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Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

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its soo sweet
cute love story
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nice start please update soon
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Part 2

Madhu..

My heart was thudding so loud...I cant
believe on my eyes...Really??He is
here...But why???Is he here for me??
No..No..No...That's impossible..He is
here for something else...But still
question is same...Why he is here?? I
ran into my mom's room..As I am going
to enter... "Bhow!!!!" "Aaa..." I screamed
in fear...But then I look...She is
Khush ..She is hididng behind the
door...As I am going to enter she scared
me...I take a deep breath ...Then realize
I scream to loud...As always...
I peep into hall...As our small house's all
rooms open door leads to hall...I look
there...Sameer bhai gave me wierd
look...And he is also staring at me...I
smacked my hand on my forehead...Run
into room...I catch my breath...Khush
look me with wierd expression...Then
she went from there..Now only I am
here...I buried my head in pillow to calm
myself...

After sometime when he left...I came out
from room...Headed towards our
bedroom...I come in...All are watching
boring serial...I made a bad face...And
appi catch it... "Whats wrong madhu??"
Piya di, My elder sis asked...But before I
replied Sara di reply "Kyu puch rahi
ho...As always not wanted to watch this
serial...Now she is getting bored thinking
what to do...Am I right madhu???" I didn't
say anything just jump on bed for
sitting...Khush sit beside me...
I look at Piya di...She is still giving me
questioning look...But why??? I asked
confusingly "What???" "I see your craziness
when you shout and thud on mom's
bed...What is wrong with you??Why are u
behaving like small kids??" I kept silent
for sometime but then reply "Because I
am child...I am at 16..Not forty plus aunties
who always get busy in housework...So its
my age to do crazy antics... Aur waise bhi
mera ghar hai...Jo chahe karu...Abhi nahi
karungi to kab karungi???" I complete in
one breath as always...Trying to avoid
real answer which are dancing in
mind...

Khush laugh at my one breath lecture...
"madhu sahi keh rahi hai...Hum log to khel
rahe the...Aur mene unhe dara diya...Isliye
wo chillai...Ye hi to age hai hamari khelne
ki..." I smiled at my khush's reply...Piya
di is still not convinced but because of
my all time stupid speech she again start
concentrating on TV..So me too taking
my books left from there for studies...
I go in study room...My dad has
specially make this room for me...As I
complain him that I didn't get privacy
for studies...Now I can study here
without any disturbance...Its almost one
and half hour...So I closed my
book...And put my head on table to
relax...But as I closed my eyes his face
and presence here before sometime again
came into my mind...

Suddenly I feel someone is caressing my
hair...I look up...Here he is ...My each
and every problems solution ...My
dad...He is the best..He gently kissed on
my forehead and settled beside me...
We talk about random things...And I ask
him about his business...He love to share
about his progress...My mind diverted
from those thoughts...I enjoy with my
father...Soon my mother came there and
asked "Guest kab aa rahe hai aur terrace
room is perfect for him na??" "Yaa...Its
perfect ...And he is coming tomorrow..." Dad
replied...My mom ask us to come for
dinner and left from there...Always
busy...As she left I asked him "Dad...Who
is coming...Aur aapne terrace room kyu de
rahe hai rehne ke liye...You know na its my
favorite place...Me nahi dungi apna room..."
I said childishly...Yup it's my favorite as
no one goes there...And I like to spend
time alone with my craziness...But now
someone is coming...

Dad look at me and told me... "Wo
sirf room use karega...You can do your
masti on terrace..." "But you know na I
don't like when someone watch me doing my
stupid antics except family members..."
"But he will hardly spend his time
there...He is always busy in his
work...Really hardworking boy..." I nodded
sadly...But then that word catch my
attention...Boy...

I asked who is he??? "He is my best friend
Mr.Kundra's son...Who help me when our situation
Was really worst...He always stand for me...Now he
is no more...And his son is alone..No one is here
for him...He is working part time with us since
six months but few days ago I came to know his
situation and who he is...So I decided this time
it's my turn to help his family...And from his
family only he left...So from tomorrow he will
stay with us...I want you all treat him like
family...Don't make him feel like we are doing
this sympathaticly...Okk??" I nodded and smiled
at my dad...

I thanked that man who help my
dad...Because I remember in our past
our condition was not so stable...We had
suffered a lot...Though I didn't
remember much but yes it was tough
time for our family specially for my
dad...Sometime I had watched him
silently cry with mom because of our
condition...And now from his talk it
appears that how much my dad is
thankful towards him...I decided to
obey my dad's command and treat my
guest as family member...After what his
dad did for us we can atleast do
this...After some more chit chat...I stand
up and asked dad to come for dinner
now...He nodded...

We sat on dining table...Almost all had
completed their dinner only mom dad
and me left...We sat together and start
dinner...My eyes were searching for
Sameer bhai but then remember that as
always he must be busy in his
work...Suddenly my mom ask about that
boy means guest name from father...My
dad reply "He is Sameer's best friend and
his name is...Rishab..." I get shocked to hear
his name ...That's why he was here in
evening...That food stuck into my
throat...I start coughing badly..Dad
patted my back and mom made me
drink some water...I compose myself...
"Eat slowly beta.." My dad said sweetly
not knowing the real reason...I nodded
smilingly...Compliting my dinner I left
from there...Today is the one of the
shocking day for me...

After almost hour we get freed from
daily routine...Switching off the lights I
jump on my little bed ...Whole house
sink into darkness...I tossed on my bed
thinking about upcoming day...How life
takes turn...I feel like all time when I
decided to get rid of something it always
came to me runningly...Why it happens
always??From tomorrow he will be with
us...Most of his time spent here...Then
how can I manage to avoid those
feelings...

In school's few hours I try so hard to
controlled myself to avoid his presence
and my feelings...But now destiny play
its game again...Now I have to do this
here too...I have no other option...
If I didnt know the real reason of his
coming may be I will talk to dad and do
something but my dad's each word
echoed in my ears ...How much he want
to help his father through him...

Now I have no other way except
avoiding...As I dont want to realize
those broken feeling everyday...Only I
know how much I cry when I get to know
about his feelings for someone...I had
cried almost half of night because of
that...Couldn't help myself...May be its
teenage's effect...And all this
happen...But still it hurts a lot...I was
tossing on my bed lost in thoughts then
someone flip her fingers in front of me...
I quickly sat up on bed...Its Sam bhai.. "
Oye Angle!!! Kaha khoi hui hai???Its
12:30...kal school hai na...Soi kyu nahi abhi
tak..." "Tumhari shadi ke liye kapde
decided kar rahi thi...Ke kya pehnoogi..." I
replied seriously...He shake his head in
disbeleif... " Shadi ko abhi time hai...Aur
din me time nahi milta ye sab karne
ka...Chal so jaa...Chup chap..." He ordered
me and going to turn to left from
there...I shouted as always.. "Good night
Bhai.." He turn around and nodded ..I
gave him angry look...He never reply to
my wishes...Just smile...No words to
express... "God hi bchaye Aisha bhabhi ke
future ko??" I muttered...he look back
again "Kya kaha tumne..??" He asked
knowingly... "Jo aapne
suna...Bhai.." Saying that I quickly slip
into my blanket...And heard him lefting
place...

Next Morning ...In school...

Natasha

I enter in my class...Just few one had arrived
yet...My eyes scan class...There she is ...As
always on time...I shout from door "Good
morning madhu..." "Good morning Natasha..."
She replied smilingly...I took my seat...then
looked back at her as she is on last bench...She
is in deep thought...Its been six months to our
friendship yet our bond is not so strong that we
share our personal life...Though I want to be
more close...But she still hesitate to open up...
I love her nature...She is innocent girl...Not much
talkative..But smart and intelligent one...I had
realize that she has some problem in being
here...She didn't feel comfortable because of our
class stupid girls...they always passes comment
bt she always avoid...It's the great thing...Only
few can do this...Remembering something I
asked..

"madhu...Did you submit your 10 th 's
marksheet??" she came out from her
thoughts and reply " Not yet..Just going to
submit..." "Okk...Come ..We will go
together..." She smile and stand up..We
left class...
In our way I saw Rishab is going towards
class...He is my best friend...He come
near us...Smilingly wish "Good morning
girls..." "Good morning RK..." I
replied... Then my eyes catch that he is
looking at madhu..She didn't reply
him...Standing with lower eyes...I know
she didn't like to talk boys...But still
atleast she can wish back to someone...I
hit her with my arms...And she spoke
up... "Good morning..." And quickly step
ahead like not wanted to stay there
more...I looked RK...Smilingly he too
left from there...

Sir came into class after attendance...He
asked us about submitting
marksheet...Some of girls and boys stand
up who had not submit
marksheet...RK look at me as I had
forget to inform about this to him...I
gave him sorry look...Sir ordered all to
go to office and fill other form...
Soon lecture get over and free period
came...As our sir had taken leave for
somedays ...I ask madhu to come and sit
beside me but she refuse...So I go and sit
beside her...Don't know she is looking
upset today...I try to cheer up
her...Whole class is enjoying this free
time...Specially boys and my bestie
(RK) too...

Boys are playing or should I say hitting
each other play fully...And that in girls
only some are playing
antakshari...Loudly...All over whole
class is echoing different types of
noise...I look at madhu who is pissed of
because of this...Closing her eyes she put
her head on bench...To relax...
In five minutes Mr.Rao means our
English's sir comes in our class
suddenly...All boys stop playing and
girls too shut up ...He looked at us
angrily...He ask some of boys to come
out from class...And ya my bestie also
get caught by him...They all stand on
there place looking down...

He is most unfavorite Sir of us..No body
like him...he always show off his
place...I really didn't like him...Soon he
start his lecture about discipline...As he
hate our class boys... "Exams are on the
way...And you all are playing stupid
games...I saw your worst result in first
term...Lefting some of you all are just worst
in english...Shame on you..." He shouted...
I look at boys...All are looking each
other... As I expected RK spoke up "
Sir...We know our first terms result was not
so good...But its because our classes are not
arranged properly that time due to new
semester...So you cant blame us..." He
replied politely...And his each words are
true...

But its make him more angry...He start
praising his class and say... "Okk...I
understand at that time it's the reason
but may I know your class English subject
result in 10 th ...Who is in your class get
above 85 marks...As my student get 90
marks..Tell me is someone is here whose
marks are above 85?? So mr.RK ..Is
someone is here?? " He asked with
smirk...All looked at each
other...Means no one is here...But to my
surprise he replied "Ofcourse Sir..."
I looked at him...Same time he too look
at me...Me also confused by his
answer...Soon he point at madhu in
action not catched by anyone...I looked
at madhu...She is still resting her head
on bench closed eyes...RK's actions are
didn't clear bt still I slowly raise her
hand...she look up at me then class..Her
eyes are questioning but I just ask her to
look at Sir...

"So Mr.RK...Is she that girl??" RK
nodded...All while madhu kept giving me
questioning look...Sir turn towards
Madhu.. "So Miss...May I know how much
marks did you get in English in 10th 's
exams???" She politely stands up and
reply innocently "Ofcourse Sir...I get 95
marks...But why are you asking Sir???" Sir
get shocked to hear that...He didn't
believe...RK smirk at his expression
and add more fuel in his anger "And sir
if you didn't believe on her...You can check
marksheet in office...Anything else you want
to ask us Sir???" He asked coldly..
All try hard to controlled their laugh
seeing his condition...And he just left
from there in anger...All start wooing in
happiness...RK shows me thumb
up...I smiled ...madhu catch his action
and asked " What is this happening
Natasha??" "Nothing...Just know that you
rock today..." She didn't understand still
but decided to avoid...Whole day we
make celebration that today our class
made that sir silent...Still question is
how come RK know about madhu's
result...

Madhu (evening)

Sitting on bench on our terrace I looked
at roadside views as we live at roadside
areas...Its evening time...Khush is doing
her H.W...So I didn't disturb
her..Silently come here to enjoy nature
and avoid our new guest's presence!!!
Yes..It his time to come so I intentionally
ran at terrace...I love to be here...And
my guess he arrived on time as Piya di
come to inform me and I nodded...My
heart still wish to go..And atleast become
friend ...But then again a thought afraid
me what if he came to know about my
feelings...That time he will break our
friendship too...So I sit here to pass my
time...

Suddenly I here a voice... "Hi madhu !!!" I
turned and here he is!!!...-

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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOVELY UPDATE DEAR
HAPPY DIWALI 😃
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Lovely update.very well written.
waiting for their interaction.
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Originally posted by: parimaniya

nice start pls continue


thanx dear!!!!! will cn.soonnn!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bevi-najim

LOVELY UPDATE DEAR

<font color="#cc0000">HAPPY DIWALI😃</font>


Thanx dear!!! happy diwali to u too...
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Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Lovely update.very well written.

waiting for their interaction.


Thank u so much dear!!!
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Originally posted by: noiseygirl

suprb writing yaar
cont soon


thanx dear!!!!!! will updt.soonnn!!!!!

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