||Rishbala FS- Times Square|| Part 5 Pg 54 [01/11] - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life


What else could she do?😆 I don't know...
Its settled...the next update will be dedicated to the cherry tomato that RK killed😆
Get ready to laugh yourself to death...okay maybe not death 🤣

But Close enough.🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 1- Intriguing start Meghna! Loving it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ainanwer

hmm RK feeling jealous

awesome update



He is 😉
Thank you 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vmpy

Lovely update.rk ko madhu se pyar hogaya wow.

when rk held madhu n prevented her frm falling rt then I remembered one of rk dialogue.
Jab tak rk zinda hay madhubala ko girne nnahedega.aahaan.thanx fr pm
Looking forward to da next one



I loved that dialogue
Thank you aqib bro 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks zoya 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ni33


<div></div>But Close enough.🤣



I'll try not to 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thank you dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kg15

Part 1- Intriguing start Meghna! Loving it.



Thank you kavya di
Long time no see 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago


Dedicating this part to the small cherry tomato that RK killed last update...everyone misses it 😆
RIP tomato 😆


Part 3
(RK's POV)

"Love Madhubala? You must be crazy RK! You've only known her for about a day and a half." I chuckled to myself. My conscience spoke again.

"It's called love at first sight you dumb*as." I ignored my crazy mind and went into the kitchen to cook.

Hmmm...maybe I did love her...

(Madhu's POV)

I cleaned up the house as best as I could. I didn't want RK to think I lived in a pigsty. My ponytail became loose and my hair covered my entire face. I tried to blow it away from my face, but it floated down back to cover my face. The door swung open from the wind.

"Oh I forgot to close the door." I muttered to myself.

I walked to my door and began to shut it when suddenly RK stepped in front of me. My heart started began beating faster at his sight. He was wearing a dark blue shirt and denim jeans. The shirt clung to his body like glue, outlining his Greek god like physique.

"H...hi RK..." I stammered. Gosh why was he so handsome?

"So...how are you?" He said, stuffing his hands in his pockets.

"I'm good." I called him inside. "And you?"

"Okay." We stood in silence for a while. The ambience became awkward. I bit my lip, thinking of what to say next. I heard footsteps behind me. I whirled around and saw Sultan standing there. He walked over.

"Perfect timing Sultan! I was going to introduce you to RK." I said. RK didn't seem too happy about it though.

(RK's POV)

"RK, this is Sultan. Sultan, this is RK." She happily said. I couldn't even force myself to smile. Madhu nudged me in the ribs, bringing out the locked away smile into my face.

"Hi RK, nice to meet you." He shook my hand. I crushed his hand as much as I could.

"Same." I said. My voice sounded so cold, it scared me.

"Now you two talk...I'll go make some coffee." She clapped her hands together and skipped into the kitchen.

Sultan started the conversation.

"So how did you meet Madhu?"

"On New Year's Eve. At Times Square." I said flatly.

"Oh so recently?" I nodded. He sighed in relief. I got suspicious.

"You've known her since childhood. You must be very close to her." I said.

"Yeah." He ran his fingers through his hair. "Look dude...I need a favor."

"What?" Favors already...I just met the guy like 2 seconds ago...

"You're a guy...so you should understand how to do this. How do you confess your love to a girl?"

I choked on my own spit. This guy wasn't serious, was he?

"Who are you proposing to?" I had the nerve to ask.

"I...uhhh..." He chuckled to himself. "Madhu."

The scene of myself shooting Sultan played in my mind. Jeez RK stop getting so insecure. I looked away from him and tapped my foot angrily.

"You love her?" I said through my teeth. He nodded like a shy little girl. What a wuss. I didn't like him one bit.

The ringing and clanking of fine china filled the rooms Madhu came back with hot piping coffee. She set them on the table, her ponytail brushing against my shoulder. She turned and smiled at me.

"Here's your coffee RK." She handed me the glass.

"Thanks Madhu." I said. She took another glass and handed it to Sultan. It was very tempting to throw my coffee at his pretty boy face, but I decided not to. Why waste coffee made by Madhu? I tasted some...and it was good.

"So what did I miss?" She asked, sipping her coffee.

"Oh...nothing. Just some guy talk." Sultan said.

"How about we all go to the mall together tomorrow?"

"Sure." He interjected. I was about to punch him.

"How's that sound RK?"

"Great." I muttered.

We talked for hours. I was mostly listening to Madhu and Sultan make jokes and talk about their childhood together. I felt like the third angle. I tried to change the subject.

"So how do you like New York Sultan?"

"It's great. I have yet to see Central Park."

"Let's go there tomorrow then. You'll love it Sultan." Madhu said.

"Alright." He said. I drank the rest of my coffee and secluded my mind from the both of them. Did I really feel and attraction towards Madhu? It would explain my jealousy and hatred towards Sultan. Any guy would fall in love with her. She was so sweet and caring. A perfect girl...I wanted to make her mine.

(3 months later...)

I slowly grew feelings for Madhu...stronger than the small spark that had ignited in my heart 3 months ago. I even bought her a beautiful diamond ring, deciding to only give it to her when I knew she loved me back. But Sultan was gaining confidence to propose to her...and I didn't even know if Madhu liked me back. What bothered me was Madhu's feelings for me. We went to a cafe to eat today. Sultan had some errands.

"What kind of a guy do you want Madhu?" I blurted. I had to find out today.

"Hmmm...let's see." She twirlled her spoon in her coffee. "Someone like you."

My face instantly lit up.

"Really?"

"Yes really!" She laughed. I liked the sound of it.

Her phone buzzed minutes later.

"Sultan?" She said.

(Madhu's POV)

Why is he calling me? He probably had to say something important.

"Hello?"

"Hello Madhu?"

"Yes Sultan."

"I want to talk to you...meet me in Times Square in an hour."

"Okay." He hung up abruptly.

What was so important that he had to be in Times Square. It was getting dark out already. RK got up and put his hand on my shoulder.

"What happened Madhu?" I asked.

"Oh nothing. Sultan wants to meet me at times Sqaure in an hour. Will you come with me?"

"Sure." He said.

(RK's POV)

We reached Times Square at the time Sultan told Madhu. He was standing in the middle of it...where everything could be seen. Sultan told me it was private. I backed off.

He took Madhu's hands and held them tightly. He said something to her that was inaudible to me but seemed to make her blush. Madhu started tearing up as well. He was doing it...he was proposing to her...he got on one knee and held out a diamond ring to her. I looked closer. That was the same ting I bought for Madhu! That f***ing bas***d!

She looked at me hesitantly, then back at Sultan. I knew her well enough now to know her body language...she was doing this to keep him happy. But did she love him? She nodded yes and Sultan slid the ring into her finger. They hugged. And then my world came crashing down...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Okay please don't hurt me 😆...the last part will change everything...Sullu Ullu Ullu is not endgame...no tomatoes or chappals please
Edited by Abhiya4life - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Chotu!👏👏🤣🤣
I really laughed through it. But it had be a silent laughter so I wouldn't wake up my family.😆
Naw, Madhu wanted to clean so her place wouldn't look like a pigsty. So she cleaned for RK and not for Ullu Sullu Sullu. ROFL We now know who she was trying to impress. ROFL Definitely not Ullu Sullu Sullu. 🤣 And she got nervous seeing RK and so she stammered.😆 Naw. How cute is she. And our Right Kameena would really be Right Kameena if he went through with his thoughts. I mean the shooting. Well it better be one hell of a handshake RK gave Ullu Sullu Sullu. 😆 Otherwise I will change teams and cheer for the opposite team. 🤣 Kidding I would never betray our Superstar, even writing it felt wrong.😆
I agree RK. You meet a guy just 2 seconds ago and instantly he needs a favor. What kind of guy is he? OMG he is a stalker like the Ullu Sullu Sullu in MB show. How else could he know what ring to buy, the exactly the same as yours. Bad Ullu Sullu Sullu. Very bad. Shu. Don't stay in our Rishbala way. Shu. Yes I am shuing him away like a cat. Yes cat. Dogs I like and are reliant, not cats. Cats aren't reliant. Okay maybe a little, but nothing like dogs. And after seeing my cousin who is a catlover I pass on them.😆 Fury little hairballs. And I am talking about those hairballs they cough up. 🤣
Bad Madhu. Very bad. You tell a guy you would like to marry someone like him and here you are accepting a proposal out of sympathy. Bad Madhu. Very bad. You should crush his little dreams right away.😆 Now I get it Chotu. You want to take revenge on Ullu Sullu Sullu from the show through this FS. 😈 Clever, very clever. Yes take revenge. 😈 Let Madhu leave him at the altar, let her crush his dreams in front of everyone. 🤣 And then run away with RK. 😈 *Evil laugh*
By the way Chotu. If someone throws something at you duck. 🤣 Don't let them hit you. 😆
Duck like a duck. 🤣
As I said Chotu. Awesome and an entertaining update. And who can forget. RIP Cherry tomato. 🤣
You will always be remembered for your sacrifice. ROFL
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago

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