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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

loving madhu's character a lot...she is smart , tough & interesting...😳

I had a feeling people were going to tsk at her money loving ways but I am glad to hear that is not the case😊
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Chapter 4
[Five years ago]
Two similar thoughts. Two different musings.

Madhubala Chowdhary, soon to be Malik, was standing under the dim streetlight looking down on her cloth sneakers covered in wet tar. A charming man, a little over a head taller than her stood leaning on her back.
"Do you have the confidence?" he asked in that deep sultry tone that drove Madhu crazy.
"For what?" she said in a murmur.
"To be the daughter-in-law my father wants you to be? In our family, being a woman isn't a very coveted status. But don't you worry, I won't let you suffer. I will earn enough money to make your dreams come true".
Madhu had a breath caught in her throat, and her head all caught up in his thoughts, and her heart tangled around his being. Inside she was a mess but outwardly, she displayed no signs of wavering.
"What are you so worried about?" she replied, keeping up her facade. "That I won't yield to the slave driver big boss Malik? So you beat around the bush threatening me with my lowly status? Dream on kid! I left my shame at the door when I put on your ring and walked into your arms. I don't need my pride, I only need your money. You might still be living in the la la land where I love you so much I would die for you, but I am back on earth. You die, no you lose, and I turn the other way. I don't have any confidence to wait around for you with other rich men still alive. Understand?"
Perhaps he saw her blinking eyelids or the shaking of her fingers as she perfectly delivered her rehearsed monologue but Sameer Malik wasn't a bit convinced. He looked her right in the eye and said, "I don't believe you". Then, he bowed his head and kissed her- warm, supple, gentle, ravishing, sharp under the night streetlight. Beams of white light submerged her in their radiance, she stumbled a little from the shock but he held her close until she wasn't muddled anymore. They married three days later. Neither discussed the kiss again. But Madhu knew in that moment she had fallen for the enemy.

Rishabh Kundra had just turned thirty. Standing in the smack middle of a locally brewery, his hands were rough and calloused. His forehead beaded with sweat and his heart full of elaborate plans on avenging the Maliks. He spent his teens fighting street gangs, his twenties fighting his own weaknesses, and now his glorious decade would be spent defeating the one enemy who made him the man he was today- an orphan, a loner, a little boy who never grew up, a man who couldn't dream of anything but bloody murder even if he tried. It was only if Shamsher Malik was gone from this world would he breath a sigh of relief. Every moment now was only leading up to that precious minute when he would come face to face with the monster in his nightmares.

[Five Years Later]
Rishabh was back in the brewery where he busted his arse earning minimum wage. He was now making ten times the amount but at a heavy cost- serving the young madame of the Malik empire. When taking this job, Rishabh had been certain Madhubala would be the easiest to break out of all the leeches in the family. So far, he was yet to find the clink in her shiny armour he'd been searching for. The woman was perfect from head to toe and in some ways, smarter than the rest of the lot. Even so, a drunken mistake could change the game. Today would be the perfect occasion to attempt his first line of attack.

When she asked for a drink, he brought her the beer with the highest alcohol content. She blatantly refused. "I know my lager child and this ain't the one for me".
"Cheers!" Rishabh answered in defeat. Four pints down and she was alert as ever. Then came his golden chance. She took him to her hotel room citing security as the reason. He couldn't care less.
Rishabh simply had to wait for her to fall and he'd search through her belongings for a keycard or data to get direct access to the coveted big boss. Unknowingly, the man may have fallen into a bigger trap.

She started taking off her clothes as soon as he closed the door behind them. Shoes gone, dress on the floor, stockings ripped into shred. Madhubala Malik and her chiseled figured stood next to vanity dresser in a little silk slip. She pulled her hair down, stuffed her arms between her thighs and sat down in a pose that was both intentionally and unintentionally seductive.

"Miss, should I go outside?"
"No"
A moment of silence followed.
"Who are you?" she asked.
"Rishabh Kundra. Private bodyguard miss".
"No. You're a liar. Even if others don't know, I can tell. You have another motive, right? I am right, ain't it?"
Had she caught on to him? This woman had trouble written all over her anyway and now, in this hotel. He was alone and she was in a SLIP!
"Aaah! What are you doing miss?" he retreated as Madhubala advanced toward him, holding his head in her hands attempting to kiss him. Kiss him? Kiss him!
"Miss please stop miss".
"Then tell me who you are". She was rough and daring stuffed into one petite body. In those few seconds that took her to land a kiss on his lips, Rishabh had regained composure. He went for her legs and locked her down underneath him.
"I am sorry miss. This was self defense". He huffed trying to hold her down.
"Tap out", she gestured wrestling style. "I am wearing a dress boy". The slip had been pulled up to her waist and he could see her undergarments.
"Sorry miss", he quickly let go.
She straightened herself and said, "you got one last chance. Tell me what you want or else".
"I don't know what you are talking about miss". Rishabh maintained his poker face.
"Fair enough. Go wait outside".
Rishabh watched her slip out of her slip as he walked away. Perhaps he should have humored her.

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Sameer politely offered Rishabh a seat on the breakfast table.
"Wifey another omelette for the gentleman", he called for Madhu.
Rishabh could hardly breathe with the awkwardness filling the air. Madhubala slammed the eggs and juice in front of him and whispered, "freeloader".
This was not going to go down well. Already he'd upset perhaps the person most vital to his employment at Malik mansion. One small mistake and Rishabh might just be sleeping under the stars.
He watched with relief as Sameer squeezing his wife's hand repeatedly seemed to have calmed down her anger by several notches.
The breakfast table was about to quiet down when Madhubala spoke up again. "Sameer", she said.
"Yes love". He smiled at her and Rishabh too looked up in anticipation.
"Put a baby in me", she said with the most serene of faces.
"What?" Both Rishabh and Sameer spit out their food at the exact same moment.

Edited by DonnaHarvey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Superb n precap is interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Both have a bone to pick with Big Boss Malik and I can't wait to see how he screwed both of them over. The end of the chapter and the precap were awesome. She can spot a faker like her a mile away. Can't help but wonder once the truth is out about them to each other, will they team up??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb and last line was a cracker😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update
the precap was the most crazziest thing ever heard
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So both have their set agenda n they are aware about each other.
the precap very interesting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rdave1

Both have a bone to pick with Big Boss Malik and I can't wait to see how he screwed both of them over. The end of the chapter and the precap were awesome. She can spot a faker like her a mile away. Can't help but wonder once the truth is out about them to each other, will they team up??

you catch on quickly woman!
I merely left one hint that I thought nobody would catch until maybe the next chapter but you are right in with the action. I admire the attentive reading. hehe.
I think so. Teaming up would the most practical approach but I have a feeling a certain someone would be resistant to group work. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Author's Note: Here is another chapter I wrote during my recent road trip. Do not expect this to be the daily fare. I will write less frequently in the future. Consider this a happy exception.
Chapter 5

Days after the hotel incident passed quietly. Even so, Rishabh always had an eerie feeling at the back of his head as if a ghost was silently watching his every move. Even once in a while he would shoot a sneaky glance toward the mistress and she was omnipresent, existing confidently. He loved that look on her face, that looked that said she was fabulous and she knew it. Plus, after feeling her body so up close Rishabh couldn't help but count the curves of her skin.
On the other side, the gloves were off for Madhubala. This was a rough fight and she was going to get to the bottom of the mystery that was Rishabh Kundra. If not, then send him a threatening message at the very least. So she called him in for breakfast all of a sudden. The sun had just risen engulfing their quite seaside home in an orange glow. She was wearing her husband's dress shirt and flinging her notorious golden legs atop the deck as she called for the bedheaded bodyguard.
"Oye, let's eat". She thought she enticed him with the fresh smell of capsicums in her plate but it was her shiny skin that did the trick. Rishabh smiled like an idiot as he climbed up the stairs getting the full view of her body underneath the white fabric that had turned translucent with the morning sunlight.
Okay, the scent from the charcoal grill was pretty seductive too. Rishabh popped his head inside and noticed the husband with his head buried deep inside the Sunday Times. How did this man ever get a woman like that? Life was so unfair! If Rishabh was in his place, he would never take his eyes of the beauty he'd scored. Instead, this lucky bas***d was oblivious to the treasure he had by his side.
Sameer put an end to Rishabh's musings when pulled his head out of the morning news and politely offered Rishabh a seat on the dinning table.
"Wifey another omelette for the gentleman", he called for Madhu. It was strange how Madhu was the one who extended this invitation yet she got very angry when asked to cook for his person.
"Hubby I am tired. Tell him to make it himself", she sneezed from the fumes of the charcoal.
"Just give him your scrambled eggs love. We can share my food", Sameer gave Rishabh an apologetic smile.
"But I wanted to eat the scrambled eggs", she whined.
"Madhuuu!" Sameer fake scolded her and Rishabh wanted to vomit from the disgusting display of cuteness. Jeez! These people were the epitome of what not to do as a happy couple in front of lonely single people.
Rishabh could hardly breathe with the awkwardness filling the air. Madhubala slammed the eggs and juice in front of him and whispered, "freeloader".
This was not going to go down well. Already he'd upset perhaps the person most vital to his employment at Malik mansion. One small mistake and he might just be sleeping under the stars.
He watched with relief as Sameer squeezing his wife's hand repeatedly seemed to have calmed down her anger by several notches.
The breakfast table was just about to quiet down when Madhubala spoke up again. "Sameer", she said.
"Yes love". He smiled at her and Rishabh too looked up in anticipation.
"Put a baby in me", she said with the most serene of faces.
"What?" Both Rishabh and Sameer spit out their food at the exact same moment. The argument (or what would be left of it once Madhubala started talking) slowly gained momentum as the wife presented her case. Rishabh watched her turn to a side, enough to be out of clear view but not quite so one could still make out what she was doing. In a matter of minutes, there were big round white pearls silently dripping out of her big round black eyes. She didn't sniff or snort but he felt his heart in his mouth, pumping loudly. Surely Sameer wasn't immune to her charm either. And just as Rishabh thought, the man rushed to her side hiding her tears in his shoulder. He gently patted her head whispering, "I am right here" on repeat. Then, he pleaded with Rishabh to take his meal downstairs. "Sorry man, some other time eh? I apologize for disrupting your meal. Really sorry man", he said to Rishabh while nodding aggressively.
Rishabh, of course, did what was sensible- pick up the leftovers and head downstairs to his original spot where his modest cup noodles awaited him. But as he walked out, he noticed her two dark eyes staring in his direction and then, a wink!
Madhubala was clearly sending him a message and even though Rishabh did not know what that message was, he sure as hell knew he'd been warned. Better bow to the tigress lest he realize his death wish. The weeks following, Rishabh spent his days in meek obedience. If the madame said it was day, he would think the black night a sun blessed morning. If the madame wanted rain, he would pluck out the clouds from the far sky. Everything was in accordance with the madame's wishes just to gain curry favour with the mighty queen. At last, his tiring efforts bore their fruit. The Madhubala invited him up to her bedroom. No, no. He wouldn't make the same mistake twice. This time, he would sell his soul to her so the body was a small loss. He'd even prepared a pack of magnums in advance.
"Sit down", she said pointing to no furniture in particular. He pulled out the ottoman next to the vanity. She placed her hands on his shoulder and massaged it with those deep digging fingers. He was afraid he was falling asleep under her spell.
"Who are you fighting?" she asked.
Last time she let him off easy. But he knew that wouldn't be the case now. There was no other living soul in sight. It was just him and her in the beach house and she could do things to him. Things he did not want done!
"Miss I am not sure I can trust you", he hesitated.
"You have no other choice", she said with that killer confidence of hers. Oh lord, he was free falling for this temptress.
Okay, plan B. He was bigger than her, more physically active. He could take her down if need be. At the expense of his job sure but...oh no, not the precious job! Okay, he was really doomed.
"Miss I..."
"It's not Sameer, is it? You better pray it's not him you are aiming for. Because if you touch so much as a hair on his body, so help you god. I don't easily let go of things that are mine".
He gulped on the dryness in his throat. "It's not him miss". Rishabh really thanked his lucky stars that minute.
"Then, tell me. Who is it you're aiming for?"
"Big boss", Rishabh answered with all the sincerely he could display in two words. Her reaction was less than expected. Madhubala burst into fits of laughter.
"Many came and went before you child. All of them had revenge in mind and I have only seen them be consumed by the flames of their own desire. As soon as they see money, they want to grope it, grab it, f**k it exclusively. These bas***ds are the same breed as the dog they want to bite. They tell me they want revenge but really they are drooling over his money and when they get an inch closer to his riches, they forget the target and shoot for dollars pouring out of his arse. That's their kryptonite and that's what got -every one of them. Too many skeletons in Malik's closet, too many to count kid. You'll just be another body in the pile. I don't believe you. And I don't believe your revenge. Try elsewhere".
Rishabh sat in position mortified. So this was what it felt like to walk into the dragon's den and be rejected. The dragon was so disgusted by the ambition of her prey, she refused to eat him. He sat there for the longest time with no purpose in mind. When he got out, she was grilling vegetables outside.
"Miss", he said with rebuilt confidence this time.
"Pass me the zucchini".
"I can do it. With your help miss".
"Why should I help you?" she asked dismissively.
"Because Madhubala", his choice of words caught her attention. "You and I are the same person".
She was seeing red. How dare an hourly staffer call her name. How dare he compare HER to the likes of him!
"I, unlike you, do not live with revenge in mind. I have a full life. I have let go of the past, I live happily. As much as I want to rip that man to shreds, I sleep just fine at night knowing he's alive. I live because I want to not because I have to. I don't live to see him dead. And won't help you waste your youth away either!"

She was panting by the time she finished talking. With her metal tongs still poking him in the chest, she realized he'd got to her. Yes, Rishabh Kundra had finally succeeded in finding a crack in the rock wall that was Madhubala Malik.
"See, you're just like me", he laughed a devilish laugh.
Mahubala was tongue tied for a minute. But only for a minute.
"Then I take it you won't be needing two of yourself for the mission". And she walked away with the chic attitude she always carried in the air surrounding her.
"Does that mean you'll help? Umm miss? Miss?"
She waved her hand in a lotus form and a man was dead on the spot. This was going to be a fun ride ahead.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: christobelle

lovely update

the precap was the most crazziest thing ever heard

hehe you'll soon learn what a messed up woman our madhu really is.
but I love her anyway. she might just be the best heroine I wrote thus far. then again, I have huge crush on her. her and sameer, I'll have both of them to go. 😆

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