Rishabala FF- Sajda Tere Pyaar Mein Discontinued (note on pg 24)

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shasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

nice start & continue soon..
plz pm me when you update

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Chitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

awesome work loved it Tfs for pm 👍🏼

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Jyoraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Nice start.

Hope Madhu is looking for RK. Waiting for the story to unfold.

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Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Nice start,...dear...so dey already know each other ...
i loved all pics...
waitin for d meet...cont soon...
ll bbe waitin...

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Bun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Hmm..nice start. ..would love to read more

I Have feeling that either both love the same guy or they love the wrong guy...coz Iif they already love their original hero's wouldn't that make the story very straightforward and u said its filmy so I am guessing this :)

Do pm me please 😊

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Julie

@4ever4love

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

good luck with your story.

It sounds interesting.

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Sahithi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

hi friends here goes the next chapter..😊😃

let me clear some of your doubts...

they are not thinking about the other ones or the wrong guy.. they are perfectly going in the right track...Rishabala and Arshi...

at Rishab's place

As Balraj was Mohan's bussiness partner and they keep a friendly family relation.

In an accident Balraj's wife died 5 years ago. So now Radhaji took the responsibilites as

she treats sikky as her son. Sikky was getting ready in his room.

in rishab's room

As the morning rays fell on his face a frown occured on his face looking very cute and handsome.

Radha: Rishab wake up.For how long will u sleep. noe get up. Sikky is calling u both.

and haan yaad hai na. today we have to go Malik's place.

As he heard the word Malik's place his eyes shot open and he with a sudden reaction he sat on his bed.

Rishab: What Malik uncle's place.

Radha:yes bhul gaye Today Sikky's sangeet at Malik's place . now get ready. I've soo much work to do.

Rishab:Madhubala Aahaan. Intazaar karo main aa raha hoon.

he left to washroom to freshnup.

In the hall :

Radha: Aree Arnav . Where were u till now. I've searching for u in the whole house.

Arnav: vo ma. I was in lawn for exercise.

Radha: Achha tek hai. Yaad hai na Today we have to go to Malik's place.

Arnav: Yes ma yaad hai. Dont worry we will be ready.

In Rishab's room:

Arnav: Rishu ...Rishu...kaha hai tu.

Rishab: Kya hua main yahi hoon...chillao mat...

Arnav: Remenberd what we have discussed right..

Rishab: yes mere bhai... bahut achi tarah se yaad hai... and winks..😉😉

here Arnav thinks about their first meeting... He saw a girl in a purple colour lehengha doing something in the kitchen.her hair was tied up in a bun... she was cooking and in the other hand eating. he went back of her and wishpered in her ears.

Arnav: Aap kya kar rahe ho.

Khushi: Dikhai nhi detha... jeelabhi bana rahi hoon...

Arnav: Jeelabhi I love Jeelabhi.. It is soo sweet bilkul aap ki tarah..

Without saying anything she went away with anger.

Khhushi's pov:

What was that feeling when he was near me. ☺️what was I feeling . Hey Devi Maa What's happening to me...the rest of day she finds herself staring at him. and he is staring at her. even she don't know his name. somehow she got to know that his name is Arnav...😃

Precap:1. Rishabala and Arshi Face to face..😉😆

wait till the next chapter was going to happen...

hope u all enjoyed well...😆

plz hit like and comment..😆😉

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Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

I am first to comment. 😲

Well this was a nice second chapter. The picture of RK sleeping. 😆

Rishabh's eyes opened immediately the moment he heard the Malik Place. 😆

I am liking where this is going. Can't wait when they come face to face.

Edited by Ni33 - 11 years ago

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Sahithi

@Sahithiavneil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane
Hmm..nice start. ..would love to read more

I Have feeling that either both love the same guy or they love the wrong guy...coz Iif they already love their original hero's wouldn't that make the story very straightforward and u said its filmy so I am guessing this :)

Do pm me please 😊

no dear they are on the right track...Rishabala and Arshi...

its not that straight forward...it really going to be very filmy... 😊😉

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Sahithi

@Sahithiavneil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Ni33
I am first to comment. 😲

Well this was a nice second chapter. The picture of RK sleeping. 😆

Rishabh's eyes opened immediately the moment he heard the Malik Place. 😆

I am liking where this is going. Can't wait when they come face to face.

thanks dear...😊 will update it soon...and it will be a long upadate for sure...becoz they come face to face...and my hand goes on typing...😆