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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 1

A girl was walking on deserted road when she found two boys started following her... The girl increased her walking speed when the two boys did... The girl was started sweating and saw a crowd area nearby... She started chanting a matra..


Hauslo se veer hu..
Sankato mein dheer hu..
Dhusmano ki peer hu..
Apni ma k sahare bas yu hi balveer hu..


While chanting the mantra she took out peeper spray bottle from her bag nd when she reached at the crowd area, she turned at the boys nd sprayed the peeper and started hitting them.. Seeing this the people came there...


"What happen??" A man asked..


The girl: These boys are following me since long... (She hit them with her bag)


"Kya re!! Ladki ko ched raha tha??" And the people beat them badly and handed them over to police..


"Mam your name??" A inspector asked..


The girl: Madhu.. Madhubala Malik..


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Madhu reached at her hostel, it was almost 9pm..


Madhu: Oh no!! I forget to call maa..


She dialled Padmini's number but she didn't received when she dialled landline number but again no response...


Madhu: What the hell.. Where are the people..


Again she dialled Padmini's number when she recieved..


Madhu: Maa!! Where were you all?? I was trying your number since long.. Is everything alright??


Padmini (sobbed & stammering): Ma.. Madhuuu!!!


Madhu (worriedly): Maa!! What happen?? Why are you crying?? Papa!! Is papa alright?? Maa speak out...


Padmini (crying): Madhu!! Trishna...


Madhu: Didu!! (whispered) What?? What happen with her??


Padmini: You please come fast here beta..


Madhu: Maa.. First you stop crying nd tell me clearly what happen with her..


Padmini: Madhu.. Trishna tried to suicide...


Madhu (shocked): What?? But why?? I talked with her yesterday only.. I was all okay then suddenly what happen..


Padmini: I dont know anything.. You come soon beta..


Madhu: Maa you stop crying... Didu will be fine soon... And you take care of yourself.. I am coming tomorrow morning..


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Tha flight landed on Mumbai airport nd Madhu directly went to the hospital where she met with doctor outside Trishna's cabin..


Madhu (worriedly): Doctor!! Didu.. How's she??


Doctor: Dont worry.. She is out of danger..


Madhu: Can.. Can I meet with her.. Please doctor..


Doctor: Sure!!


The doctor excused when Madhu walked in the cabin, she was sleeping when Madhu sat besides her bed nd carressed her injured wrist, tears rolled out from her eyes...


Madhu: Why didu.. Why you did this?? I know there must reason behind this... And I will find it out soon..


Suddenly Madhu noticed Trishna was moving her fingers and calling a name..


Madhu (worriedly): Didu are you okay??


"Rk.. Rk.." Trishna continuosly calling this name which Madhu heard.. "Rk!! Who is he??" Madhu self thought and walked out from cabin where she met with Padmini..


Padmini: Madhu! Where are you going?


Madhu: Maa I am going home.. You stay here with didu..


Saying this she left from there nd came back home nd directly went to Trishna's cabin.. She checked everywhere nd found some cards, love letters.. "From, your love Rk.." She read the last of the letter...


Madhu (angrily): Mr.Rk!! You spoiled my didu's life.. Now its your turn to repay.. I will exposed you nd will make your life hell... I promise!!! Now just wait & watch...


I hope you liked the part.. Waiting for likes & comments.. Advance thank you!!😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
Unres
I hope its a misunderstanding
superb update
Edited by v.p.joshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story and congratulations on the new story.Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Happy easter to you and your family and friends
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alicia2012

Wow great story please update soonThanks dear!! Will update soon

I can not wait for the next part of your story and congratulations on the new story.Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Happy easter to you and your family and friends
Same to you 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ahaan as expected Rk is the reason for this !! now bala will take revenge for her diduuu !! Nice update !! But y so much lil bit longer next time hun plzz ! Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthi14

Ahaan as expected Rk is the reason for this !! now bala will take revenge for her diduuu !! Nice update !! But y so much lil bit longer next time hun plzz ! Thanks for pm

Oopss!! Sorry dear.. I just wrote the part in hurry, so couldn't write longer.. Next time will post long n thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

superb start
😊Thanks dear...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
NIce start!!!
so is Rk really guilty or is Madhu jumping to conclusions too soon... Interesting..
Please update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start...but small update...hope Rk is not responsible for trish state...! Eager to read further...update soon abd congrats on new story dear !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz Send me pm from next update dear !

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