Raja finally meets his SASURJI(new post)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Raja I have bad news for you.You're gonna pay hard for your mistakes.Madhu's father found out about you and he's on his way.You better leave while you still can!"


(Madhu thinking-"OMG!Daddy is really going to kill him!")

"Tauji,I know I made mistakes and I'm really sorry for them.But please don't ask me to leave Madhu.I love her too much!I hope you understand."

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"Madhu,I'm really sorry.I cannot tell you how sorry I am.I hope that you can forgive me.I will never EVER do that again!"


"Raja,I'm not worried about myself right now.I'm worried about you!My father will really kill you.You don't know him!"

"I know.But I can't leave you.I love you too much.I hope that one day you will understand me."

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(later that day)

"Sasurji..."


(RK thinking-"So,this is my damaad!")


"I see you hiding behind your guns.Afraid to face me?"

"I'm not afraid of anything or anyone!"

"If you're not afraid of anything then why hit weak women?"

(Raja feeling kinda bad)"I...It was a mistake.I didn't mean too.I love her too much.I appologised.I will never ever do something like that to her again.I would rather die!"

"You would ha?You would rather die?"


"I know why you are here.I know you're here to kill me.But I DID appologise to Madhu.Anyhow my men will not even let you come near me."

"You are wrong.I'm not here to kill you.I'm here to take Madhu home."

(Raja getting angry)"Sasurji!...


I was patient enough to here you out only because of Madhu.But I'm warning you!No one,not even YOU can take away my wife away from me!"

"Why?Why can't you let your wife be free?...You say you love her and then you hit her!"

(Raja confused)"I...I said that that was a mistake.I will never repeat that!"

"How...How can I trust you?How can I know what you say it's true?..."

"Because when I saw her crying something broke in my heart."

(RK's face softening)


"When I heard her weeping I thought that someone thorn a part of my heart.It was the hardest thing that I felt ever since my parents died.That's how I know.

(RK more calm and with softer voice)"Ok...I believe you.I want to tell you something.All this reminded me of something.I hope you're gonna be kind enough to hear me!"

(Raja ordering his men to leave and listening carefully)

"I want to tell you a story.A story about me and Madhu's mother.Her name was also Madhubala.I hurt her many times.I destroyed her life.I didn't realize it that with that I destroyed myself.I came to my senses when I almost lost her.I almost did.She never did anything but love me but I never tried to understand her.You and your mistakes remind me of me.That's why I'm telling you this.Don't repeat my mistakes.Otherwise you will lose her."

"Ok...Sasurji...I promise...I will never ever hit Madhu again!...You're not a bad man.I know that you only care for her.I think we'll get along fine"(hug)

"You know something though?"

"What?"

"You kinda remind me of my wife too."

"Yeah?...How so?..."

"She fell for this too!"...


(BANG!!!!!!)

"And all awards for best SASURJI go to Superstar RK!"


"I knew it!"


(THE END)

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Edited ending for those who cannot see Raja die!😉

"You know something though?"

"What?"

"You kinda remind me of my wife too."

"Yeah?...How so?..."

"She fell for this too!"...


(points his gun at Raja,who is shocked!...BANG!!!)

(Raja unwillingly closing his eyes,then slowly opening them and looking fearfully at RK)

"This...was a blank!


This...(loading the gun and pointing it again at Raja)...is the real thing!"

"But Sasurji,I thought that..."


(RK interrupting him)

"Now listen to me very carefully!!...


(Raja all quiet)When I first heard that you strangled my daughter,


I thought of coming here and strangling you myself!When I heard that you slapped her,


I thought of coming here and breaking your every bone!

(Raja looking with both attention and confusion)


"But I learned life lessons the hard way,so I'm gonna teach you the easy way.I'm not gonna kill you.But don't think for one second that I won't if you do something like this again.The only reason you're still alive now is because of my wife.She begged me not to harm you and to try to reason with you.So you have to thank the woman who's daughter you strangled and slapped that you are alive today.But if gun and slap language is all that you can understand,don't worry,I can speak it too!Don't think for one moment that I will spare you!...Now...call Madhu!"

(Raja looking at RK with disapproval and rising anger)

"But Sasurji..."


"I said call her!Don't test my patience!"


"Madhu!Madhu!!"


(Madhu comes down from the stairs)

"Madhu go to the car.We'll talk later.(to Raja)And if anyone tries to stop her,I will forget the promise I gave to my wife!!"

(Madhu looks at Raja and then goes and RK sees that she's in the car)


"Sasurji,you don't understand...I can't lose her.


I can't!I lost everyone that I ever cared about.And I can't lose her too...I love her.Don't you understand?I really do!And I know she has feelings for me too.I know that she loves me too!"

"I'm not interested in your feelings or words.


I'm only interested in you deeds!I told you,I learned my life lessons the hard way.I hurt my wife too much before I realized it,so don't think that I will give you another chance of hurting my daughter again.You think that only because you love her that you are worthy of her?What have you ever done for her?


And don't try to tell me now that playing a hero against your own family counts,because it doesn't count in MY book.Have you ever given her anything but tears?(Raja thinking)Have you?So,don't tell me that you love her,that doesn't mean anything to me!Now...come here...(they both go out)Order your men to move away and to lower their guns.(Raja does)We are leaving.For your sake you better not follow us.I'm telling you again,I'm giving you a time to think.You have two options concerning my daughter:1.learn to respect her or 2.learn to respect her.Anything less than that and you can freely forget you ever knew her!"

(RK goes to the car.Raja sad...Rajbala eyelook...Madhu turning her head with look filled with both disgust and regret.



Car starts and RK and Madhu Jr. leave...Raja looking at Madhu as the car goes...TO BE CONTINUED!)



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bokul thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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rk killed raja ?
well that was awesome
but i did not want rk to kill raja
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally, Rk killed him after all long chat 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

rk killed raja ?

well that was awesome
but i did not want rk to kill raja


Don't worry I will change it,I just wanted to show how RK will win against Raja who has so many men and guns.With dhoka,hahaha!But I will change it 'cause RK's story about Madhu has sense and sound nice.I hope Raja won't repeat his mistake!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NeelM

Finally, Rk killed him after all long chat 🤣 🤣


Haha,yeah,he loves to chat doesn't he,hahaha!New plan-confuse the enemy by being nice and understanding!(just kidding)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ilovebandini


Haha,yeah,he loves to chat doesn't he,hahaha!New plan-confuse the enemy by being nice and understanding!(just kidding)


I loved the line "she fell for this too" 😆 🤣
Edited by NeelM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh My Poor Raja Superstar RK aka sasurji didnt left him 🤣

Edited by Chitrarocking - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayyeee
My RK


RK please come and save your daughter and your fans ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ilovebandini


Don't worry I will change it,I just wanted to show how RK will win against Raja who has so many men and guns.With dhoka,hahaha!But I will change it 'cause RK's story about Madhu has sense and sound nice.I hope Raja won't repeat his mistake!

raja will not repeat his mistake
i know that very well
please make it a blank fire
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely os plz write more.loved how u used rk beared wali pics to differentiate their faces.well done.do write more on sr n jr mb also.lol

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