Love Story - Rishbala SS (Chap 2 update on Page 6) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Start only they went in opposite path..waiting for the first part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waiting first part
Plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks dear.. I will post the first part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Nice prologue. Continue soon <div></div>


Thank you so much..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SreeRK

Start only they went in opposite path..waiting for the first part..


I will update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start! Waiting for the update! please pm me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept :) do continue and please keep me updated thank you 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for your love... I couldnt reply you all but I read your all comments and I will try to reply you all next time... Now enjoy the first chapter of this SS...



Chapter One




"Arey what are you all doing??? Do all the works fast.. Look.. Look at those flowers.. They are still on the same place.. Where I kept.. Morons!!! Work properly..." Malik was getting high temper while looking at the arrangments... "Malik please calm down.. You have high pressure.. You please take some rest..." Padmini tried to calm him down... "Padmini.. How can you tell this... This is our daughter's wedding.. And you are saying to take rest.." Malik snaped... "Oh!!! Maa Malik please you guys calm down... Still you have enough time.." Trishna interrupted between her parents as they were arguing... "Kaha waqt hai beta.. Tomorrow is the sangeet ceremony and then after 2days are left for marriage.." Malik said tensely.. "Malik.. Malik relax.. Look.. Madhu is coming today.. And she will handle everything.." Trishna said... "Oh no!!! Madhu... Its completely slipped out from my mind... Malik did any driver reach at airport to pick her.." Padmini was worried for Madhu as well as tense... "Maa... Dont worry.. I send a driver.." "Hello everyone..." A girly voice came from far and they trio looked at the direction.. "Madhu..." Padmini's eyes filled with happy tears... There she was standing,her angel Madhubala!! Madhu came and hugged her.. "Maa..
How are you.. I missed you a lot.." Padmini kissed on her forehead "How are you my bachha!!" Madhu nodded okay.. Then she hugged Malik.. "Hey princess!! Welcome back.." Then Madhu looked at Trishna.. "Hey diduu..." "Dont talk to me Madhu.." She snapped back which made Madhu haww!!! "What happen.." She asked her.. But she turned her face another side.. "Offo.. Didu dont show me attitude.. Give me a hug no!!" Madhu made a puppy face.. Seeing this Trishna couldnt control her laugh.. And she burst out in laughter and hugged her tightly.. "I missed you Madhu.." They parted.. "Okay.. Okay... Now tell me... How's my jiju.. What's his name?? How is he looking.. Handsome?? Is she romantic or boring??" Madhu was continuously asking her questions.. "Madhu.. First you go and fresh.. I will tell you everything.." Trishna said and she headed to her room... "Did Rishabh reach at his place??" Madhu thought herself while unpacking her stuffs.. "Let me call him.." She called him but it was switched off.. "Oh Rishabh!! Why did you always forget to charge your phone before travelling.. Now I have to wait for your call.. Please call soon.." Her face became sad thinking about RK... "Amm.. Let me message him.." She thought and then type a sms "Did you reach?? Please call soon!!" She kept her phone on bed and went to washroom...



She came out from washroom wrapping bathrob around her body... First she checked her phone.. No sms.. No calls... Then she was getting ready when her cell rings.. And screen name showed Rishabh... Without wasting a moment she received the call... "Rishabh I always told to charge your phone before travelling.. But you didnt bother to listen to me.. Do you know how much I was worried for you.." She threw all her anger.. But she didnt get any response from another side.. "RK.. Are you listening to me??" She asked furiously... "Hmm.. I am... Tell me what are you saying.. I am listening.." He teased her which made Madhu more furious.. "RK.." He could understand how much she was angry.. "Okay babaa!! I am sorry.. I reached safely.. Dont worry about me jaan.." He said sweetly which melt her heart... "Even I reached safely.. Rishabh..." "Hmm.. Say.." "I miss you so much.." "Even I am missing you too jaan.." RK replied... "Madhuu!!" Trishna was calling her and she heard her footsteps.. "RK.. Didu is coming.. Talk with you later.." Madhu was going hang out the phone.. But RK stopped her.. "RK.. Stop it.. I called you later no!!" Madhu heard the footsteps clearly... "Noo.." RK snapped... "What do you want??" She asked tensely.. "You know jaan.." He replied which made Madhu blush.. "I love you.." And she kissed on phone speaker.. "Now happy??" She asked... "I love you too Madhu.. Take care.." They hang out the call... "Madhu.. Who is on phone??" Trishna asked her which made Madhu shocked...




I know I bored you a lot.. Everything are welcome... Shoes, chappal everything... But still waiting for your feedback... Thank you!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice but short pls try to update bigger parts 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
Unres
Nyc update
Trish marg ...with whom ? is it connected to RK?
plz update soon
Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago

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