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SreeRK

@SreeRK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Your writing with all the pure love makes a even a killer sweet and sexy..This was after all age!

Loved it lazy..superb and Rishbala destined to be together:)

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow
it was just superb
loved it
they shared very complicated yet very understanding relationship
this makes me believe in destiny...truely awesome story
n rk...omg...i could already imagine him as more mature...more manly...more rugged man

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

oh lazy dear!! i m tired of saying awesome , fantastic , amazing ... to ur stories!!😳

i m really lacking words to praise ur writings!!😳 when ever i get a pm / see ur stories u bring a bright smile on my face!!😃

coming to d story, the age thing would have offended me if it was ak & madhu lol!!😆 but no it was my sexy handsome evergreen rk!!😉 so no issues with their age difference & marriage!!😛

1st few paras of this story where a small girl in love with a captain reminded me of a tamil movie " eeyarkai " & in middle that mail convo slightly brought me d memories of ur other wonderful story " lost & clueless" but at d end this story proved to be a brand new one!!⭐️ i thoroughly enjoyed reading this story!!😛

some time i wonder how u get such a twisted piece of story in ur mind!!😕 seriously this story is one of such kind!!😊 omg!! after 9 long years her bottle message reached her captian!!😲 seriously they r really destined to be together forever & it was written on their destiny!!

i loved both d soldier & slave of rk!!😉

one word for this story " BRAVO"👏👏👏

love to read ur works so keep writing more dear!!😳

Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Oh Kuku dat was an awesome Os...
loved it..emotional. .yet BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. ..
I always love all ur writing. ..
its unique one of kind...

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wonderful os lazy dear, u rocked it as always.

You know what, even a critical topic would go fine, if its written by lazy, really dear, the way u explain e verything, from each one's pov is excellent

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Brilliant!

This story of yours was different. Are you practicing a different mode of writing??? Good for you.

This story was a little - a little - darker. I think it was the mood of the main characters as they were fighting their fears, their loss. Thoughts of suicide and depression. But there always seemed to be a light shining somewhere to give them hope.

Also the story was mysterious too. The pirates, what happened there, Madhu's life and how was it still connected to RK's life. You gave that information very slowly so to prolong the unknown for us.

So again, different but well written.

I did not care about the age difference at all. For me, it is still Madhu and RK and their love. The age difference was a hurdle for one charatcer to get through.

Loved it!

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

U r concept was really unique one. Advance Thax fr pm (i no u'll pm me ;)).

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Awesome👏. loved it❤️

It was different from ur other stories but very interesting n lovely😳⭐️⭐️

Edited by GOODLUCKANGEL - 11 years ago

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keya

@krazy4kash

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Hey

D os was heart touching...I dnt like d age diff thing Bt it was soo beautifully represented by u tht it made it all d more spectacular

Shows d true meaning of destined to be together

Luv
Kj

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Momi

@momi78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Fabulous OS! And age? What is that???

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