Rima 3S: AANKHEN (part 2, 3 + epilogue updated on pg.11)

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veni7842

@veni7842

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Read all the parts at a time...
Superb story dear :)
Loved Trish and madhu's friendship...
Rk's love for his sister is written nicely...
Overall an amazing and a good message oriented short story :)

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Awesome end to the story sudha

Loved it

N message was beautiful

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janvi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

beautiful ending..

thanks for pm dear,,

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susan7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Amazing...beautifully written

Thanx 4 d pm

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omama_raza

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

awesome blossom and lovely story

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parimaniya

@parimaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

only one word in my mind after reading it n that is

AAAWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE👏

hats of 2 u dear ur fabulous n wonderful writer 👍🏼 pls keep writing n made our day😊😊

Edited by parimaniya - 10 years ago

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Shweta Dafda

@Shweta300

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Wow Awsome dear
How nicely you have decribe Madhu and trish friendship bond
Nice end to sultan with good punishment
I just loved Rk and madhu's bond
Aww baby trish Awsome dear
Plz continue ur other stories
N do write more stories
I just love ur stories n concepts
Tysm for pm
Dear

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Wow...So beautifully written and a lovely ending it was...!! Trish and madhu friendship bond was so sweet mainly...Sultan pig had for his punishment at last...Wow Trish is having Trish eyes hehe...!!! Thanks for pm and giving us this great story which could encourage others In a way how imp it's to donate our organs...Sudha !!

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silverfire

@silverfire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Wow... A beautiful story n very beautifully written too.

That moron sultan deserves an even cruel death. Getting hit by a truck is too mild for him. He killed so a sweet person. Trishna was born again on her birthday itself. That's so sweet...

Organ donation is gaining momentum in India. More n more ppl should come forward to help in this noble cause.

Thanks for giving us this great story.

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Bon_Vivant

@Bon_Vivant

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Amazing story
loved madhu-trishna bonding
beautiful epilouge.loved the last line-trishna is having trishna's eyes.beautiful aankhen
realy good concept.

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