Rishbala TS: Jo Tu Mera Hamdard Hai| updated on pg 22 & 25

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Ni33
Beautiful epilogie! 👏
A really nice end to a heartbreaking TS.

if God breaks heart he amends it too..thank u

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

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Originally posted by: Kawan
aww..
beautifully written..
loved the ending...

rishu became a writer
and dedicated his very first to his best friend madhu...

loved it...

glad to know that you enjoyed..thnks for feedback

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

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Originally posted by: meenji22
LOVELY END

thank u dear..saw ur several comments. I'm really overwhelmed 😊😊

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: lathaprasad
beautiful ending 😊

thnx for reading 😊

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Swati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Third part is awesome & At the end you show him as handicap is logical, i liked this perfect happy ending of story!

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kg15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Part 3- It was superb! You portrayed the emotions and helplessness so well, Swagatha! Superbly written and Dhruv's condition was heart touching! What goes around, comes back around! Loved it thoroughly!

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kg15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Oh my! What a lovely beautiful Epilogue it was! I have already read it twice before commenting! Simply outstanding story it was!! So heart touching, heart melting! Their meeting... Your words made it so special! And the poem... Did you write it Swagatha? It was brilliant and so so lovely! A true essence of love it contained in itself!! Brilliant piece it was! 👏

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: NehaVdian
This was beautiful n perfect ending swags
loved it to core
plss keep on writing such stuffs

Thanks a lot Neha.. Of course will write more..i can't escape from it. 😆

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: .Shree.
Just loved the end 😳
It was Beautifully written Titli 👏

Thank u shree..😊

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: zelja89
Beautiful story 👏

Originally posted by: poojabhatt934
2 nd part was an emotiona part .but i liked the epilogue
It wassuch a beautifully written story .thanks for the pm