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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys please don't post for a while..i am giving the whole story and new theme...just give me 5 mins...

The story so far...I made a few changes like adding punctuation marks...

:::The begining:::

Continuation from the scene of 23rd November 2012...


OS- Letting her go...


Madhu hugged RK tightly "You also love me, isn't it...Please don't say no..." and looked at him expectantly. RK parted from her and looked with a serious expression and then said, "No...Madhu...I don't love you...yet . Yes I care for u but I do not love u yet . I like u too . U r so different from me . "

Hearing this Madhu was totally shocked while Hearing Madhu's words, RK was left speechless.

He was baffled by the revelation and didn't know how to react, all he could see were her gorgeous doe eyes which had been pleading him, begging him to be loved, hoping that he felt the same about her.
Not knowing how or what to say, RK left the room in an instant.

Madhu sat on the floor suppressing her sobs. She got rejected by RK right on her face...could anything be worse than this??

She kept on thinking why he walked away without saying a single word, the more she thought about it, the more it hurt..
RK had left her hanging, and she didn't know what else to do but feel like a complete and utter idiot for spilling her heart and soul in front of him !

Suddenly she heard footsteps at the door. Thinking it to be RK she quickly got up and wiped away her tears roughly.

"Bhabhijee???"

Seeing BittuJi standing out the door instead of RK, she wiped away her tears.
"BittuJi, whats wrong?" "Bhabhijee, chief..."
*BittuJi starts Crying*

"Rk? What RK bittuji? Is he fine? where is RK bittuji?" Madhu was completely shocked seeing bittuji crying.

"Bhabhi...chief...chief met wid n accident"

Madhu's world stopped.. She felt numb.. She couldn't think anything straight.. She was blank!
Bittuji's words brought her back to her senses
Bittuji "BHABHIJI!!"
Madhu looks at him and looks at the door and just rushes out without a word while Bittuji kept calling her from behind..

Bittuji ran behind Madhu and finally managed to stop her near the entrance.

"Wait Bhabhiji ...where are you going?" he asked panting.

"Bittuji...I want to see my RK...where is he Bittuji? please take me to him please." Madhu was crying badly.

Bittuji noticed that Madhu was crying for his chief for the very first time and without any delay he said " he is in the hospital bhabhiji...came with me." And he led her towards the car

Madhu follows Bittuji and sits in the car..
Bittuji tells the driver to take them to the place..
Bittuji was looking at Madhu who was crying all the time hugging one picture of RK!
The car stops and Madhu gets down and is shocked by what she sees!!
The driver takes Bittuji back home..
Madhu was standing in front of an entrance which was totally decorated

She sees RK and Dipali laughing together.

Madhu runs to him - RK are you fine? Bittuji.. Bittuji..said you had an accident??
RK laughs - You think superstar RK will Love You.. You? It was all just a drama to break your heart

Madhu was shocked beyond belief ! She couldn't believe her ears ...was what she heard right ? RK ...what he did was just a drama ? no ...this ...this cant be true ...she broke down completely.
"RK why r you joking, Look I am serious and I DON'T like such jokes."


Suddenly her expression changes and she said, "If you can play a game I too can..."

"What did you think huh ? If you can play with my life even I can ...did you seriously think I started loving you ? Seriously ? I mean just think ...you destroyed my life ...and out of all people in the world I would fall in love with you ? Ha ! that would be a joke. If you are superstar then I also played the role of a superstar's wife.

Seeing Bittujee looking at her in shock, she smirked, "Bittuji, oh don't look shocked ...this was my game..."

Rk was shocked beyond believe...Madhu ? her thoughts were so pure ...how could this even cross her mind ? He tried to control his feelings ...because all this was for her own sake ...he couldn't tell her in any way that he had cancer ...she is leaving ...let her leave by her own wish.

Madhu turned back and started moving with a rage. There were tears in her eyes. If she is sad then why she replied like that to RK.

RK saw Madhu turning her back towards him ...he wanted to stop her ...he wanted to hold her hand and warn her never to leave him again ...but he couldn't do that ...he couldn't be selfish this time ...he loved her ...n the best thing was to let her free ...but by doing this he felt as if a boulder had smashed his heart

As soon as Madhu left from there RK broke down on his knees ...he was completely shattered ...he loved her so much ...dint she love him ...ever ? he was already missing her ...he felt as if the sand in his hands was slipping away ...n he could do nothing except regretting over his past deeds.

Bittuji went behind his Bhabhiji, he wanted an explanation.

"Bhabhiji!" he called out. Madhu stopped hearing that.

"How could you do that bhab...no...u r no more my bhabhiji ...Madhubala ,,,,how could you do that huh ? "

" Do what Bittuji?I believe in tit for tat ...and I just gave him what he deserved ...this is what he deserves,"she said trying to hide the turmoil inside her heart.

Bittuji stared at her. His hands turned into fists. His eyes were red with anger .
"You are not the same girl I knew ." He said that amd went back to console his chief.
Madhu fell down to her knees.
"Life changes just in a second." She thought and chuckled humourlessly. In a moment, RK rejected her love, gave her a heartbreak and she returned it, or should she say, acted to return it??
But saying that to him wasn't her plan...she loved him, but ...she couldn't let him win once again ...she wouldn't let him know that she was broken ...instead she wanted to stand up raising her head high in front of him...to show that she won this time ...but deep inside her heart ...she knew ...she had lost ...
Madhu was feeling shattered , she was not able to see the hatred for her in the eyes of Bittuji . Bittuji was like a elder brother to her.

She had no explanation to give to Bittuji, she couldn't let RK win so she said what came to her mind .

Deepali was the most happiest person when RK called her and when RK broke Madhu's heart, she was on the seventh sky .
But little had she expected RK, her hero as she called him, shatter down like this! Never really had she seen a defeated man and she had never expected 'Her Hero' to be broken to this extend that he would be crying and that too over that chawl-filth...Madhubala!

That was when RK thought about Deepali who was standing...No he don't want show his weakness to anyone especially to her...He stood up and started walking back to home or should he say a building where his Madhu will not be there anymore.
At R.K. mansion Radhaji was pacing here n there...she was worried Madhu left without answering her. As she sees RK she ran towards him...
R- Rishu, what happened to Madhu?? Where did she go?? Do you know anything???
RK looked at her and went away without speaking a word. In his bedroom, he sat on the couch and remembered all the moments he spent with Madhu, those lovely moments, which were now just memories...
on the other side bittuji's questioning eyes were looking at Madhu she finally spoke out "whatever I id..and whatever you seen was true ..I don't have any explanation to give...not even a single word to say...i just only want you to go to your chief as his ego is broken today he might need you"


Bittujee could sense that something is wrong...his Bhabhijee can't do this..and why the hell did chief say all that?? He was getting confused badly...somehthing is wrong and he needs to find it out. He left from there to check on his Chief..
he reached rk mansion n immediately rushed 2 rk's bedroom ...he saw him thrr sitting on the floor with a bottle of vodka in his hand ...his eyes were completely red with pain ...he looked broken ...bittuji couldn't stop himself from crying ...
"Chief" he said with great difficulty ...rk looked up at bittuji's direction and a tear dropped from his eye

Bittujee gulped his tears and sat beside RK, "Chief, why did you do this...why??"
RK gave a painful smile, "Bittujee, I didn't do anything, its just that I don't love that Madhubala..she is not even of my standard...how could she think that I would fall for her??"
"truth in your eyes chief " said bittuji "i m with you from the days i cant even memorise..this smile the fake smile i can get the pain behind this"
Rk looked up at bittuji and hugged him tight...
" I cant do this bittuji. ..i could never do that to her...but then.."
"But what cheif?"
Rk suddenly realised that he was about to tell bittuji the truth. ..nno...he cant do that. ..he just can't.
He looked away unable to face him. Bittujee continued, "Chief, you tell that I am a brother to you, then won't you share your pain with me?? I promise Chief, I will do anything to reduce it, you just tell me..."
RK looked at him and said, "Bittujee...I ...I have..."
"RK!!!!!"
deepali came running towards rk's room...
" rk ..iI knew it...iI knew it that you wont fall in love with that middle class girl...sshe doesnt even have a standard. ..i Am so happy for you hero"
she said and seductively kept her hand on rk's shoulder...
RK jerked her hands off and shouted at the top of his voice, "OUT!!!!!!!!!!"
Deepali was going to say something when Bittujee told her, "Deepalijee before I throw you out, just get out with our self-respect.."
Deepali got up fuming and went towards the door and exclaimed shocked,"YOU!!!"
this was madhu...
she came with a bag in her hand
RK and Bittuji kept wondering why did she come back??
Madhu marched up to RK..
RK was now standing with his back towards her but by then Madhu had already seen his teary face and swollen eyes..
She wondered why he was crying when he himself ditched her but then thinking it to be the pain of the shock that his ego had got she rubbishes the questions arising in her mind..
She keeps the bag there and turns to leave.
Suddenly Bittuji calls her back"Bhabiji Plz wait, I have to tell u something"
Halting a stop in her tracks, she suddenly turned around, glaring at bittuji she firmly and strongly replied, "Whatever it is, you can tell me, but please stop calling me 'Bhabiji'! Your chief has taken away that right...". The shiny layer of tears which were ready to spill caught Bittuji's attention rather than her words. 'What is the matter with both?' he wondered.
RK- Biwi...
M- Please RK, don't call me biwi, and how dare you call me biwi...I think you forgot what did you tell me, that I am not for you...so better we should forget that we are...no...we were husband and wife... I had come here only to give you this bag which contains Mangalsutra, all the jewelries you had given me and everything that kept us connected.."
'We WERE Husband and Wife'...this played over and over again in his ears as he watched her take her stuff and pack it. She hurt his ego, 'How dare she!?!' his jaw tightened, nobody ever ordered RK or told him what to do and neither would she...she would have to pay for his heart break!

His anger took the better of him as he marched up to her, grabbing her arm and spinning her around that she fell on his chest, making him totally forget why he wanted to distance himself from her ...
Madhu looked up irritated..
His eyes looked painful as well as angered..
They share a brief eye lock when Dipali interrupts..
Dipali - Leave her RK!! She is not even worthy of your anger..
RK- I haven't asked about your opinion...its between me and my WIFE...so better stay out of it...
D- RK...
RK- OUT!!!!!!!!!
Deepali fumed and went out of the room while Bittujee also left to give them some private time...


Madhu is struggling to free herself..
RK twists her hand behind her back and Madhu grimaces in pain..
RK- "What do you think of yourself hunh?? You thought you would break my heart? The Superstar RK's? You thought I would Love You? You don't even match my standards!! When you were trying to take revenge from me at least you would have seen your past? Has anyone ever won against me?"
M- Mr.Rishab Kundra...everything has a start and now its the start of my victory over yours...leave my hand...
RK- Do you think I have caught it to let it go so easily???

Madhu - I said leave my hand..
RK- No you have to listen to what I have to say.. RK never loses.. You are the one who was always defeated by me and today also you are defeated by me..
Madhu's eyes were filling up.. She turned her face away so that he doesn't see her tears..
RK holds her face and makes him look at her..
He notices the tears that flowed down her cheeks. he had an uncontrollable urge to wipe them but he could not do that. he pushed her away and turned his back towards her, "Get out from this mansion..I don't want to see you..."
Madhu quietly packed her bag and started walking towards the door...
she was devoid of any emotions...she was broken totally broken..she was no more an human
RK here was confused abt his confusing feelings
he wanted to hurt her brutallu but at the same time consol her
why was his feelings soo complicated? he wondered
Rk sat down again drinking. Bittujee saw Madhu leaving the mansion.
"Bhabhijee..stop...Bhabhijee please wait..."
M- Bittujeee...don't call me bhabhijee...your bhabhijee is dead...
bittuji felt very bad for his bhabhiji but he felt more bad for his chief
today his chief blinded by his ego lost the only person who loved him truly
he had to talk to his chief
bittuji went to rk n said"chief what u did today will destroy u"
he saw him mockingly n smirked

RK- Bittujee...have you seen fire burning itself? Water getting wet in itself?? Similarly RK never gets destroyed...he just destroys others...RK is the synonym of destruction...
B- Really Chief??? But why can't I see that fire in you today??? Why this Ultimate Winner Rishabh Kundra seems like a ULTIMATE LOSER today??? Your eyes are always able to express well in your films Chief but today, they again won in your real life... They are acting against your fake smile!!!
RK gritted his teeth and tightened his fist and threw the bottle...
rk shouted "no rk cannt be loser...rk is always a winner...how can i win yet lose"
rk went near his window n saw the dark clouds which emoted his dark life

B- Your heart knows you have lost it today, Chief!!! You have lost the only person who was only yours... Who was willing to be yours... Forever!!! How could you sway away her like an ash... It's isn't late Chief! Bring her back!
RK could feel BittuJi's words tugging at his heart. the more he thought about the words, the more he regreted what he had done, the regret he felt made him realise what he really done, he had to get her back, somehoe.. one way or the other !
rk_no rk can never give his heart to anyone coz he is a heartless beast saying this he laughed loudly
bittuji saw him with disgust
rk saw his disgust..he picked up a bottle n grabbed his car keys n smirked at him
bittuji asked"where r u going chief?"...but he pushed bittuji n went off

But somewhere deep in his heart he knows he had failed miserably with the fate and has lost the one whom loved and trusted him . EVEN THOUGH SHE TOLD HIM THAT SHE WAS PLAYING WITH HIM HE COULD SENSE HER HEARTBREAK IN HER EYES . THE PAIN WAS UNBEARABLE FOR HIM.
Bittuji - Just one question chief.. I know you loved bahbhiji a lot.. wait.. let me speak.. I know you love het to the extent that you can even give your life for her then why did you wanted to separate from her? Why chief why?
At this time RK remembers the why he actually wanted to separate from her..
He just signs Bittuji to leave.
Standing near the window he resumed drinking. He had nothing to do except sulking. He had lost everything in his life but he could not lose his Madhu...he did not want her to get any sort of pain. Letting her go was the best thing he did in his life. Now it was time that he also goes to his deep sleep.
RK knew that he had cancer, but he did not have the courage to tell it to Madhu. Today when he heard her telling I love you, he was baffled, he had to do something so that Madhu starts hating him, because after a few months he will die, he knows. He can't let Madhu have the pain of losing someone, he knows how much it hurts so he broke her heart to build her future. She deserved more from life.
Letting her go...the best and the toughest thing superstar RK did in his short lived life...


I hope friends I am able to give a good ending...




Edited by rg0782 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
THEME 2: The heroine track!!
The introductory part will be given by Kavya...kindly cntinue after she posts...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
what happened?? where did everyone go???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rg0782

what happened?? where did everyone go???

i m still here...
by the way superb ending
i m waiting for the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I guess Kavya is not here...so anyone please give some introductory lines...I am out of ideas...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz make next thread for the next theme
Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rg0782

I guess Kavya is not here...so anyone please give some introductory lines...I am out of ideas...

rim what theme?? i can give
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can I give a bunch of lines and you guys can continue?
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RK looks at Madhu hopefully waiting for her to say "Yes!"
Madhu just stares at RK's hopeful eyes.. She didn't want to turn him down but she couldn't even say Yes!.. She hated the film industry, the cameras from her childhood.. Never in her wildest dream she had ever imagined that one day she herself would have to become an actress.. No this was not what she wanted from her life.. She just wanted to live a simple life far away from the fake and unjust glamorous world..
Not knowing what to say or do Madhu just walks away..

Edited by drashtifan1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drashtifan1

RK looks at Madhu hopefully waiting for her to say "Yes!"
Madhu just stares at RK's hopeful eyes.. She didn't want to turn him down but she couldn't even say Yes!.. She hated the film industry, the cameras from her childhood.. Never in her wildest dream she had ever imagined that one day she herself would have to become an actress.. No this was not what she wanted from her life.. She just wanted to live a simple life far away from the fake and unjust glamorous world..
Not knowing what to say or do Madhu just walks away..

here rk who was awaiting for his heroine ...was dissapointed by madhu's walking away
today for the first time SUPERSTAR rk is gonna be defeated by his fate only coz of his love
he felt that his life was destroyed as his respect was gonna be destroyed

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