||Rishbala FS- Times Square|| Part 5 Pg 54 [01/11] - Page 39

Originally posted by: Ni33

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I am not going to res and taking forever to unres it. So I am writing a comment right away.😆

🤣🤣This is me while reading the last part of this FS. 🤣🤣

Now why do you think I was like this?😆Still am just writing this comment of mine.🤣

She had remorse!🤣She had remorse for putting RK in a coma!🤣🤣No kidding.🤣🤣

She regrets for listening on Ullu Sullu Sullu.🤣And Ullu Sullu Sullu supported her all this while. I mean really.😆No ulterior motives of his own.😆No, I finally got that man out of my way and Madhubala is going to be mine. All mine.🤣

And really she told him that she fell in love with him when he is in a coma, but couldn't do it when he was all fine and fit. But had to listen to stupid is what stupid does.🤣I hereby declare Ullu Sullu Sullu and Madhubala as Dumb and Dumber.🤣However, since it is hard to define who is dumber than the other one. I declare them both to be Dumber and SheDumber.🤣🤣

Okay when he woke up, no memory loss. Even though major head injury. Still remembers everything. Not good Chotu. He deserves to forgets his encounter with Dumber and Shedumber. After what they did to him. But I guess people likes happy endings and him forgetting everything wouldn't be a happy ending to most of them. Right? 😆And the very first thing he asks is about is Madhu.🤣I was so sure when he finds out the truth he would resent her and Sultan. But no, when Sultan told him everything he wants to see her. At first I thought. Yes he is going to let her have a piece of his mind doing all of that, putting him in the hospital. But no. *Shaking my head* 😆And I almost forgot. He sensed ammonia? 😲Really the first thing he sensed was ammonia. Here I thought he would have a tube in his both nostrils (have forgotten what it is called) that provides him with oxygen. And the first thing he sensed was ammonia.🤣He never wondered what was that cold air coming from. Yes oxygen is cold. Since it is originally in its liquid form so when you inhale it it's cold. Do not ask me how I know that. 😆All I can say is I have a funny story about that, but I won't write it.😆

Coward. Chicken. All kind of words popped up in my mind while reading Madhu running away. She put him there, now feeling guilty and decides to run off.😆Well she should have thought about that earlier, Before all of this happened.

Okay the next thing that popped up in my head was RK's apartment. How would Sultan know where it was? I know he is a stalker cat, but this. 😆And secondly. He really still has it? 😲How canRK still have it? I mean he was in a coma. So how was he paying the bills? For this little pickle I thought of two options. 😆Either someone payed his bills while he was in a coma, can't imagine who. Maybe his family but you have only mentioned his father and he is dead. So that leaves Madhu, but how should she do that? She isn't legally tied to him so how can she pay his bills. Okay other option which is way funnier and more likely to be is that no one has payed his bills. They are all in a huge pile that awaites him when he returns and a notice from IRS for his unpaid taxes.😆And when he sees it all he slips in yet another coma, traumatized of what he has seen. 🤣 Or decides to sell the diamond ring, if he didn't take a loan buying that thing, then it is a complete gonner. 🤣 He is in a sea of debts that he hasto pay.😆

The last part I won't even comment on. Cause I really do not know what to say.😆It's... Well I can't put a word on it.😆Sorry.😆

Thanks for the final part of this FS and for the PM Chotu.😆

It was one great and HILARIOUUUSSS update! 🤣

I hope you don't take my comment seriously.😆Love you. Can't wait for The Demon's Kiss.😛

<div>By the way still bugged with his apartment still being there.🤣 That thought can't leave my mind.😆

Originally posted by: Ni33

I have unresed, so check it Chotu. I won't repeat me taking my precious time unresing.😆

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Amazing story meghana! I wish it was longer😭eagerly waiting for your next story

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

superb end nd waiting for new story

Originally posted by: ainanwer

amazing story

Originally posted by: mydrashti

superbbb lovely👍🏼ur style of writing is different too this is what i like in this forum everyone has its own realy appreciatable👍🏼n waiting for ''Demon Kiss Rishbala version😆

Originally posted by: snigdhamazumder

<font size="4">Awesome ending. But I miss this story very much. U r brilliant writer. Keep smiling and writing my friend. Thanks for pm me.</font>

Originally posted by: _Angel-Juri_

beautiful story Meghna..loved it..
thanx for the pm...