RISHBALA TS : IN THE NAME OF DESTINY - Page 2

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kg15

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Posted: 10 years ago

Lovely start Sufi... Enjoyed it!

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow sufi, congrats on the new story, and happy that u wil update other parts soon, but this time u have to keep up ur word.

Now coming to the story, it seems to be a dark story, i guess rk and malik hiding something from madhu, the way u explained how rk likes to be alone and don't allow servants makes it stronger.

Evrn after madhu gets preggy, he allowed servants to work in day time, and to leave before he comes home, rk hiding something, whether he is the reason for the source of the sounds or he was vefy well aware of the reason of the source of the sound.

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Tanya Kaur

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Posted: 10 years ago

cute but confusing story.. what made madhu have these hallucinations all of a sudden?

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Love-Blossoms

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome os
loved it sufi ur sister is. grt writer like u
waiting for next part
n ofcourse ur updates too

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SreeRK

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice story..waiting to know if those sounds were true or hallucinations..update soon

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Crazy_Arshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Superb start
Is madhu really hallucinating or there is something else
Update soon

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Charlotte

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi Sufi, hows u? nice starting. is it something supernatural? ghost like? nice shot. thanks for the pm

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vasavi_sri

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice start

madhu is halluicnating but she feels it real

waiting for RK's pov to know the fact

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ratna232

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow ur sister is also awesome writer. waiting for Rk's point of view. hope it clears some doubts.

Waiting for all of ur FF's next parts.

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RIMO9013

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome story dear waiting for the next update

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