my story on raja rani.....

i had few ideas while watching the epi. that didnt happen in the show. i just sharing those ideas with you as the show had ended and you can enjoy if you like it
this one is my thought on rani and raja... mainly on rani's nafrath

we all know how much madhu was hating raja in the show. we all were fed up of that. my small modification on this. i wished the same o happen in the show... but not happened. so i'm sharing this one with you.

this we consider like happening before madhu being shot by bhanu's goon. and still madhu in hating mode 😆
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in village, in madhu's room... madhu and phalguni bhabi convo...

bhabi...''madhu, tauvu ji ne kaha ki tum aur raja dhono kal bairav ki mandhir jaana hai. kal sube pooja hai. mandhir yaha se thodi door me hai. isiliye kal jaldhi utkar thaiyar hojaav. ''

madhu...''ye kisliye bhabi?? ''

B...'' ye suhagan keliye. is ghar ki har bahu karthi hai shaadi ki baath. kal bairav ke saath tum jo bi maangogi, woh tume zaroor milegaa.''

madhu smiles at her with frustration. ''suhagan??!! bahu??!! aap bi is ghar ki bahu hai. aap bi gayi hogi. kiya aap ko woh mila jo aap mange the??!!''

b.. remains silent for a while and says...''muje chodo. meri baath alag hai. par tumare alag hai. raja ayenge toh unse bi bathadho ki kal pooja keliye jaldhi yaha se nikalna hai''

madhu...'' woh sab mujse nahi hogaa'' replies with slightly changed tone

B... '' madhu... ye sab tumse poochna nahi chathi hoon. phir bhi chup rehna keliye bi man nahi kartha hai. me ye bhi jaanthi hoon ki ye tumara zindhagi hai. uske bare me tum jo bi faisla le sakhi ho. isme muje koiyi haq nahi hai kuch bolne ki. phir bi..''

madhu ... bhabi aap is thara baat kiyu karthe hai. me aapse bahut izath karthi hoon. is ghar me sirf aap ho muje support karthe hai. jo bhi bolna hai, aap keh sakthi hai.''

b...'' sirf me hoon??!! aur raaja ko kiya??!!''

madhu looks at her confused. ...'' aap kiya kehna chathe hai??''

b...'' kiyu raja se ithna nafrath karthi ho?? woh tumse kithna piyaar kartha hai !! mere kayal se raja woh nahi hai jo tum dhekthi ho. me une achchi tara se jaanthi hoon. woh tumareliye ithna kartha hai, par phir bhi tum une kiyu apna nahi maanthi ho??!! unke saath achche se jeene keliye koshish kiyu nahi kar sathi ho??!! ''

madhu remains silent

b...''kuch toh bolo madhu. muje samaj me nahi aatha ki ek insaan tume tootkar mohabat kartha hai, tumareliye pura ghar waalo se ladtha hai, par tum une palat kar bhi nahi dhekhi ho. jab tak me tume jaanthi hoon , tum aisa ladki nahi ho. phir raja ke saath aisa kiyu karthi ho??!!'

madhu...''bhabi... jisthara raja ne mujse piyaar kartha hai, usse dhekkar paththar ko bhi piyaar hogaa, me toh insaan hoon bhabi... muje kaisa nahi hogaa??!! ''

b...'' 😕... yum kiya keh rahi ho??!!''

madhu...''me raja se bahut bahut piyaar karthi hoon. me une aapna maan thi hoon. aapna pati maan thi hoon. me sirf unse nahi bolhi hoon'' tells this very slowly and clearly.

b...''par kiyu?? 😕😕''

madhu...'' aapko patha hai, hamara shadi kaisa huwaa???!! Abhay kapoor, film actor, woh mujse badla lene keliye raju se mera matlab raja se shaadi karwaya. tab raja, ek saath saal bachcha jaisa tha. pehle muje bahut gussa aya tha, waha se bagna chathi thi. bag bhi gayi. phir PK ne muje raastha dhikaye wapas raju ke paas jaane ki.
phir me raju se piyaar karne lagi. thodi thin ke baath muje aisaas huwaa ki jo me piyaar samaj thi thi (ak se) woh piyaar nahi, jo abay kapoor ne meri shaadi raju se karvake mereliye kithna achcha kiya. 😆 . kayi bar unko dilse thanks bhi bol chuki hoon. unke waja se raja meri zindhagi me aaya.

woh accident ke baath raju nahi raha. raja bangaya. pehle unka harkathe dhekkar me gabra gayi thi ... dar gayi thi. par muje ye bi dhika woh mujse kithna piyaar kartha hai. uska andhar abhi bhi raju zindha hai. phark ithna hai ki woh raju ko bagar nahi aane dhetha hai.

bachpan se hi aisa hai. jungli... par ye uska galathi nahi hai. unka parvarish aisa hai.

par jo bhi woh kar raha hai... ak ko maarna, kanoon ko apna haath me lena, apna thakath par wishwas rakna, baath baath par goli chalana... ye sab galath hai. me une badhalna chathi hoon.

par ye sab me achchese boloon toh woh nahi maanegaa. jungli hai na??!! une unki thara hi badhalna hai... ab aap bhi dhekiye, kithna badhal gaya hai woh.

ye mereliye bhi asaan nahi hai. par kiya patha me ithna strong aur zindhi rah pavoongi ya nahi jab me apni man ki baat unse bolne ke baat. uska piyaar me kahi me badhal na jaavoon. 😆
une aisagi handle karna hai... aur aage aage dhekiye raja kiya kiya kartha hai'' ... smiles very softly

b...''tum ithna sooththi ho?!! ... me toh dari gayi. '' 😊
madhu...''bhabi iske bare me raja ko kuch mat kehna''
b...''nahi boloongi. par bagawan se zaroor piraathana karoongi jaldhi sab teek karne keliye''
madhu... 😊
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at night same room...

raja enters the room ... ''raniii...''
madhu damn cares him... and continues her work
raja...''rani, ye lo kal pooja keliye ye sadi pehke aayo. mera favorite color hai''
madhu stares at him
raja...'' ye lo'' ...
madhu...''ye me nahi pehnoongi.'' and throws the sari
raja..'' ithna piyaar se dhiya mene. aisa kiyu phekthiho??''
''oohhh... achcha me tume mere haathose ye sadi pehna hai??!!😳😉''

saying this he walks towards her ...

madhu...''mere paas mat aana 😡''
raja...''arre kiyu??!!... pati hai hum tumara aur tharam patni hai tu meri. jo bhi muje karna hai me kar saktha hoon. ''
madhu..''sochna bhi mat 😡''
raja...''arre... 😳... tumare aanko me dhek kar aisa lakth hai ki tum muje bula rahi ho...'' he walks towards her...
madhu...''paas mat aana...'' walks backwards ...
raja...''aavoon toh kiya karoogi??!!''... madhu hits the wall behind her and no space for her to move. now raja is very close to her.

he tries to touch her face. she pushes his hand 😡.

raja...'' hello rani... ye nakre chod aur mujse piyaar se baat karo''

madhu gets irritaed ...'' tumse baath karna bhi nahi chaathi hoon... woh bhi piyaar se ...kabi nahi''

raja...''achcha...'jisthara raja ne mujse piyaar kartha hai, usse dhekkar paththar ko bhi piyaar hogaa, me toh insaan hoon bhabi... muje kaisa nahi hogaa' ... ''

madhu ... '' 😲 😲 😕 😕''

raja...''kiya huwaa??!!... me puri baat sunliya''

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Flash back ... raja comes to his room and is about to open the door. that time he hears some voice. he coould not believe his ears. ye toh madhu ki hai. woh bhi raja ke bare me baat karthi hai. he feels very happy, almost flying in the air .he leaves the place without disturbing them.

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raja ... '' 😉 ...''

madhu still in shock and emberressed too

raja...''ab bhi bologi tum mujse piyaar nahi karthi ho??!!'' ... he looks straight into his eyes.
she looks at his eyes... it's filled with love. who will say 'no'
she gulps

raja lifts her in his arms... puts her on the bed.

madhu doesn't say anything and doesnt stop him too 😳

he leans towarsd her ... madhu slowly closes her eyes and ☺️

few minutes passed. but he doesnt do anything... she opens her eyes... raja is still looking at her

madhu... ' 😕 ''

raja... gets up and sits beside her

madhu...''raja... kiya huwaa??!!''

raja...''rani, tum muje badhalthehuye dhekna chathi thi na??!! ''
iskeliye toh tum ithni koshish kar rahi thi... apni baavnako thabake raki thi''

madhu...''ye sab ab kiyu kehthe ho??!!''

raja...''ye... ye jo ek pati patni ke beech hotha hai, woh dho sareer ka mulaakath nahi hai. dho dil ka honichagiye. ab meri rani toh muje mil gayi hai...par tume tumara pati puraa nahi mila na??!! tumara raju nahi mila na??!! ... ab ye sagi nahi hai rani.

ye sagi hoga tab me apne aapko jaise tum chathi ho waise banne ke baath... tumara pati tume puri thara milneke baath...

me bachpan se hi aisa hoon, jungli. pachees saal ko mene ek raat me badal nahi saktha. muje thoda time lagegaa. par rani me wadha kartha hoon me puri thara se koshish karoonga.

tab tak, ye...'' he looks at the bed and gets up

madhu...'' muje bhi kuch kehna hai''

raja...''kiya?''

madhu... ''I LOVE YOU'' 😳


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hope you all like it
again bear with my language 😊

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hi kajal...ganesh chaturthi special episode is nice dear...but you know what i dont know hindi...while i was reading i understood but not everything... if you can plz try to write in english dear...

Originally posted by: shasha1989

hi kajal...ganesh chaturthi special episode is nice dear...but you know what i dont know hindi...while i was reading i understood but not everything... if you can plz try to write in english dear...

yup... 😳
thanks dear

you r becaming good writter day by day

Originally posted by: kajal99

yup... 😳
thanks dear

welcome dear😃

hey kaju!! its really nice!! i like ur episodes or imaginations!!

excellent epi dear kash aysa epis hum show me dekh pate,to aaj hamara show onair hota,i was just dreaming about rajbala while reading the epi.plz keep writing

Beautifully written 👏

That was beautiful Kajal di
Keep writing these 😃

Originally posted by: meenji22

you r becaming good writter day by day

carry on kajal