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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JsparrowJ


your waiting will end in next part chutki
thanxx

I'm glad to know that 😊 Ur Welcome 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

Nice update..

Thanks 4 pm

welcome
thanxx for reading
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

superb awesome update


ahh glad u like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanxx rekha di
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

ek hi update mein poori bhadas nikal diya madhu ne apne parents ke upar...now its the time for hero...jaldi zaraa heropanti dikhade na akku...

tera dhiyaan kidhar hai kee tera hero idhar hai

hehe
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

so madhu left her house for a new place

waiting for rk

ya she left for rewa and hope you like his entry
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Posted: 11 years ago
a note for my didu
dear kavya di

my any story will always be incompleted till it get valubale comment of my "k" factors

kanchi is busy these days and god made u busy these days

so your incomplete barbie doll waiting for you come back soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3

Anyway dikhau chae nahi dar mujhe bahut lag raha tha I have tears in my eyes and poore dark e sath maine sunny ko hug kiya and waves him bye bus started and I was going away from him bye sunny bye...

Okay toh bus chal di I first time travelled in bus its tiresome experience but its enjoyable.. kuch yaha lar rahe hai kuch so eahe hai kuch ga rahe hai kuch nautanki maar rahe hai etc etc few offered me some food but then a FLASHBACK of sunny's teaching so I nodden no to PASTREE chah chalo koi nahi khai ham kai jagah ruke jaha maine khana khaya and wagerah wagerah chalo raste mein I m getting bored toh aapko batati hu admission story okay so mai rewa ki University (aps university) se graduation karugi mass communication mein mera admission ho gaya hai as it was online paise kee kami mere paas kabi hoti nahi isliye mai jaha chahu waha ruk sakti hu but mai ek hostel mein rahugi kyat oh naam tha haan nidhi hostel wahi university kee paas hai nearby 1/2 km ye arragngement sunny ne kiya hai ye kya BUS STOPS

"aaplogo ko kuch khana pina ho toh is dhabe mein kha sakte hai yaha se aage ka rasta khatarnak hai ye dakuo ka ilaaka b hai sath hee ghumawdar pahari hai isse chuhiya ghati kehte hai darne kee koi baat nahi ham taha se rojana jaate hai toh aap log refresh ho jaaiye ham yaha 1/2 ghante rukenge" conductor said ajjeb hai sala dara kar bolta hai darne kee baat nahi hai chalo bhook toh lagi hee hai chalo kha hee lete hai waise khain koi khatarnak daku aa gaya aur mujhe kidnap kar liya toh it would be thrilling hehe mai b na kya kya sochti hu chalo khate hai..

Hun again kyalon kee khichri begin agar meri bus choot gayi aur mai yahi reh gayi toh mai dhabe mein kaam karne lagoogi aur phir Mr. president and Mrs owner kee izzat ka kabara is tay khair meri bus nahi chootegi kyuki conductor shouting

Toh mai toh chali bus mein isiliye dhaabe par kaam cancel bus chal di kitni ghumawdar hai ye lagta hai ab gaye huh accha hai driver ka ye roz ka kaam hai mai kabi akeli aati toh pakka AHHH!!!!!!!

WHAT THE HELL YE KYA HO RAHA HAI SHIT WE ARE FALLING SHIT I hestitatingly taken my bag and I m feeling less now

"ham girit lag he bachaba kou" shouted a passenger

I m falling now aaa...aaa...aaa...

Omg omg I found tree or shrub save me ah my bag its difficu... Aaa... its broken aaa

Hold my hand!!! Someone hold my hand thank god

his face is covered only I can see his ANGELIC BLUE EYES

ITS PEACE I M LOOSING MYSELF its peacefull to sleep everything is fading this blue eyes I m...



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Edited by JsparrowJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yiiipppeee me 1st to cmmnt!!! 🥳 🥳
update was really guuud...
''conductor said ajjeb hai sala dara kar bolta hai darne kee baat nahi hai'' dis cracked me.. 😆 madhu is soo talkative nd her weird imagination of working on dhaba lolss was funny!!! 😆
Lastly bus ka accident bt thank god her saviour nd our hero made entry on time to save madhu...
wow!!! RK having blue eyes [missing ABHAY nd his blue eyes]... 😳
update nxt chappy soon miss.sparrow!!!!
Edited by My_VivJaan - 11 years ago

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