broke hundred times see my rk 😭 😭 💔 💔 .U make me cry yar. But I tell you that you are a amazing excellent superb and awesome writer. Love love love you stores. Please update soon. Thanks for pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
vvery emotional update. .u make me cry again.
teeky pls dnt give rk painful situation...feel pity for him.
u r superb.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
TK , please update soon... Can't bear this waiting after such a heart wrenching chapter... 😭 😭

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