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Posted: 10 years ago
Shocking Update

Sultan is now back and he too realizes that he loves Muskaan
but now it seems that Muskaan is married to Maan
Rishab and Madhu are now really in love and things are going smooth for them

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update dear
waiting for the next
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Posted: 10 years ago
I request all of u 2 vote here. If Vivian wins the poll there will be Vivian Drashti romance in this story.
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Obsession Part 19
Sorry for less Rishbala in this update.Rishbala romance doesn't suit this update at this point.

There will be Rishbala moments in the next update.




RISHAB to the lady whom they met at the hotel:Are you talking about Muskaan?
She:Yes.
MADHU:Muskaan is my twin sister.I'm Rishab Kundra's wife Madhu.
She:Oh!I'm sorry.
MADHU:It's ok.
She:But Muskaan did'nt tell us about having a twin sister.
MADHU:Actually due to some problems she left Bombay.We were not in touch with her for the last few years.We came here in search of her.
She:Oh!Her husband Maan Singh Khurana had told us their story.
MADHU:What did he say?
She:He said they both were in love.Muskaan's family opposed their marriage.So they eloped and got married.After that they got settled in Nainital.They have no contact with their family.Good thing that atleast now you all came in search of them.
MADHU:Your good name please?
She:Ragini Mehta.
MADHU:Can you please give their address?
R:Sure.
She gives them the address.
R:Visit them as soon as possible.They will be really happy.Now there is one more member in that family.Aryan.Muskaan and Maan's son.
Rishab and Madhu are shocked.

R:Ok bye..
MADHU:Bye.
Ragini goes.
RISHAB:I just can't believe this.Muskaan remarried?
MADHU:I'm also shocked.Maan was our college mate.He was Muskaan's best friend.
RISHAB:How will i tell bro that Muskaan is married and has a son also?
Madhu is very upset.
MADHU:Rishab..we find out the what the exact condition is.What if things we heard are not true?

RISHAB:We will find out.Till then we should not tell anything to Sultan.
MADHU:Yes.






Maan's Dadimaa Savitri Devi sits near him.
SAVITRI:Did you confess your love to Muskaan?
MAAN:No Dadimaa.
SAVITRI:Since college days you have been trying to propose to Muskaan.Till now you could'nt confess.
MAAN:I get nervous when i try to propose.
SAVITRI:You became late in proposing to her.So you lost her once.She got married.Again God has given you a chance.If you become late again...you may lose her again.
MAAN:But Dadimaa..I am scared.What if she does'nt love me?
SAVITRI:Tomorrow is your birthday.If she remembers your birthday and celebrates it that means your birthday is important for her.That is... she loves you.




MAAN:Dadimaa..
SAVITRI:Don't worry.Everything will be fine.

The next morning...

Maan comes out of his room.

Muskaan walks towards him saying "Happy birthday Maan..."

He smiles.He thinks of his Dadimaa's words that if Muskaan remembers his birthday that means she loves him.

MAAN:I just can't control my happiness Muskaan.You remember my birthday...you always forget my birthday.But this time you remember my birthday.

Mus:Yes...In college I really felt bad for forgetting your birthday always.So I marked today's date in my calendar in advance.I did'nt want to forget it this time.

MAAN:Why you did'nt want to forget my birthday this year?Because you love me.Right?

Muskaan is stunned:Maan!What did you say?

MAAN:Muskaan...I was sure that if you remember my birthday that means you love me.I was so tensed about it.But today I am so happy Muskaan.You remembered my birthday to make me happy.That shows you value my happiness.Because you love me.

Muskaan is shocked.

Muskaan remembers Maan giving her rose and asking her if she gets jealous when girls give him roses.

She asks in her mind:Is Maan in love with me?
MAAN:Do you know Muskaan...?Since college days I have been trying to propose to you.But I could never propose to you.No girl gave me roses Muskaan.Those roses were brought for you only.But I was scared whether you will reject them if you come to know my real feelings for you.But since I know that you also love me now I can tell you with courage that I love you.

Muskaan is shocked.
Muskaan thinks:Maan has been loving me since college days? That is why he accepted Aryan.That is why he tried to save my reputation by making the world believe that I am his wife and Aryan is his son.
Muskaan feels upset.
Muskaan remembers her past.
Flash back...
Maan saw Muskaan walking alone on the road like a mad woman.It was a hopeless sight. He confronts her.
Maan:What is this Muskaan?
She cries:I'm suffering because of the sin I did.
She tes him everything.



Maan:Muskaan,i can't leave you alone.You come with me.


She cries:No.I can't.I don't want to be a burden for you.
Maan:You are my best friend.You will never be a burden for me.I will not leave you and go.If I go,you will be with me.
Mus:Maan...
He holds her hand:Come with me Muskaan.
She does'nt refuse.They both get inside the car and travel to his home.
In Maan's Mansion...
Muskaan vomits.Maan and Savitri sees it.
Sav:Muskaan...are you ok?
She weeps:I am pregnant.
They are shocked.
Mus:I knew it before.But before I could surprise Sultan we got separated.My child will be fatherless.He will be ridiculed by the society.
She cries.
Maan:No Muskaan.Your child will not face any insult.I will give my name to him.He will be known as my son.
Muskaan is shocked:Maan...
Maan:Don't oppose me.
Sav:Yes...Maan said right.I'm proud of my Maan beta now.
Muskaan weeps:Thank you Maan.
Maan smiles.
Present...

Her mind says:When Sultan and my father ditched me, only Maan was there for me.If he was'nt there,I would not have had a safe life.My son would not have had an identity if he was'nt accepted by Maan.So I should not break his heart.But I can't accept him as my life partner.But if I tell him that he will be shattered.What will I do?Anyways I should not break his heart on his birthday.
She controls her tears.
Suddenly Maan notices her serious face.
MAAN:What happened Muskaan? Are you not happy?
Mus:Why are you asking like that?



Maan:Simply.So you are happy.Right?

Muskaan tries to change the topic.

Mus:Maan...I have to do arrangements for the party.

Maan:Muskaan...

Mus:What Maan?

Maan goes and brings a saree for her.

Maan:I wish you wear this saree for the evening party.

Mus:Sure Maan.

He smiles.

In the evening Maan goes to Muskaan's room.

He sees her wearing ornaments.He keeps looking at her beauty in the blue saree he gifted her.


She turns back and gets surprised to see Maan.

Mus:Maan!

Maan:Muskaan...you look very beautiful in this saree.My selection was right.

She smiles.


Maan's birthday celebration in the evening...

Muskaan brings a cake.Maan smiles seeing her bringing cake for him.

Savitri i:Maan...you are lucky...Muskaan baked this cake specially for you.

Maan looks at Muskaan happily.She smiles slightly.

MAAN:Yummy!



Maan cuts the birthday cake and gives a piece of cake to Savitri and Aryan.

Then he turns his face towards Muskaan.He feeds her cake with his hand.




Muskaan feeds him back.




Music is going on.

"Baby I can see the sun rising
In your eyes
Baby everytime I think of you
You make me smile
Baby I'll be your every dream
You should know
Baby I'll never ever wanna
Let you go

Baby..

Zindagiki neendo ki
Subah ishq hai (Baby)
Badi khoobsurat si
Sazza ishq hai
Humko pyar hua..
Puri hui dua
Humko pyar hua..
Puri hui dua.."(Ready).

Maan remembers dancing with Muskaan on a romantic song at the college on Prom night.

Tu Mere Paas Bhi Hai, Tu Mere Saath Bhi Hai
Tu Mere Paas Bhi Hai, Tu Mere Saath Bhi Hai
Phir Bhi Tera Intezaar Hai

Tu Mere Paas Bhi Hai, Tu Mere Saath Bhi Hai
Tu Mere Paas Bhi Hai, Tu Mere Saath Bhi Hai
Phir Bhi Tera Intezaar Hai
Tu Mere Paas Bhi Hai Aa Ha Ha Ha Ha Tu Mere Saath Bhi Hai...(Satya).

Aryan:Maan uncle and Dadimaa..dance...
Mus:No..no..
MAAN:You love dancing.Right?In college we used to dance together for all functions.Then why are you not dancing with me now?
Muskaan has no answer.
Slowly Maan holds her hands and dance.Muskaan can't refuse it in front of others.


Rishab and Madhu reach their house.They are shocked to see Maan and Muskaan dancing together.

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update...!! Hope all misunderstandings get clear and sulkaan turn into a happy family :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Maan is real very nice and he loves Muskaan
He supported her when she has left all alone
now what is Muskaan going to do
Will she go back to Sultan or accepts
Maan's love to show her gratitude
Edited by vasavi_sri - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey jasmine The link above which u have given to vote is not opening for me :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update, hope all the misunderstanding are clear and Muskan and sultan are together.
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Posted: 10 years ago
So muskan is staying with Maan as his wife?
Ultranationalist will be heart broken.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I want muskaan n sullu together but after seeing maan's selfless love i dont want him to b heartbroken
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Who is muskaan going to choose. Maan or sultan?
Want more of,Rishabala.😳

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