Testing His Patience OS : (Rishbala Version)with Banner

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Testing His Patience OS :(Rishbala Version)

At KM(Rishbala Room)

Madhu was busy writing in her personal diary. Suddenly RK came fromm behind and going to have a look on it

Madhu : Aap kya kar rahe ho RK(she was trying to hide da book by her dupatta in a haste)

RK:Kyun,mein nahin dekh sakta hoon kit um kya likh rahi ho

Madhu:Nahin!yeh meri personal cheez hai

RK:Madhu,humne ek doosre se wadha kiya hai ki hum hamare sare bathe share karrenge

Madhu:haan lekin yeh meri personal diary,aur humne personal diary share karne ki baat nahin keheti pehle

RK:What the !! mein tumhara pati hoon dammit!mera pura haq banta hai(in a angry tune)

Madhu:yeh bohot persernal hai

RK:fine(in angry tone) and he leaves da room

Madhu: (in her mind she is saying) mujhe bilkul bhi acha nahin lagta ki jab aap gussa hote ho par meine yeh isliye kiya takhi jab apka janam din aaye tab mein yeh dairy ka aakri pana pura karke yeh diary apko tofe mein doon kyunki kal apka janam din hai

The Next Day(RK's Birthday)

Madhu decorates the KM and invites the guest for da surprise party as Deepali instructs her

When RK enters everyone wishes him

Sikki:happy birthday RK bhaiya

RK :thks Sikki

Deepali :happy birthday RK

RK:thks

Bitooji :Cheif ! Madhu bhabhi ne apko tofha diya hai kya

RK:Ab tak toh nahin par who shayad mujhe kamre mein kuch degi

Bitooji :teek hai bhai aap maze karo

In Rishbala 's Room

RK freshen himself and comes out from da bathroom and sees da room decorated with roses and red candles and on the recliner a gift with a note

Happy Birthday RK!yeh tofha aapke sabar ka meetha sa phal hai

Madhu : (comes from the door and says)Kholo na RK

RK :Okay

RK:he opens da gift and sees a diary,and he becomes happy and says Madhu yeh toh wohi diary hai

Madhu:Haan RK!Iss diary mein meine aapne pehli mulakat se ab tak ki hamari pyar ki kahani likhi hai

RK:(he looks at last page to just know what she has written at the ending and it says "Aaj RK ka janam din hai aur aaj mein yeh diary ka akri pana likh rahi hoon aur mein yeh dairy RK ko dene wali hoon aur uske saath uune yeh bhi batane waali hoon ki hamare iss pyar ki safar mein ek naya kissa jhudne wala hai Mere aur RK ki pyaar ki nishani")

RK:Kisses madhu on he forehead and hugs her and says ki yeh duniya ka sabsa BEST tofta hai

Madhu : Saach mein RK

RK:haan saach mein

( Jab tak hum kisi ke humdard nahi bante na )
( Tab tak hum dard se aur dard hum se juda nahi hota )

O.. Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yahin marna aur jeena
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena... x2

Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan
Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan...

Tu meri neendo me sota hai
Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka

Mere dil ki duaayein hain..
Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan
Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..

Kaisa hai rishta tera-mera
Be-chehra phir bhi kitna gehra
Ye lamhe, lamhe ye resham se
Kho jaayein.. kho na jaayein humse
Kaafila.. waqt ka.. rok le..
Abr se juda na ho

Teri galliyan... galliyan teri galliyan..
Mujhko bhaave galiyan teri galiyan
Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan..

Galliyan...
Teri galliyan..
Tadpaavein...

(Movie : Ek Villian

Song : Teri Galliyan )

**************************THE END********************************


Edited by desigirl_sydell - 11 years ago

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meenji22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dont know who posted this os yesterday i already read this os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww such sweet cute os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenji22

dont know who posted this os yesterday i already read this os

this was mine it got posted in OS contest of Rishbala
as many didnt got chance to read it so posting it with a banner
but cause i edited it by adding rishbala instead of arshi
here is the original link
meenji22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigirl_sydell

this was mine it got posted in OS contest of Rishbala
as many didnt got chance to read it so posting it with a banner
but cause i edited it by adding rishbala instead of arshi
here is the original link

sorry i get confused seeing this os in seperate post
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc dear do write more on RISHBALA
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's a lovely OS, Dellu!! Completely love filled!! That diary really proved to be cupid between the duo's hearts!! I loved its ending!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful story. made me miss my RK & Madhu so much!

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