Rishbala SS: Second Chance at Love(complete) Part 5a,5b pg 23 (14/05) - Page 8

Lovely update dear, i liked the chirpy fun loving girl madhu and how innocently she made the stone hearted RK to fall in love with her. Loved RK's monologue, so from next update there will be a markable change within RK and waiting for it.

it's just super super awesome RK attracted towards madhu and feel some thing for her which he can not feel for dips.hope he will realize soon that he luvs madhu.

Originally posted by: madhurish

wow! wow! wow! best of best updates!! i loved it!! muahh!!😳👏

very well written update!!👏👏 i could see every thing in front of my eyes! 😳😳

rishbala in an isolated island wow!! very dreamy sequencei loved d fishing scene a lot😛😳oh god! this madhu is really cute & very possessive😳😳

when she gets drunk & this line "mein gir gi toh" reminded me of rishbala's drunken nite😳

rk wake up man that bitch dips will ditch u soon😡 uss dipali ki chakkar mei dont lose ur precious madhu😳 u deserve d best one & dt one is ur cute innocent biwi😳

waiting 4 next update patiently😳😃

by d way i m 1st to comment on this wonderful update🥳

congos on being first to comment 🥳

Thanxx😊 I'm really glad you enjoyed reading this part...this comment really made my day😳🤗
I loveddd Rishbala drunken escapade..I really found RM really cute in those epis but I always wanted to see drunk madhu n a sober RK..since this couldn't happen in MEIEJ so I tried to fulfill my desire here..I hope you liked it
dun worry RK will very soon realize what he had been missing out on!!!😉
next update coming soon

Originally posted by: LOVE.RM

hey its a very beautiful story .a very fresh concept.sry 1 comment 4 all 3 updates bcoz busy in studies.u r an awesome writer.n i always read ur comments in edt thread nd ya m also an obsessive rk fan like u.keep writing more.*sry like button nt wrking ll definitely hit later*

Thanxx a tonn da for giving this story a chance😊...I'm really glad that you like my writing it means a lottt😳😳
yeah I'm very much obsessed with RK since I can't get him anymore in the show so I'm trying to keep him alive in my stories!!!

Originally posted by: noiseygirl

nyc update buddy

Originally posted by: drashtimeetu

Awsome update
loved it

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Superb

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

Nice update

Originally posted by: pari_goyal

Nice update...

Originally posted by: Aastha02

lovely update 👏

thanxx guys😊

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

awesome update
finally rk baby is coming out in rishabh form
loving it

thanxx Neha😊

Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 part,,

cont,soon

thanks for pm dear..

thanxx da😊

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Freaking Awesome update!Thanks for pm!So Bittuji made all the arragements perfect for honeymooners!Radhaji told Madhubala only half of the truth!& so RK felf more guilty!Loved RK getting attracted towards Madhubala! Loved RK teaching Madhubala fishing techniques!Loved RK telling Madhubala that They'll eat the fish caught by Her!Loved jealous Madhubala & RK seeing Her angry & laughing on Her!RK thoughts were occupied only on Madhubala that He didn't even remember Deepali!Deepali called RK & gave Him the news of Her signing a 3 yr modelling contract!But wasn't jealous by Him being with Madhubala & not calling Her once!While Madhubala was hell angry & jealous coz of the fan girls!& RK noticed this difference!But drank wine coz She was tensed about RK's changing mood upon recieving a call!Loved RK handling a drunk Madhubala!Madhubala was so jealous that She wanted to kiss RK in frnt of the fan girl!Loved RK kissing Madhubala on Her forehead!Madhubala confessed to RK that She Loves Him!& It surely changed something in Him!Waiting for next!Pls continue soon!

thanxx a tonn da for liking this update sooo much...😊🤗
I'm really glad that you enjoyed reading it..see I'm really new to writing so I sometimes get nervous but its your comments that encourages me to write!!!!😊

Originally posted by: cool_sri

Awesome update..loved it..

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

lovely updates... continue soon n d pm me plz...

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply superb
loved it-

Originally posted by: ankitashaw1996

vrrry nice dear continu sooon

thanxx guys😊

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awww...I just loved both RK & madhu in this particular update...but loved madhu more...she is so cute & innocent...& RK , well something is definitely changing ...will loved to read how madhu brings out Rishabh from RK...😃

thanxx😊 I'm glad you like my Rm..dun worry you will love RK as well in next updates!!!
next update coming soon!!!