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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

Firstly thank u so much for taking my request & giving me my most favorite stories end... & also thank u so much for dedicating it to me...

Beautiful ending...
Loved it...
I so loved this innocent child like madhu... She is a true angel in Rk's life in all sense...
She brought only happiness to him..
Awe... I could so imagine how madhu would have asked questions for each & every single thing while she was pregnant like why her tummy is growing big... Who is sitting inside... & so on... Poor rk & bittuji had to run behind a baby angel who was carry another baby angel in her...
I was so worried that madhu will go back to her world with the angels but she didnt...
She kept her promise & stayed with Rk & she wants more & more little wonders...
Awe... Rk is so sweet... He treated her like a baby & cared for her... He could never see her in pain..just amazing...
U r too brilliant dear... This is one of ur master piece.. I shld say... The way u imagine things is so different...cute...interesting...& beautiful...
Thanks a lot for giving me this sweet story...

But i didnt get the one last befofe para... Where Rk says to his daughter u r so like ur mother... She is an angel so she is gone... U can see her in shining star... Well not exactly these lines but something like that... What was it actually?? U had any other ideas to show?? But that part shocked me... But later the final para... It was all clear that she stayed for Rk & she also took their baby in her arms... & they lived happily ever after with three kids...Perfect ending.. Thanks!!




I had written two different endings
One sad n other happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: christobelle




I had written two different endings
One sad n other happy


Oh... Alternative climax... Yeah i thought of it...
I ll choose the second one... I always love happy ending...
Thanks dear... U made me so happy by giving an ending to this story...that too a lovely one...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved the second ending more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful ending dear 👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please Update the last part of Rishbala FS: I Love My Abusive Husband when possible

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