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Posted: 10 years ago
awww jasmin its so nice twist i just love it and u made rishabh and madhus character more mature and stronger and understanding and here we got a rishbala eyelock also
am soo happy
lovely update dear
waiting for the next
thanks for pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. waiting...hw madhu will fall for rishab.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I thank all of u 4 commenting on this FF

I thank Sydell a lot for the surprise banner she made for me.
Obsession Part 8



Thanku Rimsha 4 letting me use her Sulbala creation.

Sultan wakes up from his sleep.


He sees Muskaan drying her wet hair.
He is mesmerized by her beauty.

Seeing it she blushes.She goes closer to him.He leans towards her face.

She kicks his shoulder in a funny way and says:Happy birthday sweet heart.

He is surprised.

Sultan:O!I had forgotten it.

Mus:No problem as I'm there to remember your birthday.

He smiles:You are my luck Madhu.

She smiles.

Muskaan brings a small cake to Sultan.
SULTAN:Oh!What a surprise..I never expected cake.

Mus:I wanted to surprise you.So you got surprised.Right?
He smiles:Yes.You made my birthday special.
She smiles.

Rishab who passes by sees it and stares at Muskaan.
He thinks:Look at her pretending like Madhu.
Suddenly Sultan puts the cake's cream all over her face.
She is irritated.
Mus:What did you do?
Rishab watches it with a smile.
He thinks:Now Muskaan will show her real nature.She can't control her anger.Slowly she will expose herself.However we try to hide the truth,one day the truth will be out and Sultan will understand the truth.
Muskaan is about to burst out.Suddenly she comes back to her senses.
She thinks:Control..if I get angry,Sultan will doubt..Madhu is very calm.She does'nt get angry.
Slowly she smiles.
Sultan laughs:You look very funny.

She also laughs.
Rishab is wondered.
He thinks:Muskaan is a great actress.See how beautifully she acts like an innocent girl.

Evening...
Sultan's birthday party...
Unknowingly Rishab's eyes search for Madhu.Finally Madhu arrives.Rishab's eyes glitter.He looks at her deeply.She has worn a red salwar suit.Her straight hair is flowing.Rishab can't take his eyes off her.Madhu looks at him with discomfort and tension.



She is uncomfortable as she is aware of the fact that now Rishab knows her identity.She bends her eye balls due to over consciousness.

Rishab goes near Madhu.
He looks at her face deeply.
Suddenly they hear a voice:Madhu!
They are shocked to hear Sultan call her Madhu'.

Madhu and Rishab get tensed.
Madhu thinks:Did Rishab tell him the truth?
Rishab thinks:How did Sultan know that she is Madhu?
Muskaan comes there.
Mus:Sultan..why are you here?


Rishab and Madhu are relieved knowing that Sultan called Muskaan only Madhu'.

Sultan looked at Muskaan.
SULTAN:Hi Muskaan...I came here to call Madhu.I was searching for her.Now only I found her.

He looked at Madhu:Madhu...the party is going to start.


Madhu and Rishab were tensed as Sultan called Madhu Madhu' itself.
Muskaan laughs:You fool..I am Madhu.That is Muskaan.
SULTAN:Don't try to fool me.You are Muskaan.That is Madhu.I can recognise my Madhu.


Madhu and Muskaan are tense.They started sweating.
Mus:No,I am Madhu.


SULTAN:No way.You are Muskaan for sure.Look at the appearance.Madhu is not that stylish like you.And I can't be wrong in recognizing my Madhu.
It pricked Madhu's heart.
Muskaan was upset.
Madhu:Sultan...I am Muskaan.Not Madhu.Madhu had a make over.That's all.



Madhu is nervous thinking whether Sultan will believe her or not.
Rishab tells him softly with a slight smile:They are telling the truth Sultan.She is Muskaan.Otherwise why should she be with me?





Mus:It's ok.Come.
SULTAN:Ok.Rishab:..Muskaan..come...let us start the celebration.
RISHAB:We are coming bro.You both go.
SULTAN:Ok.
Sultan and Muskaan go.Muskaan is still nervous as she had a narrow escape.

MADHU:I got scared.I thought you told him the truth.


RISHAB:Don't worry.I will not break my promise.




She smiles softly:Thanks a lot Rishab.You don't know what a big favour you did for us.




He smiles.

Sultan cuts the birthday cake and gives a piece to Muskaan.She feeds him cake.Then she puts the cream all over his face.
SULTAN:Hey...
Muskaan chuckles:In the morning you did this to me no..
SULTAN:Hey you naughty..I don't know why..you have changed a lot.You have become bubbly like Muskaan.
Muskaan becomes dull.
SULTAN:But I love your nature.
Muskaan is relieved.She smiles.
SULTAN:Thanks a lot for arranging this grand birthday party.I am lucky to have you as my wife.I love you.
Muskaan blushes.



Rishab gets irritated.He said in his mind:Bro...you don't know that she is fooling you with her sweet smile.I am sad that you are not a lucky husband.That's why you got a cunning wife like her.


The song is 'Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz..'{Jurm} is played.
Sultan-Muskaan start dancing.Rishab goes near Madhu.Slowly he holds her soft skinned hands and dances.

Rishab is not able to take his eyes off Madhu's innocent face.Madhu is really uncomfortable with it.

After the party...
Rishab looks at Madhu:Madhu...
Madhu:Bye Rishab.
Her decision to leave immediately was unexpected for him.
R:You...you are not staying here till the end of the party?

Madhu:No...
Rishab:Why?
Madhu:I am not needed here.This occasion is important only for Muskaan.
He doesn't know what to say.
Rishab and Madhu parts off their ways.Rishab feels unknown pain to be away from Madhu.

Rishab thinks:I fell in love with Madhu thinking that she is Muskaan.After knowing that she is not Muskaan also am I longing for Madhu?
He is confused.

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
Rishab falls in love with madhu... 😊
Edited by arorasurbhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow rishab fell in luv with madhu hope madhu fast relizse depth of rishab luv
Awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rk unknowingly has started loving madhu
Now waiting for madhu to fall in love with rk
Superb update
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Posted: 10 years ago
I feel sorry for sultan !! I wonder wat will happen when he come to know abt the truth and even rk know that !! ahaan rk falling in love wid madhu !! Nice update ! Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Wow rishab unknowingly fell in love with madhu
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome amazing update dear. thanks for giving us such a marvelous. twist. all d parts r amazing n beautifully written by u. this is d bestest ever story on rishabala hats of to u. what an amazing update dear. so madhu become muskan n muskan bcm madhu. whatever muskan did was wrong but rishabala r meant to b together. so it doesn't matter much. n rishabala sizzling r going to b start. d way this story is going I must say this ff ll create a history on rishabala. n sry I didn't comment on part-6&7 coz I didn't get time to come here. but now on u ll get quick response from me whenever u update. n thanks for d pm dear

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