NEW FF : MERI CHOTI SI JAADUGARNI PART 21 PG 95 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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first of all u have done a good job to write the full update in english
the story is also going good but i think u should make madhu more smart and bold as the girls of this days are not soo much shy and they never put veils b4 marriage and the boys of rks status and standard dont like this type of timid girls so if u make her some more smart i think it will be more uptodate but chotima its completely my pov olz dont take it otherwise and i want u make focus more on leads and less on family members as as the readers and viewers r generally involve with leads more
and to make ease abt ur spell prob,whenever u have any doubt on any spelling may be it easy or tuff just write the spelling and click the google written the write spelling of___________ u will get it
dont worry and dont hasitate as hum sabki kuch na kuch problame hai aur yaha humara jo friends hai including u they r so much helpfull that we can learn every thing from them
chotima mai aajkal main forum me kam hi aati hoon as i want only discuss abt vd so i spent in discussion thread and cc more isi lie late ho gai hoon plzzz dont mind
thanx for pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: RIMO9013

first of all u have done a good job to write the full update in english

the story is also going good but i think u should make madhu more smart and bold as the girls of this days are not soo much shy and they never put veils b4 marriage and the boys of rks status and standard dont like this type of timid girls so if u make her some more smart i think it will be more uptodate but chotima its completely my pov olz dont take it otherwise and i want u make focus more on leads and less on family members as as the readers and viewers r generally involve with leads more
and to make ease abt ur spell prob,whenever u have any doubt on any spelling may be it easy or tuff just write the spelling and click the google written the write spelling of___________ u will get it
dont worry and dont hasitate as hum sabki kuch na kuch problame hai aur yaha humara jo friends hai including u they r so much helpfull that we can learn every thing from them
chotima mai aajkal main forum me kam hi aati hoon as i want only discuss abt vd so i spent in discussion thread and cc more isi lie late ho gai hoon plzzz dont mind
thanx for pm me

THANKS FOR LONG LONG COMMENT
MY MADHU IS FROM SMALL VILLAGE OF RAJASTHAN IN INTERIOR OF RAJ GIRLS ARE NOT ALLOW TO COME IN FRONT OF MEN N WHEN THE GO OUT OF THEIR HOUSE THEN THEY HAVE TO PUT SLIGHT VEIL TO KEEP THEM SAFE
WAIT N WATCH HOW STORY MOVES YOU WILL NOT GET DISAPOINT WITH IT.
WHO HAS SO MUCH TIME SO BEAR WITH THEM
Edited by meenji22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for late commenting :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Superb part ,lahenga ws awsm ,
loved it ,
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
HERE IS NEXT UPDATE
HOPEFULLY THIS UPDATE WILL CLEAR YOUR ALL CONFUSIONS.
HOPE YOU WILL LIKE IT N GIVE US LONG LONG COMMENTS AS ON PREVIOUS UPDATES N HIT LIKE BUTTON.

ALL RETURN BACK BUT BHABHO STRAIGHT WENT TO PUNDIT HOUSE TO ASK MARRIAGE DATE. SHE RETURN HAPPILY N TOLD THEM MARRIAGE DATE IS FIXED AFTER ONE WEEK SO SHE ASK MOHAN TO DO ARRANGEMENTS ACCORDING TO IT. WHILE RETURNING BACK SHE INFORMED MALIK ABOUT MARRIAGE DATE.

WHEN THEY WERE TALKING ABOUT MARRIAGE N IT'S PREPRATIONS RK CAME OUT OF HIS ROOM HEARING THEIR EXCITED TALKS.HE GET CONFUSED N ASK-WHOSE MARRIAGE MADE YOU SO EXCITED

BHABHO - YOUR MARRIAGE PUNDITJI TAKE OUT MAHURAT AFTER ONE WEEK SO THIS MONDAY IS YOUR MARRIAGE

RK IN SHOCKED - WHAT MY MARRIAGE .WITHOUT ASKING ME

RADHA - YOU APRROVED GIRL YOUR SELF

RK - WHAT WHEN .WHO IS THE GIRL,

BHABHO - IN EVENING .YOU ACCEPTED THAT PROPOSAL .

RADHA - YOUR MALIK UNCLE DAUGHTER ,MADHU

RK - WHAT MADHU .SHE IS TO YOUNG HOW CAN I MARRY A GIRL WHO IS SO YOUNG TO ME.

MOHAN -BUT YOU SAID YOU LIKE HER.

RK - YES I LIKE HER BUT NOT LIKE THAT .SHE IS STILL A CUTE LITTLE GIRL FOR ME.I CANT EVER ACCEPT HER AS MY WIFE. N MOST IMP THING IS I LIKE DEEPALI . I DECIDED HER TO MAKE MY WIFE . SHE IT FIT TO ME N IN MY SOCITY.

RADHA - BUT YOU YOURSELF PRAISE HER .WE THOUGHT YOU ARE READY.

BHABHO - THAT'S WHY HER DADI GAVE YOU SHAGUN .

RADHA N MOHAN - WE DON'T LIKE DEEPALI,SHE IS NOT ACCEPTABLE TO US.

RK IN ANGER N IRRITATEDLY - BUT I WILL MARRY WITH DEEPALI AFTER RETURNING BACK I AM GOING TO PROPOSE HER.

RADHA - NO WAY, DEEPALI WILL NEVER ENTER IN MY HOUSE AS YOUR WIFE .WE HAVE SELECTED MADHU AS OUR BAHU.

RK- I AM NOT GOING TO MARRY HER.I WILL MARRY ONLY WITH DEEPALI

MOHAN - LISTEN RISHABH SHE IS NOT FIT FOR YOU NOR FOR OUR FAMILY. SHE IS USING YOU AS HER FOOT STEP TO RAISE N YOUR NAME FOR HER CARRIER.

RK - HOW DO YOU KNOW

MOHAN - WE HAVE SEEN WORLD MORE THAN YOU N ITS FINAL WE WILL NOT ACCEPT HER AS OUR BAHU NOR ALLOW HER TO ENTER IN OUR HOUSE.

RK - N MY DECISION IS ALSO FINAL I WILL MARRY DEEPALI NOT MADHU.SHE CAN GET BETTER MATCH THAN ME ACC TO HER.

RADHA - N I AM ALSO DETTERMINED THAT DEEPALI WILL NOT ENTER IN OUR HOME UNTIL I AM ALIVE.AFTER MY DEATH YOU ARE FREE TO DO WHAT YOU WANT N WHOME YOU WANT TO SPEND YOUR WHOLE LIFE.

RK - MOM HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT

RADHA - BCZ I KNOW HER N MADHU VERY WELL I HAVE SEEN N OBSERVED HER FROM EVERY ANGLE. DEEPALI IS CARRIER ORIANTED GIRL SHE CANT BELIEVE IN RELATIONS . WE WANT GIRL FROM INDIA .

RK - BUT MOM, MADHU CANT MOVE IN MY SOCITY WITH ME.N SHE IS ONLY 12TH PASS.THEN HOW CAN SHE SURVIVE IN USA.

RADHA - SHE CAN MOVE WITH YOU IN YOUR SO CALLED MODERN SOCITY.WE WILL TEACH HER SHE IS A SHARP N INTELLIGENT GIRL SOON SHE WILL LEARN SOON BUT YOUR MODERN SOCITY DEEPALI CANT LIVE IN VILLAGE FOR ONE DAY .SHE EVEN DON'T KNOW HOW TO MAKE TEA N COFFEE.THEN HOW CAN YOU THINK TO BRING HER IN OUR HOUSE.

RK - BUT I AM NOT GOING TO MARRY MADHU .REVERSE THE SHAGUNS I AM LEAVING TOMORROW.N BY THE WAY WHO IS COMING TO THIS VILLAGE THEN DEEPALI CHANCE IS ZERO FOR COMING HERE.

BHABHO - NOBODY IS GOING ANY WHERE .RISHABH YOUR MARRIAGE IS FIXED WITH YOUR CONCERNT.NOW YOU WILL NOT DENY IT.MOST IMPORTANT THING THEY HAD GIVEN YOU SHAGUN N WE HAD ALSO GIVE SHAGUN TO MADHU SO THAT MARRIAGE WILL NOT CANCLE IN ANY CASE.N TELL ME ON MY CRIMNATION YOU WILL NOT COME TO SEE ME LAST TIME .YOU HAVE TO DO ALL MY CRIMNATION CEREMONY

RK - THAT IS DIFFERENT ISSUE.N MY SWEET DARLING BHABHO WILL NOT DYE SO SOON .SHE HAS TO SEE MY CHILDREN N PLAY WITH THEM.WHO WILL TELL THEM BED TIME STORIES IS YOU DYE SO SOON.

BHABHO -BUT CHILDREN FROM MADHU . YOU ARE TELLING TO REVERSE THE SHAGUN.IF WE REVERSE THE SHAGUN THEN NO ONE WILL MARRY WITH HER.RISHABH THIS IS VILLAGE EVERY ONE START BLAMING HER FOR BREAKING RISTA.N THEN ONLY ONE OPTION WILL LEFT FOR HER TO CUMMIT SUSIDE.

RK - BUT BHABHO JUST FEW HRS BACK THIS HAPPENED THEN HOW WILL THEY KNOW

BHABHO- THIS IS VILLAGE MY CHILD .HERE WALLS ALSO HAD EARS N I WENT TO PUNDIT SURPANCH WAS ALSO THERE. SO HERE NEWS FLOWS WITH AIR. STILL YOU WANT TO CANCLE IT N MAKE HER LIFE HELL THEN OK .MOHAN GO N BROKE THIS RISHTA .WHAT WILL BE WRITTEN IN THAT POOR WITHOUT MOTHER GIRL FAITH LET HER FACE.WHY TO WAIT FOR MORNING GO JUST NOW BEFORE SHAMSHER SPEND ANY HIS HARD EARNED MONEY.N ASK HIM TO SPEND HIS MONEY ON MADHU CRIMNATION NOT ON HER MARRIAGE.

BHABHO GET UP IN ANGER N CLOSE HER ROOM DOOR.

RK IN SHOCKED STATE - BHABHO OOO

MOHAN IN ANGER - IF ANY THING HAPPEN TO HER THEN YOU CAN THINK OF YOUR FAITH.N THAT WILL BE NOT GOOD FOR YOU.

RADHA RUSH TOWARDS BHABHO ROOM - BHABHO OPEN THE DOOR . PLZ HE WILL MARRY ONLY WITH MADHU NOT ANY ONE ELSE.

RK - MOM...

RADHA - NOW NOT A SINGLE WORD AGAINT THIS MARRIAGE.IF ANY THING HAPPEN TO HER THEN YOU KNOW WHAT HAPPENED YOU CANT IMAGINE WHAT WILL MADHU DO .SHE WILL KILL YOU .

MOHAN -YOU DON'T KNOW HER. SHE IS SAKSHAT CHANDI IF ANY ONE HURT HER LOVE ONES EVEN THINK ABOUT IT.

RK MENTALLY CURSED HIMSELF FOR COMING HERE N MENTALLY DECIDE WHAT EVER BE THE CURCUMTANSIS I WILL GIVE HER DIVORCE N MARRY DEEPALI AFTER REATURNING BACK.BUT HE WAS ALSO SCARED WITH BHABHO ILLNESS DUE TO HIM IF ANY THING BAD WILL HAPPEN THEN HE WILL NEVER FORGIVE HIMSELF.

RK LOUDLY BUT WORRIEDLY - BHABHO,OPEN THE DOOR N SAVE ME FROM YOUR LOVILY DAUGHTER. HOW CAN SHE DO THIS TO ME .AFTER ALL I AM HER WOULD BE HUSBAND

BHABHO I AM READY TO MARRY HER.NOW OPEN THE DOOR.

BHABHO FROM INSIDE - I CAN'T HERE PROPERLY SAY IT LOUD

RK - I - AM"READY - TO MARRY HER.

BHABHO - HER TO WHOME

RK - YOUR MADHU .NOW PLZ OPEN THE DOOR N LET US COME IN.

BHABHO - ONE MORE PROMISE.

RK IRRITADEDLY - WHAT

BHABHO - YOU WILL MARRY HER WITH FULL ACCEPTANCE NOT HALF HEARTEDLY N ALWAYS KEEP HER HAPPY.

RK - I WILL. I DON'T WANT TO DYE SO SOON WITH YOUR OR YOUR LOVILY BETI'S HAND .

BHABHO OPEN THE DOOR N CAME OUT .WHAT DO YOU MEAN WE ARE NOT A MURDERER.

RK - BUT DAD JUST TOLD ME IF ANY THING HAPPENED TO YOU SHE WILL KILL ME N IF ANY THING HAPPENED TO HER THEN YOU WILL KILL ME.

BHABHO LAUGH LOUDLY- YES HE SAID TRUTH.
RK - BHABHO I WILL MARRY HER FOR YOUR SAKE BUT CANT GIVE HER LOVE AS HUSBAND.STILL SHE IS TOO YOUNG FOR ME .
BHABHO -I AM NOT WORRIED ABOUT THAT SHE IS MY LITTLE JAADUGARNI SHE WILL MAKE YOU FALL IN HER LOVE BUT I WARNING YOU DONT EVEN THINK TO HURT HER .
PRE CAP - RISHBALA MARRIAGE N MADHU STUBBORNNESS


Edited by meenji22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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YOUR TIME STARTS NOW
PLZ DO COMMENTS N HIT LIKE BUTTON
Edited by meenji22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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EDTED...awsm updt...rk is so stuuborn...hhe gt to knw that hhs marrige fxed to madhu...so he denied t...bt ourr babho radha and mohhan smhow convince hm by blackmalng...one good thnng...he dnt hate madhu stll helkes hhr and cares 4 hhr... juust love babho and Madhus bond..waitng to see madhus stubborness...updt soon...So rk tld babho that he wll ntt accept adhu as wife whole heartdly bt babho has trust on hr jadugarni madhu thhat she wllmake rk to fall in love with hhr...
Edited by samidsamid - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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good one. so cute the family treatning/blackmailing RK to accept madhu. just love cant wait to read the following cchapters. thanks dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
ha ha RK got blackmailed to accept Madhu so that he marry her well he will one day soon accept and love her !! 😳love the nice update andt hanks for pm !! 😊
Edited by -ChitraRocking- - 10 years ago

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