Rishbala Os - Whispers in the dark.

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Titli

@afterlife.

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

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so that's the obsession of a stupid ghost friend who wants to take her bestie back with her..poor Trish. She couldn't play with her Madhu in heaven.. Lol.. Thank God Rishabh said those counter-obsession lines to her n the bulb flickered inside the ghost's brain.. LMAO. She finally left her friend. *relief *

Thanks for this horror os shriya. Had real fun to read.its one of my fav genre.. :)

Edited by Miss_uliuli - 10 years ago

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-Ronnie-

@-Ronnie-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Totally loved it!!..

horror is something we don't get to read everyday...I've written one long back too, didn't post it yet...hehe

Trishna parts were awesome!.. totally creepy as it was supposed to be👍🏼

Great work shriya ❤️

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..Giovanni..

@..Giovanni..

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wow that was super scary! :O Love it! Even I love horror ;)

PS- Do you feel like that evil Annabelle doll commented here? :P Rofl

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Amazing OS thk god trish left madhu i was hell scraied

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

OMG!! I loved it...it was outstanding...plz write more such stories

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

aahh it was really scary !! Reading it at 1:22 am when all lights are off and seeing myself in mirror reading this ff is hell Scary !!

It was like a short horror movie nicely written !! Especially those mid parts in kitchen and those in bedrooms were really scary !!

Thanks for pm !!

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Nice os.👏

loved it.😛

hehe...trishna left just like that.😆 Possessive friend but very reasonable too.😆 she decides that she is mine dialogue suits rk more than her😆

thanks for d pm dear.😳

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

ohh mY god..was so scary..man man...

Shriya..love u gal..this is just superb..I am a gr8 fan of thrillers and Horrors and this piece is just amazing...

Thank you soo sooo much for it 👏👏👏

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Its Awesum and lovely. Thank God I didn't read it at nyt warna dar ki wajah se nind nhi aati.

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Shriya kadge

@shriyakadge

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -Vinu-
OMG finally the wait is over!🤣 I felt like I was waiting a century to read your OS! 🤣Too bad Shriyu you wouldn't have mentioned that it is a gift! Or else I won't bug you much! 😆But yeah! since it's my favourite genre I just couldn't wait to read it! Anyways it's worth the wait! 😉😆

So the story starts with RK & Madhu shifting to that 'awesome' house! 🤣 Aahan I am dreaming to spend a night in a haunted house in real life! 🤣Madhu was scared with that sudden reflection she saw first!😲 Trish! Her first appearance! I already imagined that scene! See how crazy am I! 🤣

Whoa I loved Trishna!😲 Lmao 🤣strange nah? You have written it very nicely I almost felt like watching a film! Imagining all those scenarios from each line to line! Aww poor Trishna she wanted her bestie to join her! That's what called best friends! Hehe 😆

But don't worry I won't haunt you if I die first Shriyu! 🤣Loved the OS in to bits! ❤️Keep writing more & more! 😆Thanks a ton for making my birthday special ! 🤗I love you the MOST!😡🤣 I know we can argue about this a lifetime! Lmao 🤣

You better not plan of going to a haunted house or something -.- Glad u liked it 😆 Lol...even if u haunt me I wouldnt be afraid like Madhu. Infact i would scare u 😆 N finally, I love u the MOST 🤣

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