FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#531

rk has brought madhu only for three month n only one week is remaining hope madhu openup with rk n rk help her
awesome update thks for pm

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Qurat-ul-Ain

@ainanwer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#532

feeling sad for madhu

nice update

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Sweety

@sweetdear

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Posted: 10 years ago

#533

Truly dark chapter..hats off to you TK for pulling it off so nicely !!!

Wow...MADHU is one Iron Lady. Well at least she is when it comes to her brother !! Madhu is breathing just for the sake of her brother and his safety !! Hopefully she at least succeeds in this challenge of hers !! I just don understand why is she hiding from him, well they have lived in the slum with a drunken, abusive father all along, won't her brother understand if she explains to him...obviously he would have seen LIFE...of all kinds!! I belive she is overthinking n at the end the same brother will only blame her for keeping him in dark !! Her past is gut wrenching...death is so easy than this ...Flesh trade is such a vicious circle, brutally punishes the innocent victims leaving them stranded stripped of dreams,hopes and freedom and where people are living dead !!

I was in a assumption that RK has bought her for life, OMG just one more week then ...guess the prologue is fast approaching haha!! But he is very close to the REALISATION now...hope this time he wins after he chooses to lose things that gave nothing but betrayal,pain and torturous life !!

Guess now everything relies on Rishabh's CHOICE !! After all he is a Knight (at least for me haha) though a broken one now !! I believe only him and only him can save rest of Madhu's life along with her brother's too!! Let's see how much has he already HEALED in this aspect.

Loved it...awesome job on a lengthy n gripping chapter TK!!

Edited by sweetdear - 10 years ago

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Tanya Kaur

@muzikk93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Feel so bad for madhu. bas***ds like mukund should be castrated publicly😡 emotional chapter.i hope madhu does not fall into danger again.

Edited by muzikk93 - 10 years ago

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Umair001

@Umair001

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#535

Nice update but this 1 month part not good
Plz don't send madhu

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#536

a bit sad but an excellent update

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noiseygirl

@noiseygirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#537

I hope Rk will keep madhu with him
I dont want madhu suffer more
thanks for pm

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#538

Well tk u r one great writer...just hats off !! U not only have written Madhu's condition,situation & circumstances and her inner turmoil very well but also made me think about the girls who do exist in this world like madhu who are prying in hands of monsters like Mukund.Its very painful and emotional to read Madhu's condition but here I say Rk had now came out atleast moved from knowing that not everyone is dipali and his condition compared to madhu is different in a way of pain & turmoil going through but madhu is in a bigger worry.still Rk atleast must connect the dots himself from the matters starting from buying madhu as virgin,tony saying she is Virgin ,her soothing words,her purity atleast he shud know abt madhu.I wud read every update in expectation of atleast one time Rk wud come closer to know madhu past from her.
But hope next in further Part Rk wud become madhu strength,saviour and also he wil sooth madhu like she had done him.he has to nurse madhus wound with words nd care.