Rishbala TS: Obsession (updated on page 8)

silverfire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Well, I never expected this surprise. So both of them r dead. Sad. Nice TS.

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Chitra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

awesome update
loved it Tfs for pm 😃

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

nice update

I thought that RK is a ghost

and madhu will get scared

but u are saying katam kahani

and romancing in heaven so funny

but liked it

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SuRu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

brilliant haan titli dii I loved total punching concept!!!

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jalebi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

aww...awesome 2nd part!!

never thought it ws an horror piece!!

i thought Rk will survive in that accident but u killed madhu too!!

very different!!

okay, if not here, in heaven they can romance LOL!!

thanks for the pm dear!!

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vishtiholic19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

read the ts in one go😊 and my reactions changed like this throughout the story 😊 🥺😭😲.

Actually m still shocked with the eerie ending😆😆...

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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

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silent.desire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Part 1 - gandi bachi surprise heart attack ki tarah degi kya? 😡 😆

Ok back to your story, I love the description of Madhu and her commitment on RK. It must be difficult for her but still she loves him and why RK seems great guy. I love the care, possessiveness and want RK has to keep Madhu near him. They had small part but yet it felt we are knowing about their stories from ages. Their affection for each other is marvellous and Madhu cares for him so much. Hope Madhu stay strong and they get united again.

Thanks a lot to pen down this story and share it with me, you are a great writer and thoughtful person when writing stories. 🤗

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silent.desire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

ek tha raja ek thi rani/dono mar gaye/ khatam kahani! -> Tune comment khud maar diya hai main kya bolun. 😳 🤣 Kitne dino se nahin soyi tu... just joking.

Acha coming to story beside that RK dead become ghost or Madhu dead become ghost you can write a real ghostly story where RK and Madhu get stuck in haunted place or one from either and other one help to rescue first one... either way. I am saying you this because you really writes haunted and ghostly things too clearly to understand.

Thanks for writing and sharing with us Titli. 🤗

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Titli

@afterlife.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: rima4ever
next time please give a happy end 😊

replying to all of ur comments in a single quote..

I simply wanted to write a horror story but with a punch of love, it could be written as RK-Madhu gone for holiday and witnessing paranormal activities there in some haunted hotel or house. But it is too common! So I restrained from writing such story u know I hate ghissa pita stories. Yes, next time I will deliver a happywala love story

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