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Posted: 11 years ago
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sullu clean bowled LOL!! what a nice insult!!! love u neha baby for giving this super hilarious cum fantastic update!! i loved it!!
but when madhu thinks how Rk saved her at balrak time & now this useless sultan is not doing anything to save her & she was feeling her Rk around her & padmini insulting sullu LOL!! "chee.." haha...nicely she spitted insults & damaged his image completely well, he has no image at all LOL!! but seriously in all those places i could nowhere see madhu or padmini LOL...bcos i could see only you, neha!! LOL!! you over boosted Rk but though he is our superstar so he deserves it!! now come on paddo straight away go to hospital to see ur damaad to whom u gave budduva (in serial) i so wish she give some budduva to sullu too for not saving her daughter. well, go see Rk & get back all ur budduva's & marry ur daughter to the one who took bullet in ur madhu's place!!
i thought this time also our mahaan bala will give blood but nah...Rk's sherni sister is there to save him!! i like natasha!! she is a carbon copy of Rk!! female version LOL!! glad u didn't bring any dipali or ria part 2!! now looking forward to see how her character gonna shape up!! waiting for next update but dont know whether i could read as soon as u post & comment!! my exams are keeping me delayed!! sorry!! thanks for the pm & i have sent buddy request to ur new account so accept it send me pm further too baby!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
I am glad that u ppl r loving this story
thanxx a ton for ur lovely commens , i ll try to be regular too as my seessionals n exams r hovering over me n if keep on dragging this story , i will just forget wat i have my planned , so no delayings , i ll try my level
best to post daily .
PART 4

Madhus pov

Everyone stood outside the ot while natasha was in giving blood to rk , suddenly i recalled the time wen i
gave blood to him , n i went back in my memories frm the time i n rk met ,
maa revealing his good side to me
then rk getting shot , him supporting me n stooding up for me n then his confessions
his fighting with balraj n then finally our seperation , n since then our fights till the time he went to US
n then finally today wen he took that bullet on him to save me .
I jerked out of my thoughts suddenly , checked on rk , through the glass doors , there
he was lying in his most vulnerable state , his body connected with different types of machines ,
natashas bed was near him while she was giving him blood , her eyes were tightly closed as if she was feeling the
pain of her brother .For a moment i didnt liked that she showed her rights over rk all of a sudden
after all these years , if she was his sister y she was away frm him , y she never helped rk to overcome
his fear n ego , n y rk never mentioned abt her , it seemed i didnt knew anything abt rk now .
he seem to be a complete stranger for me , all sorts of questions were interrupting in my mind
wen a child came running n shouting mumma , papa mumma papa n a girl of my age was running after him ,
calling his name aayush , everyone turned their attention towards him , bittuji
seemed as if he knew him , he talked to the girl n got worried by the time ayush reached over the ot
n started calling out mumma , papa where r u ? hey , where u going , i asked him . He made a
confused face n then gave a cute pout n told me plss let me go n meet my mumma n papa
before i cld say something maa interrupted n say aayush , y r u here , mumma told u na
to sit at home with ria '' uffo naani , i m a big boy now n i dnt like ria , she always stop me
frm going out , i wanted to meet papa where is he tell me na where is mumma .?
maa got upset hearing him n aayush gave he pleading looks , he was a cute innocent child
so natasha has a son but y he is saying his papa is here .
maa , bittuji n ria were trying to explain him only wen natasha came out n
aayush squealed in excitement n shouted , yayy mumma is here .'' natasha looked
panicked seeing him there , she rushed to him n aayush jumped frm bittujis arms
n hovered over her , she hugged him n asked angrily ,'' aayush wat r u doing here
i told na to sit at home , n she glared at ria who gave her a sorry look .
Natasha shifted her gaze to aayush n got him down frm her n aayush got scared
suddenly , natasha took a deep breath n controlled her anger
n bent down to his level n said calmly ,'' aayush u r papas gud boy na
so go back to home with ria mumma n papa will come soon ,
no u r lying i know papa is not coming home soon
i heard sikky mama say to deepali maami ,
she luked stunned n asked ,'' wat did he say ''?
tell me she asked almost getting curious at him ,
he was saying that papa wont return home soon , n till then
they can enjoy in his house .
Natasha glared at maa this time , i wonder
wats with all this perhaps its rk in hospital
then only sikky can enjoy , n instantly i felt hatred for the bhatias .
Look wat ur darling family is doing at ur back in my bhais house , natasha taunted maa
n maa looked down ashamed .I Felt sorry for maa to have such family
but y natasha hates maa so much , is she like rk too .
Aayush go back to home now , she ordered him
n aayush looked on the verge of crying , i felt bad for the lil kid
y was she not letting him meet his father .
y r u not letting him meet his father natasha , i questioned her full of confidence
she turned around towards me n her look was filled with hatred as well as pain .
Y r u being so stubborn if he wants just let him meet him ,
n she shouted because he is there lying on the death bed ms. madhubala mallik.
all thanxx to u , my bhai is the one whom he wanted to meet
tell me how can i show him that his papa is dying there ,
her eyes were blazing fire , n in a second she luked at aayush
who heard his mother confessed the truth .
She quickly bent down n hugged him n hided him in her embrace not wanting to leave him ever .
Everyone was shocked between us , me, maa (padmini), sultan , kaaka
aryan was hiding behind sultan scared of natashas temper maybe .
Shocked run in my veins , how is rk aayushs father , how
only how was running in my mind .
Natasha picked aayush in her arms , n left hurriedly frm there
with ria following . I looked at bittuji questioningly
n gave him a will u tell me everything look , i just cant
understand anything now , i needed answers , it seems i dnt know anything .

Bittuji sensing my doubts took me in a side n started
the messed up kundra history ,'' after mohan sirs death natasha n rk were
each others support both confide in each other , they were broken miserably hurt
n top of that after radhaji remarried bhatias use to torture them , this is wat i have learnt so far frm
natasha in my early days with chief. Chief was everything for her , after there father
they both were only each others family , they lost their mother n stopped trusting
her bcoz she cldnt protect them against kukku n sikky .
they both grew up supporting each other n went to london together
for their higher studies but in last yr of their college natasha came to india
as she wanted to build her career over here n in that time she fell in love with a guy called veer
who loved her too , as she was the closest to chief , she told him immediately
n he like a doting brother agreed to meet so he also came to india n even liked veer
there bonding too developed n as veers parents were keen to get them married as soon as possible so there marriage was
fixed too early , everything was going grt but then the storm hit there lives n veer met with a accident a day before
their wedding , natasha was broken badly , she was not saying anything , chief was helpless
but finally he managed to make her cry , but it was not the end after a week we found that she was pregnant ,
chief felt like he was losing everything, he went to talk to veers parents but
they just insulted him n denied to accept her child , chief didnt knew wat to do ,
he felt betrayed for his sister , for that innocent soul who was not even a part of the world
n on top of that bhatias were cursing her n radhaji just didnt said anything , if not for
chief then natasha wld have died . Seeing his sister like that he decided that he will take her back to london n he wont
allow her to ever come back to india n he promised her that her child wont ever feel a fathers absence in life like
they felt that is
how aayush calls chief papa n he is called as aayush rishabh kundra
n for the ppl he is adopted son of chief in london
no one is aware of this part of his life here . Chief tried to keep her happy as much as possible till aayush became a yr old he
was with her always but then he got a movie offer n natasha forced him to go to india
but chief made proper arrangements for her n for her safety n appointed ria whom chief trusts as she was with
them in there college n she is grt frnd to natasha . n coming here he met deepali n after that u know
wat happened . When he was shot i informed natasha abt it n she was determined to come
but chief knew that it will hurt her like anything that is y he asked her to stay there ,
they talk to each other everyday wen chief is on sets , chief cant live without listening to aayush
but since three months he is avoiding to even talk to him n her n his birthday was
coming so she came here to give him surprise as every year chief goes to london on his bday .
but this year she was sure he was not going to come .
U might be thinking that if he knew wat pain was y he did that to u
no madhu it was never abt his ego , more than that
it was his fear that like how everyone abondoned them ,
he will again be left alone , trust me more than u
he could feel the pain which he caused to u , i never saw him
this broken n hurt which i saw him in these two months wen he was far away
frm everyone . He thinks i dnt know that he cried
but i know i cld see through him . they r not bad , its the situations which has made
them the way they r , i m not trying to say that wat he did with u
was right but i m just telling u that think abt his life n pain
n today u wld have got the answer whether he loves u or not ''
n with this bittuji went away leaving me all shocked n stunned
to the newly found truths abt rks life .
Tears brimmed my eyes n i sat down on the bench nearby
trying to register all the revealations made all of a sudden .

P.S I M SORRY IF THIS PART BORES U
BUT I WANTED TO SHOW A COMPLETE DIFFERENT SIDE OF RK
N HOW DOESNT BOAST ABT HIS GUD THINGS EVER N JUST PRETEND TO BE A JERK .
HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT N I HOPE NO ONE IS OFFENDED
WITH AAYUSH CALLING PAPA TO RK .
PLSS DO LIKES N COMMENTS .

Edited by NehaVdian - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
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Yayyy first one to comment
Superb update n felt really bad for rk n natasha
Edited by v.p.joshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
hey hey!! 2nd to comment!!😃😃
okay! now abt update
beautiful update!!😛😛
u have nicely weaved the story behind natasha & Rk!!👏👏 even in serial they could have shown something like this so that they could have got some side tracks even i wished they could have show sultan & trishna falling in love instead of showing all the Mr.mohan kundra raaz leela crap LOL!! 😆😆
hmm...so Rk is a father & madhu mumma!! aww...nice is that!!😊😊
Glad u killed veer instead of showing him a ditcher like dipali LOL!!😆😆
Neha, please send madhu to Rk's room & make her talk emotionally or something but show private moments for Rishbala!! at least ask natasha to go freshen up & come mean while madhu could romance with her superstar right??😉😉
what that expression sucker sultan stll doing in the hospital??🤢🤢 even pack him too chawl or to hell LOL!!😆😆
only Rishbala in hospital "raat akeliye"😉😉
waiting for next update!!😃😃
Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Amazing update Neha
Feeling sorry for the twosome...they went through a lot in their lives
Waiting for RK to get out of the hospital
Continue soon

I'm fourth...and that's not so bad 😆
Edited by Abhiya4life - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Naw. If I had functional tearcanals I would have cried.😆 It's how much emotional update this was Neha. Just awesome. You portrayed RK's and Natasha's lives perfectly.👏
Our Right Kameena has the heart of a lion. He watches over his flock so no one would get hurt. And finally Madhu got to know that RK trully loves her.
Bye Ullu Sullu Sullu. Kiss your supposed future Biwi goodbye.😆 At second thoughts. Don't kiss her. We don't want him anywhere near her.😆
I'm so looking forward to read when RK wakes up and Madhu doesn't leave his side. Chiding him for doing something stupid like sving her.😆
BREAK Ullu Sullu Sullu's HEART! BREAK IT MADHU!🤣
EVEN PADMINI IS WITH YOU AFTER THIS.🤣
Thanks for the update Neha and the PM.
Also thanks for saying you like my comments on Sudha's SS.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
an emotional update
RK and Natasha both have a very sad past
aayush calls him papa is ok he is a child
madhu must be feeling sorry for him
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Nice update neha di...
Tfs for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update.
you brought out different RK n loved him.
both RK n Natasha have gone through a lot.
waiting for next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
SO NICE N HEART TOUCHING UPDATE

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