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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

luved d OS but u killed our rishbala n such a brutal death

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Swati

@PRATHA1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Nina! Its very funny OS!
Evil Rohan killed Mr. Santa & Mrs. Santa😲 But how did he come there?😕
Ha! As you said, it's somewhat illogical, don't search logic😆
Thanks for pm me!

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RM14

@RM14

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Nina Happy New Year to you.🤗 Its an awesome OS and very different one.😛 I loved Rk as Mr. Santa and Madhu as Mrs. Santa,😳just wow, and the way they were going on sliegh,i mean its really lovely and seriously i wanted to read more about them doing celebrations on christmas etc. 😃 But someone ended my hopes🤔 and why this Rohan have to come and kill our santa Rishbala.😡 Well how these type of ideas came into your mind.🤣 I didn't like killing of Rishbala honestly,i wanted them back in the story somehow and kill that Rohan,you made the villain win,😆Ok everytime its not necessary that Hero -Heroine should win,but this type of brutal death,nooo,i want them back,#Fanpower.😡 Anyways as a writer you've tried something different and i loved this OS minus the end.It could be little longer,but i enjoyed reading it.😃

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tavamm

@tavamm

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Wow!! New year gift aah!! Awesome. ..different concept as mr & mrs rk is sc!
Enjoy reading it. Thanks for the gift. Happy New year.
thanks for the pm.

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

ok quite very illogical but diff nd awesome one.. 😉

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RIMO9013

@RIMO9013

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

its a very different theme as rk is santa and madhu is mrs santa ,love dthat part where rk eats the cookies and milk,

but at the end rk madhu died

any ways i really love the totally different concept of the os

love u sis

happy new year dear

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Titli

@afterlife.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

😊 thanks for the new year gift. I will unres soon..
OMG!! I have read the whole OS with wide eyes.🤣 What is this?? RIshbala became Santa..well that's so sweet.😳😳 But what happened after that? Who's this bustard Rohan n why he killed them?😕😕😕 I think he didn't like his gifts!🤣🤣 also he completed their left-over job!!! that's so insane..the most insane story I've ever read!👏 From where u got this out-of-bag idea Nisha?😲😲😲
Anyways Ni hapyy new year to u..⭐️ thanks for PM.😊

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Boo Bear

@-Babydoll_Pooh-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

See Ni di I am in the last to comment😆

So cool na? From first three to last to comment what an improvement in me. 🤣

I knew that you were going to write an os on santa claus but I didn't expect a tragic end at the end. though it was a happy one for me😆

Well like when I was reading the part where Madhu was putting make up I was laughing and was pitying on Rk...Poor Rk🤣 and next when Rk was taking to the elfs and when the elfs told that they were late in distributing the presents I was like helll shocked that Rk was the Santa...and when Madhu was adjusting her Beard while Rk's fake beard was itching I was rofling! 🤣

And then when Mr and Mrs. Santa Claus where going to distribute gifts to the last city My hero entered!😆 I was...like this 🤣 when he pushed that Makeupbala down but I was sad that he killed My Rk! And now together Mr. and Mrs. Santa Claus live an Happily ever after in the Heaven 🤣

My Rohan! My hero you did a great job killing that Makeupbala but still I expected you to kill taht Makeupbala brutually like how di killed her in her story...🤣 but never mind😆 and you did a bad job killing Rk Rohan!🤣

But no problem and did you forget I still didn't get My Christmas present that means you are coming to My City to give presents and You are coming to My House to give the present and yeah you already know what my present is right? 🤣

Okk now Ni di I hope you have got your Christmas gift 😆 by Mr. and Mrs. Santa Claus but now it's my turn to get gift from My hero! My Rohan! 🤣 And a secret Ni di actually when Rohan is coming to give m gifts I am going to kidnap him and keep him with me forever 🤣

Please don't tell this to Rohan di!😆

And now Thanks a lot for the pm !😆

Happy New Year to you and your family Ni di!😆

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

😆😆hey Nish..thanks for the PM.

😆...frankly..i have never ever read smthgn abt killing a santa and his lady too...ohh my...from where you got such an idea🤣

next why was he killed...and too in such a blood shed and gruesome way...ohh my..Y you hate our cutie RK so much 🤪🤣

and then Madhu too...u hate her too...what good thing Bittuji has done ..u left him alive...bad haan very bad 😆

once again thanks for such a thought provoking and merciless killing of that Makeupbala...Rohan ..porr bala her makeup culdn't able to sav eher...

lastly the elfs cribbing abt being late..ohh lord..aur kya kya padhneko milega

Happy new year Ni...awesome one..a different one too 👏

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k.atrina75

@k.atrina75

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

🤣 🤣

Just when I was thinking how cute and beautiful it seemed to have RK as the big chubby Santa and MD as his Mrs. Santa, you proved that its you who wrote it..

🤣

I was just thinking like-- Wow.. Nina wrote such a cute OS... I cant believe and then BANG! my balloon burst..

I mean did you really kill them or I misunderstood the whole thing..? 😆

Thats what I thought why were you explaining the sleigh with propeller so much.. 🤣

and not to forget.. I really impressed with this Rohan.. He picked RK up with like one hand... and that too not normal wla RK but the chubby RK with a big santa belly... he must be like really powerful..

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