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mydrashti

@mydrashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

god bless u my buddy my sweetheart biwii 🤗 u said write uhardwork n write an chapter for us to entertain us make us happy n for me its realy important to atleast write a line so one could feel their mehnat got safal ... i gave almost an speech on it 😆 well i got little bit emo hope u r fine biwii ...n what to say on update its just out of this world .. romance passion drama everything we want n Rishbala ahem ...☺️ their tharkey fans favrt part 😳🤣 Rk u r in lovee dude accept it n Madhu u too beta;) lovedd it my ro... cm bck shoon plzz

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SreeRK

@SreeRK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Superb..The RK-Madhu love each other like crazy..loved the update

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

where do I start??

I am liking the changes in RK. He is thinking more about Madhu and trying to not give her the wrong idea about why he is back. I also like how comfortable he feels though the life style is completely foreign for him. It shows how important this relationship is to him; how important Madhu is to him.

I also liked how you brought their age difference into this chapter. Madhu does not care about it but there are subtle differences in their views which I liked.

OH, I love the title of the chapter, Possessiveness. It was perfect for this chapter. From both sides, Madhu and RK's.

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Awesomee update...

Uff madhus pregnancy. Hormones making her more possessive...
Seeing rishab with girl she was totaly red in anger..

Continue soon

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Was waiting for the update n it was worth all the wait.

it was one of the best chapters of this story.

loved the way you wrote about their possessiveness n finally the realization. Please continue soon.

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

I am just speechless😆 it was a brilliant update. This time pls update a bit soon😃

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Mrs.Somerhalder

@Mrs.Somerhalder

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Its Awesome.. Fantastic.. Min Blowing..
I actually don't have words to describe it!!!

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rekha

@rekha.366

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

omg long update ronnie😲 waise i loved the update

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Aaradhya Malhotra

@Aaru4DVD

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

unresd in pg 6..

abhi bhi i'm sad..

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Tinku2015

@Tinku2015

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

👏yahooo⭐️...at lasttt the most awaited update... thank uuu..love uuu.. yet to read the same but was very happy seeing the update...wanted earlier to request for a long update to makeup for the looonggg wait... but did'nt .😊... yes it is a very very tough job to write a story👏... so just did'nt dare to ask... THANKS FOR THE EFFORT...AND 😃 can we request for faster updates...😉please