Marriages Are Made In Heaven #2 - Story 2 DISCONTINUED! NOTE- PG 143

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Bun

@KazBrekker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Ress
Seriously I feel like a boss right now 😎 🤣
Ni, Sudha, Priyal and any others...hahahahhaha I beat u this this time!!! 🤣

Edited by Mentally-Insane - 11 years ago

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Awesome update Di!👏👏👏

Madhu, Madhu, Madhu still lying to RK. Not good. Her nose is beginning getting bigger. In no matter of time it will be longer than Pinocchio's. 😆 Soon enough she will start to sing that Pinocchio song.

Hi-diddle-dee-dee
An actor's life for me

Now I think she give those other actresses a run for their money for the Golden Globe Awards, if she keeps this up. 😆🤣 Move over Meryl Streep and all the others, Madhubala Rishabh Kundra is in the house. 😆🤣

But with her freezing every time when RK mentions office or Rohan. I keep thinking if that girl Elsa from the Disney movie Frozen is secretly hiding somewhere in the house and freezes her everytime when any of those topics comes up. 😆

Honestly I thought that even RK wasn't that stupid. Even he was starting to catch her lie. I am not feeling well today. But yet again, Di you proved me wrong. 😆 He is that stupid. Maybe because of the amount of love he has for Madhu. Maybe that's the reason why he keeps falling for her neverending lies. Well I have a song for this. Guess which one.😆 Or maybe it might be that Madhu are such a good lier that she have a shot, as I already said, in Hollywood or Bollywood.😆

Again that Pakka promise. 😆 How many promises will Madhu break. Well I guess the saying that promises are made to be broken and lies are meant to be kept is true when it comes to Madhu. 😆

Of course Madhu doesn't want to go any parties. She might run into Rohan. Now how if they meet how will that meeting end up like.

Madhu to become pale, begin to stammer Ro...Ro...Rohan...Kyu? And knowing her by now. She would either run like Usain Bolt or Milkha Singh. But somehow I doubt it. Even a snail is faster her. She is the tortoise in the Aespo's tale of the tortoise and the hare. But unlike the tortoise she won't win the race. 🤣🤣🤣🤣 So the other available and most likely opition that is left, is for her to faint.

And when she wakes what explaination will she give to RK.

My mind is coming up with various options here. Either one faint again. Two fake ignorance and again lie to RK. Or three take the gold medal for the fastest runner in the Olympics.

Now I guess you heard of the book Around the World in 80 Days. Well I think with the speed Madhu will have in running away from her problems yet again. She will break the world record, and my previous reference of a female Flash will actually come true.

Naw. RK got angry when Kapil badmouthed his Biwi. 😳😆 I so missed this possessive side of him. I started to think he became whipped. Doing everything that would please his Biwi, becoming oh so boring. No smirk, no hidden agenda. Nothing like my dear Rohan. 😆 I will come back to him later. 😆

Well I guess RK did show everyone that he cares, aham, loves his Biwi. 😆 Well everyone understood it besides the one person who actually should.

Now I take it back. RK isn't the only one stupid here. 😆 Madhu is just as stupid as him.

He didn't even have the courage to confess his feelings yet again. Okay, I am at a tie here. Who should I call the Cowardly Lion from the movie the Wizard of Oz? Madhu or RK?

Somehow I think I will call RK the cowardly Lion and Madhu Pinocchio. They to make a good couple. Whenever a pussycat, sorry lion 😆🤣, needs to sharpen his claws his has his own personal wooden doll.

Hey he might start calling her Gudiya like Raja did in MB.🤣🤣🤣🤣

I missed my hero in this update. 😭 By hero I mean Rohan. 😆 I so wanted him to take his revenge on Madhu.😭 Well since you said it is revelation time in the next update. My guess everything will be out in the open. Again with my wish here. Which is copy and paste from my previous comment. 😆 Except for one little thing. I hope that Madhu will have her birthday soon. 😆🤣 If you know what I mean. 😆 All I ask for is her family, his family and a little knock on the door on her birthday.

Now I want see how she is going to run from her own house.

What excuse will she use. I forgot to buy something at the market, will back in a giffy.

Usain Bolt, Milkha Singh make way for Madhubala Rishabh Kundra. The fastest woman alive who will be known as FF. Not for Fanfic, or Femme Fatale, but for the female Flash. Yes Lubu, again I am mocking this hero. His only ability is to run really really fast and for heal himself as well. And that because his, Barry Allen, body got in contact with some chemicals that were hit by a lightning bolt. Or something like that and made his cells go in an enormous speed. Again a story about an useless hero.😆

Now for the ending I want to apologize Di for unresing my comment so late. I've been busy and I have been falling back on all my comments for all the storyupdates. Sorry, sorry and sorry. I do hope it won't ever happen again. I will try my best that it won't. I also want to thank you for the update and for the PM. But yet again I resed before even getting it. 😆 All thanks to Lubu. I saw her id on latest post for your story. And I just knew either she was chatting, which was highly unlikely for her now. 😆 Or she resed. So thanks Lubu for giving me the second spot. 🤗 Enjoy reading my OS like comment.😳

And of course, what kind of little sister would I be if I didn't congratulate you again. 😳

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! 🥳🥳🥳🥳

You deserve nothing less than the very best. And I know I don't need to say this, because you already know. But I am so proud of you and I am so happy for you. 🤗🤗

I hope you get many more of this things, and more of your stuff gets published.

Now for the awaited song. I thought to save it for the next update, but I'll post it now. 😆 It's from Black Eyed Peas When this song came out, I thought it was so annoying. I still think so whenever I hear it on the radio. As soon I hear it I just switch the channel.😆 Okay it's called Don't lie. And I imagined that Madhu sang the first verse. 😆😆

Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry
Hey, baby my nose is getting big
I noticed it be growing when I been telling them fibs
Now you say your trust's getting weaker
Probably coz my lies just started getting deeper
And the reason for my confession is that I learn my lesson
And I really think you ought to know the truth
Because I lied and I cheated and I lied a little more
But after I did it I don't know what I did it for
I admit that I have been a little immature
F*****g with your heart like I was the predator
In my book of lies I was the editor
And the author
I forged my signature
And now I apologise for what I did to you
Cos what you did to me I did to you

No,no, no, no baby, no, no, no, no don't lie
No, no, no, no, yeah, you know, know, know, know, you gotta try
What you gonna do when it all comes out
When I really see you & what you're all about

Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: kg15
-: NEWS TO SHARE :-

Guys and Gals, I have sent an excerpt of this story to a regional feminist fortnight magazine a month back and luckily, this story has been chosen to be published in that magazine in every edition of it- of course with the edited version (removing the songs and some other part!). Also, first part of it has already been sent to the press. I am overwhelmed! Thanks to all for the appreciation you always gave to this story which motivated me to write more and more!!

congrats dear👏😃🥳

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

beautiful update.❤️

loved it soo mmuucchhh.👏

omg RK has shown his true face now. only god knws wat he wud do after knowing abt madhu's past. 😎

Truth revealation .. but which one 🤔 madhu's past or RK 's hidden love for her😛

BTW wud u plz write part 2 of dat story [ rk gets revenge frm madhu betrays her in d end n madhu is preg wid his child ]

which u wrote for dat competition.

plz many of us want happy ending of dat story . plz pretty plz😳🤗

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Shweta Dafda

@Shweta300

Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Awsome lovely part dear
Thanks for pm n yeah plz next part jaldi waiting for next part

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: kg15
-: NEWS TO SHARE :-
Guys and Gals, I have sent an excerpt of this story to a regional feminist fortnight magazine a month back and luckily, this story has been chosen to be published in that magazine in every edition of it- of course with the edited version (removing the songs and some other part!). Also, first part of it has already been sent to the press. I am overwhelmed! Thanks to all for the appreciation you always gave to this story which motivated me to write more and more!!

i am so happy for u 😃

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Congratulation dear ...
Mindblowinggg update...Angry Rk i just loved it...
Waitinggg to know How Rk gonna react when he foundout about Rohan nd madhu's past relation truth...
Can't Wait 4 next part...
Continue Soon...
nd Thanksss 4 PM...

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Zoya2

@Zoya2

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: kg15
-: NEWS TO SHARE :-
Guys and Gals, I have sent an excerpt of this story to a regional feminist fortnight magazine a month back and luckily, this story has been chosen to be published in that magazine in every edition of it- of course with the edited version (removing the songs and some other part!). Also, first part of it has already been sent to the press. I am overwhelmed! Thanks to all for the appreciation you always gave to this story which motivated me to write more and more!!

Congratulations 👏 👏