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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#261

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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Tainar

@Tainar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#262

FINALLY!! 😃 We get to say Bye Bye to DipNagin. Hope we are not forced to say Hello Hi to her again, just in case she decides to align with Sultan.

Why do I have a feeling that Sultan is now going to cause more trouble in my babies lives? Is he the boss over Tony? The offer to lend money to RK could have just part of his sick, twisted game to gain control over both RK and Madhu's lives. 😕

Now I am absolutely thrilled that RK can now pay Tony to keep Madhu. But I wish he would take just 2 minutes to just call his house and speak to her. I hope she's still around by the time he gets back to his home sweet home! Initially, before I found out the reason behind RK's actions, I wanted Madhu to run away before Tony arrived. After, of course, she has made arrangements to get Manav safely away from the boarding school. Now I hope she won't take any such action. Need my babies to work together and be Team Rishbala!! 😃😆😆

Thank you for the awesome update booboo! I demand that you put up the next chapter ASAP! 😃

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Seat belt is buckled on tight but I have a feeling we haven't seen the real bumps in the road yet. I'm so thrilled Radhaji did something good for the son that worshipped her. Granted what she did in the end she couldn't be redeemed but at least this was something. Can't say I will miss Dips but I do hope to NEVER EVER EVER see her again. I hope somehow she won't call someone like Tony or Sultan and tell them about Madhu because evil people somehow are always connected to other evil people.

I still hope Sultan was just a drive by in the story but I have this nagging feeling he will sticking around for a bit longer. Ugh! Can't you just pop me in the story for like two line where I kill him and Mukund??? Just saying. LOL

I demand an update! I much prefer these thrilling updates then those sad painful dark ones you were vomiting, not that those weren't phenomenal but this didn't make me cry. I read, I went to sleep with a smile on my face and dread in my heart. The other shoe will fall soon.

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teekay

@teekay

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: nanor
thats checkmate.. he screwed her game and she was back to square one... i would have loved her to see in prison😡.. i just hope everything goes well and madhu and rishabh get together...

I would love to see her in prison too. Perhaps, in good time.😊

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teekay

@teekay

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: ashitha235
Wow !!! First let me clap for you for bringing such a nice twist...👏 loved it... finally RK got something from Radha for loving her truly as mother... this helped him to come out of the hell dipali created for him... ha ha loved dipali's reaction... she was so sure of destroying RK.. after everything she is thinking of finding other bakra, she dont regret anything😡...but our RK is too clever... loved the update...
Hope you dont bring sultan in the story... cant see our rishbala in any more trouble...
Y am having feeling that madhu wouldnt be there in mansion.. she herself has thought of some solution and ran... or she may not accept RK.. missed her in two updates... want to her point and feelings about that night... again have to wait...🥱🤢
Fabulous update... loving all the twists and turns you r bringing in this story...thnx for the pm... continue soon pls😊

RK got a hint from Radha. Intentionally or unintentionally, she did help RK finally defeat Dipali, even though she deserves worse.

Twists and turns is the name of the game for a while. I am experimenting with the plot style😊

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teekay

@teekay

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: noiseygirl
sorry taru I was not commenting for previous chapters as I was sick then busy ,,,,so coming to the update An awesome update
I was thinking that I was dreaming O god RK fixed allthing,,,My hero
But now question is that is Madhu is in his home now??? Or she left
And if she there will she forgive RK???
Excellent update dear

No problem, honey. I hope you are better. Answers in the next update(s)?😊

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teekay

@teekay

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: silverfire
Awesome...awesome...awesome...
Even I had a smile after reading this update.
I did guess right, RADHAJI helped him in the end.
OMG! Dipali is an even bigger criminal than we thought.
Now I only hope madhu forgives him n let him free her from that hell.
Tony should accept the money n release her.
Thanks a lot for such an lovely update.

Yep, you did guess right👏👏

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teekay

@teekay

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: abba12
Brilliant ..so many emotions in ur story ...👏
U have done an awesome job ...
Aall parts r superbly written ... Didn't feel bored even once while reading all in one go .. That's amazing thing ...
Rk finally realized his love for her ...n gave dips the taste of her own medicine ... That was a turning point ...
Felt bad for both madhu n rishabh at some points .both seemed helpless ..
And for a second o thought he will really get black money from sultan ...
But y my gut feeling ayaing he will come back in story at some point ...
N there is something drastic gonna happen .. The way happy RK is going back to mansion ...will he find her ..is she still there ?? Will she forgive him ???
Too much of questions ...n suspense ...want to know her reaction ...
Keep updating fast. .n if possible n easy for u pm plz ...Wese I will kepp checking myself too :-p

Thank you for reading!!! This is a heavy story to read in a go! :) Thank you for your feedback - really appreciate it.

I do update fast...crazy fast actually...keep up!

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teekay

@teekay

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: Anntempleton
Brilliant update! Finally Rk found a way but I m afraid if he is late.
I love the fact that you see keeping us at edge wondering what will happen.
Whatever happens in future don't make madhu go back to that hell. Will be waiting for next part. :)

Yep, this is the edge-of-the-seat phase of the story.

You can tell me later if you like it better or worse than the tearjerker chapters I am so infamous for writing.😛

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teekay

@teekay

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: aravindam100
Omg.. Hatts f yaar. Suprb. I m having Tachycardia haaahaaa. Bt i m getting a negatv feel. I thnk Madhu will left b4 Rk reachd. Muje aisa feel Aah raha hai. Hop its nt lik dat. Fingrcrzzz

Hold on to your heart dear!!!!

I would have to put a health warning on my stories next😆