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Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

Thanks for this little short recap Ni!! ''short in ur way'' lmao!!!

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

coming to part 8
was really emotional chappy!! u penned it amazingly!!!
so sullu is dead... aftr that firing hmmm!!! so it was his funeral going on!!! that's good!!!!
now going to read nxt one!!!!

ahh!! forget about banner!! it's awesome perfect match wid story!!! good work lubs dear!!!!

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

So in starting I thought this would be a total emotional but as flash back switched nd came another one atmosphere changed!!!
madhu is totally wat to say I m at lack of word Ni dear u get a name for her...
so she bite nd RK kissed her I really liked that then bedroom scene was goood!!! nd madhu being tortured is quite torturing haan!!!
finally they slept!!!

Originally posted by: .Shree.

Finally I am here to comment Ni 🤗

It was an awesome update as usual 👏

These RK and Madhu are crazy. 😆

Originally posted by: kg15

Recap and Part 8- OK! Now don't laugh that I am commenting on this part now!! 😆 But Ni... I really didn't want to say this after reading thus update but my mind is screaming aloud right now with these three words...

I AM CONFOOOSSSEEEDDD... 🤣 YES! I am STILL confused even after reading the Recap three times to feed this storyline in my mind tape but NO... Even it's not helping me out!

So I have decided to leave all the seven chapters now and follow your coming updates for my sanity... Actually, Sane Insanity! 🤣

So, coming to the Part 8. Brilliantly written it was, Ni baby! And finally, Sullu Pullu died... Though I still doubt he did as the ambulance has reached there so he might make a flying entry no... Kuch bhi ho sakta hai... 🤣

When that 'Tuucchh' was going on, I was like... What is this happening? What is that Tuucchh? 🤣 Don't take me wrong baby but I told you na, I am already confused with this damn complicated maze of flashbacks! 😆 But later I got to know, it was related to that gun... 🤣

Superb moments of bro and Sis... Deeply touched me! Especially the last few paragraphs...

But all I got at the end of this update was CONFOOOSION... 🤣 My brain literally flew away like Chidiya Firangi... 🤣

Originally posted by: kg15

Needless to say for the banner... Lubu Sissooo is just brilliant doing PS...

It was indeed an excellent Banner for this story!

Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane

Res...I unresed last time...so have some trust in me that I will do it this time too 😆

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Finally Unresing!!!!

Awesome Update Ni!!! Well done!!😳

Awww i feel bad for Madhu...everyone is dead...and the ones she has left..she had to push them away too...family is superr important to every human being and one is incomplete without it and just imagining that this women has lost everyone she could call family is heart breaking😭 , and then having being told that she kills everyone around her can scar a person deep. Even if it is said in a blast of overwhelmed emotions, i don't believe anyone should have to be accused of such thing...and to top it off..it was her best friend and her fatherly figure...truly disappointing..

Coming to RK...Dude this guy knows nothing happning around him!! 😆 Oh why is she talking to Papa like that? She nearly died? How? How can she? *ahem**ahem* Maybe by getting shot and nt to forget she is Only Human and not some robot who just can't die u idiot! 😆 More idiotic stuff: A Mark! Shit she is going around with guys!!! Ohhh...its not a hickey...thank God *phew*. Wait she got tortured? When? How? Nobody told me? Yh totally, u r the president right? Everyone has to tell u everything!! How did he end up becoming a spy?? -.-

But my heart goes to Aryaan! He is so innocent, pure and had to be dragged into all this mess resulting him to lose his father and now Madhu too...and his Uncle too is in the same occupation..

And awww..loved the cute Rishbala moment at the end..

Okay i knw there is sooo much more i can write on like the bar moments and that cab moment but i just came home from work (Well I volunteer at a charity shop) and i am hungry and i can smell it all the way from the kitchen so sorry babes...food anyday over this 🤣