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Posted: 11 years ago
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a short imagination of mine 😛

... ... ...

leelavathy comes and ruins all the plans and madhu 'haarjaathi hai'... raja wins the challenge.

raja rani in their room... madhu is very angry and sad too. could not control her tears

raja comes near her and says ...'' rani, hum jeeth gaye. ab tum woh karna hai jo bhi hum bolthe hai'' 😳😉

madhu looks at him terrified
raja smiles at her and observes her expressions for a while ... and says ''tum apni mamachachcha ka ghar chalo. hum tume jaane dhethe hai''

madhu could not believe what she heard.

raja...''ha, sach. koyi kel nahi hai... chavo. sunny idhar hi hai''

...

at chawl, after few days...

one evening ...

madhu is standing in the corridor and looking at the sky, lost some where... no expression in her face, very blank...

sunny...''madhu''

madhu... no reply...

sunny...''madhu...madhu ''... ''madhu'' this time he almost raised his voice to the maximum.

madhu... comes back from her lost world and says '' kithni bar kaha, muje akela chod dho RAJA''

sunny...'' 😕😕😕 ... raja''
madhu... then only realized her word.

madhu...''woh... kalathi se ... uske naam boldiya''... felt embarrassed

sunny...''kitni bar kalthi se bologi madhu??!! jab tum yaha aayi ho tab se me tume dekraha hoon. kayi bar aisa hochuka hai. kayi bar raja ka naam le chuki ho. kisise teek se bath nahi karthi ho. hamesha kuch soch rahi ho... agar me poochunga toh bath badhalthi ho''...''kiya hua??!!''

madhu...''kuch nahi ... muje jaana hai''... tried to escape from him

sunny stops her and says '' aaj tum kahi nahi jaavogi.
muje tumse bath karni hai. tum usse piyaar karthi ho, hai na??!! ''

madhu... ''kisse??!!''... sunny '' 😆 tum achchese janthi ho me kiske bareme bath kartha hoon''

madhu gets irritated and tells ..''muje usse koyi lena dhena nahi hai. me kissi se piyaar nahi karthi hoon''

sunny...''ek kahavath hai...''sone waaloko neend se uta sakthe hai. soneka acting karne waaloko nahi ... tumhi socho, after comig here, have you ever talked with anybody freely??!! have you ever felt happy??!! just tell me one sec that you didn't remember raja ??!! why are you cheating yourself??!!''

madhu...'' stop it. me kisiko yaad nahi karthi hoon aur muje dida ki jindha hai. isiliye me...''

sunny smiles sarcastically... ''i know you better and don't try to lie to me.
ok... just tell what did he do to you??!! he tortured you, abused you??!! ya phir, insulted you ??!! why you want to run away from him??!!

you wanted raju to get cured. after he becomes all right, you don't want to live with him. why??!!
how much he loves you. he is born and brought up like this. it's not his fault.

have you ever tried to change him??! you just like that forgave my ma, sweety even that AK... then why not raja??!! 😲😕

madhu...'' ...''

sunny...''i could not understand you. what do you want??!!''

madhu...'' ...''

sunny lost his patience...''i know girls like you want a hubby who is rich, stylish, doing show off and speaking in English all the time... etc... raja is not like that. he is from village. he is not upto your expectation. that is why you...''

madhu became mad hearing this and yells at him ...'' shut up. raja kaoun hai, kaisa hai i know him better. he is 1000 times better than the guys you were talking about.
and coming to forgiveness... me sab ko maaf kiya kiyu ki un sab se mera koyi lena dena nahi hai. woh mereliye koyi nahi hai.
lekin me raja ko aisa nahi dhek sakthi thi. usska gussa, jungli, jaanwar harkathe ko me cheel (tolerate) nahi kar sakthi... kiyo ki woh MERA HAI, MERI ZINDHAGI HAI... woh mera pati hai... me usse bahut piyaar ... '' stops in the middle

sunny, smiling at her '' kiya kaha??!! tum usse ??!! '' '' me kaha tha na madhu joot tum apne aapko bolthi ho. tumara dil me sirf aur sirf raja hi hai. tum kisliye darthi ho, usse door jana jaathi ho, ye muje nahi patha. lekin tum dhono ek dhusre se bahut piyaar karthe hai. tumari ye akad ko chodo aur tumari dil ki bath maano''... saying this he leaves that place..


madhu still could not understand what she said to sunny. she is confused 'still i'm in love with him??!!''

she remembers the words of raja after she lost the challenge ...

raja...''rani ... sach kahoo toh...3o mins pehale tak hum tume jaane nahi dene waale hai.
par... when i cut my hand and got hurt, i saw the pain in your eyes. that time i decided to let you go.

pegle muje 100% yakeen hai. par ab 200% hai. ek din tum khuth mere paas aavogi. mera... nahi hamara piyaar ki thadap tume hamare paas le aayega. tab tak me tume dekne nahi aavoongaa, bath nahi karoongaa.

aur ek aur bath bathavoon'' he pulled her towards him and said ... ''ye dil hai na, bahut kameen cheez hotha hai. tum jithna door hamse bagogi uthna kareeb tumara dil mere paas aayegaa 😳😉... jaavo''


...

now... madhu in tears. she can't control herself anymore. just wants to see her 'JUNGLI hubby' now itself.

she just started running from there... 'thud...' suddenly she hit on something and about to fall
but a hand holds her tightly.

she could not believe her eyes... it's her loving hubby raja

she started crying and hugged him tighttly. raja too hugged her back with a smile on his face.

after a while, madhu 'tume toh kaha tha ki tum muje dhekne nahi aavooge??!! ab kiyu aaye ho??!''

raja...''kithni bar kaha me tumeri aanko me aasu nahi dhek saktha... woh bhi muje yaad karke ithna ro rahi ho. me kaise nahi aavoongaa ra...ni...'' 😳😳😳

madhu...'' muje tumse kuch kehna hai''

raja...''kiya??!!''

madhu...'' i love you ''

... ... ... ...

ps... bare with my hindi 😛. i just wanted to write all in hindi. but could not do so.

pps... don' write anything about spoiler, promo or article pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i loved your post 😛
thanks for sharing
but hindi part i didnt understand it 😕
keep making post kajal 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wah kajal wah kya post kash aisa hi kuch ho is week
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*whistle* whistle*whistle*🥳
superb imagination kaju👏
i hope sunny do d same in serial too😳
oh girl now a days ur imaginations is more interesting than our cv's ideas😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic.i just posted da same in another post dat
have a feeling dat even after winning da bet,he might let her go to chawl.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic imagination kajal👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nahiii pehle i want my kameena rk uske baad i.loce u bole ya i kill u bole i dnt mind but i want my heartless kameena bas
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zubeada

i loved your post 😛
thanks for sharing
but hindi part i didnt understand it 😕
keep making post kajal 😛




Thanks
Ya
I know you don't understand Hindi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenji22

wah kajal wah kya post kash aisa hi kuch ho is week



Thanks 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

*whistle* whistle*whistle*🥳

superb imagination kaju👏
i hope sunny do d same in serial too😳
oh girl now a days ur imaginations is more interesting than our cv's ideas😉



Thanks 😃 😃

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