Rishbala ss (completed) - Our story ardent yet painful

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Hey everyone,

Am back with the next piece of writing, i thought of posting it as an os, but it was quiet lengthy, so made it into ss, and i have posted the whole story.

I would love to dedicate this part to Sharoan, as it was requested by him/her long back to write a memory loss track on rishbala, and finally i have written it, and to Shriyakadge

Siggie credit - shriyakadge,

Part 1

"Not again" Madhu murmured and hid the paper before maya enters the room. And she warmly welcomed her child who came back from school, and her daughter maya hugged her and said "Mama, today i did painting, and u know what was my first painting about?" Madhu smiled at her knowing what it would have been, but she replied, "Oh, baby u know mama is bad at guessing, you itself tel me na?" and she showed a small frame which had the picture of a small girl holding her dad and mom's hand. This is what maya longing for the past few years, she and radha managed to make her believe that her papa was in abroad, and use to tel her that he called when she went to school, and he promised to come for her next birthday, but it has been 2 years,and she was growing and it was hard for them to answer her questions, the poor soul want to meet her papa and want to hang out with him, play with him, like all her friend does.

After Maya completed her homeworks and went to her room to sleep, madhu took the paper which she hid sometime back,and her eyes welled up seeing her rishab holding another girl by waist, she crushed the paper and held it close to her heart and let her tears out. Moments later, she felt her tears wiped by a soft hand,a nd she was shocked to see little may standing there, she quickly composed herself and said "Maya, what happen" Maya with little tears in her eyes asked her back "Today also you are crying because of ur headache a mama? Why can't u tel dadi about this and go to doctor, are you also scared of injection mama? Don't worry i will tel doctor uncle to give you painless injection" Madhu hugged her little princess,who was the only reason for her existence now.

Next day morning,when madhu was helping maya to get ready for her school, they heard a knock on the door and maya flew open the door next moment and hugged her dadi, and radha took maya in her hand, and came to the living hall and listened to her non-stop animated stories,and then when madhu reminded may about her school, she was so adamant that she want to spend time with her dadi,and hence she wil boycott her school today, after so much convincing, radha made maya agree to go to school, but on the condition that, radha will drop her in school in her car, Madhu unwillingly gave up with this, and went inside. She never accepted to use any of the property of kundras once they were thrown out of the house.

She lived in one bedroom apartment far away from kundra mansion, as she doesn't want to meet them often and get hurt then. It was Radha, who used to come and meet them once or twice in a month wihout her son's knowledge. She resumed her work, which she had bee in before her marriage, luckily, her boss, was kind enough to give her back the job realising her situation, and which helped them for living. Though Radha offered to help them financially, madhu was so strong that she didn't accept for it.

After her day's work, madhu closed her eyes for a moment and again all her dark past came in front of her eyes, life which was disgusting to her now, was so peaceful at the beginning, The Rishab Kundra had fallen in love with her at the very first sight,and then finally he managed to marry her, she was not a big fan for him, but knew he was a very good actor, but always known for his arrogance, and soon she started to melt down knowing the real him, he was so kind, so lovable, life was a bliss, and to add their happiness, madhu was pregnant, and RK was really on cloud nine, he took break from his acting and he was always with her at her service, madhu felt blessed to have such a wonderful life and a husbad like him, she was always very proud of him, and the love between them could not be explained in words, they both cared for each other, and loved each other truly,and then Madhu gave birth to little maya, it was RK who held her first in his arms, that was his wish, to have his daughter in his hands first, and he pampered her a lot, and their house was filled with toys and craddles. Maya always use to clung to her father,whenever he is at home, and he will not let her down, will always hold her in his arms,and will talk to her and she will reply back with a giggle. Radha felt that all her prayers were answered with the entry of madhua nd maya in their life, her son who seemed to be more arrogant to the outside world, had become the real himself with lots of love and affection.

But what happened after that was the reason for all their situation now, madhu came back to ehr senses hearing her phone ringing, she found it to be the call from her boss,and she answered it politely and made necessary arrangements for the party organised by her boss on the following day. However she tried to avoid all the public gatherings, as she feared of meeting him particularly, but that was one reason, second reason was media, from which she hid herself, she has no answers to their questions.But her boss compelled her to be there in person for the party. She was very well prepared for taking all the insult that is thrown on her face, as she knows very well who is the chief guest of the party, The Rishab Kundra, pronouncing his name cause some unknown fear ran down her body. She has managed herself to stay within the room, to avoid unnecessary gaze on her.

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Part 2

She was deep in her thoughts of what happened at the past, they were getting ready for the release of his new film, after so much of convincing RK was sent first, as maya was stil in her sleepy mode, so Radha and Madhu decided to stay some more time and then join later with him when maya get back from her sleep. And then the disaster happened, there was a bomb blast, the bomb was set in the car in which RK was travelling, and luckily the bomb blasted, when he just stepped out of the car, and he was thrown away with the blast, and he was taken to the hospital immediately, where he was treated for nearly a month, after which he regained consciousness, but unluckily, he remembered everything before madhu entered his life, he forgot what has happened after that. And even after continuous pleading from Radha, he didn't want to see madhu or talk to her. He was back to his rude

form.

The party was goin on full swing, she insturcted everything from being in her room, but then she heard his voice, and with anxiety she slightly poked her head out of the door, and saw the dreadful sight of her rishab wildly kissing a girl and chewing her lips, she shut herself again in the room,and quickly left the place in the name of sickness. After she was parted from her Rishab, she has seen many such articles about him, and heard many rumors about him, but had not witnessed anything,sos he was sure that he would do any such cheap things, but today after witnessing what he had done with another girl, she felt disgusting being loved by him and kissed by him in the

same way. She meant that kiss,and that passion was only for her, but seeing him doing it in the same way for another girl, killed her heart.

She shut herself inside her room,and maya was sent to school in her school bus, and madhu took off from her work for few days, and after few days, may missed her school bus in ht evening, and she being a smart child decided to go back home alone seeing the busy streets. And on her way, she found a car approaching her crossing the speed limit, and then she found the car to be her dadi's, she wondered why dadi was driving too fast, and then when the car was about to hit her, it stopped,and the person driving the car, came down near her, and found her crying by closing her face within her palms, it strike him, that someone close to him, used to cry like that.

He felt his head spinning a little and he held his head for a moment,and then the girl's cry brought him back to senses, he just took her hands from his eyes forcefully, and maya got scared and stepped backwards.He felt that he has seen this fear, this eyes, he felt that he know this little girl, but he has no clues.He kneeled down to her height, and he brought her close to him, wiped her tears, as her tears cause pain to his heart, he offered her a drive with him, and bought her toys, chocolates,and gave autograph to her,and dropped her home, and he left.

Madhu was tensed and she was roaming here and there, since maya was not back, she had to reach half an hour before everyday, she was calling her school, and was about to cry, when maya came in with loads of toys and chocolates,and seeing madhu crying,s he dropped everything,and went and hugged her, since maya doesn't know the name of the person, she didn't mention it to madhu, just informed her that,one uncle dropped her and gifted her with toys and chocolates and madhu didn't mind to ask about it, since she was happy that her daughter is back.

And at night, RK remembered the time he spent with the small girl, he forgot to ask her name, he felt very happy and lively being with her, he seems to knew her before, but when he started to think about it, again he got his head ache, and he went to drink further.Days passed by. Later one day, when RK was in a mall with a girl, he was surrounded by his fans, he felt suffocated and want to get out of that place, when he felt someone pulling his hand, he lowered his head to find the same girl standing there.He picked her up in his arms and asked "Hey princess, how come you are here,came with ur mama or papa?" She replied that she came with her friend and her mom, since her mama was not feeling well. He asked "So what u can come here with ur papa na?" the smile on her face was wiped away and she told "My papa don't have time to spend with me. He never loves me." and with that she came down on her feet and ran away.

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Uma

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Part 3

He wondered how could any father ignore a child like this girl, he went out to his car, and drove back to his home, he forgot to pick up the girl who came with him.He entered his home to find radha talking in phone, he just climbed the stairs, while a name got his attention "Madhu" . He rested on his bed remembering how he avoided that one girl called madhu, as he didn't remember one such girl.But something within him tels that there was something he felt on hearing that name, he discarded that thought and went to sleep.

Later a day, RK came out of the studio, since he had an verbal fight with the director, when he asked him not to come to studio when he was fully drunk, so he left the studio in his anger, and he crossed the school where maya was studying, and seeing small children wearing the same uniform, he came out of the car and searched for her, but didn't find her, so he came on the next day and waited for her, and luckily he got her, once she saw her, she came running towards him and waved him "Hi" with a bright smile, he felt so better seeing her, his mood became normal, hewondered how this small girl can have a control over his temper.

Then it became a practice for him to come and meet her regularly, and to drop her home, and clever maya use to get down on the street before her house, as she knows very well, that her mom would never allow her to wander around with strangers, and also she has seen her mom crying with the photo of the pesron with whom she is with? So she hid this whole thing from her mama. And then Madhu started going to her work, as she doesn't want to cry over the spilled milk.

RK and Maya started to like each other's company and felt they were bonded to each other, and he slowly stopped with his excessive drinking, atleast when he is with little maya, and he use to company her all the time when she is on the way to her school and to her home back, and finally one day, on maya's compulsion RK went to maya's home, and since madhu was not there at home, they had their own time, he did chocolate milk shake for her and they both had icecream from near by shop, and played and slept well.And continued for the whole month since madhu had loads of work in office, since she took off for few weeks.

Luckily one day Radha dropped in to see her grandchild, and that is when she heard a known voice along with Maya, and she silently entered the bedroom and found her son playing with his daughter, she had happy tears, she was at the verge of getting all the happiness, that is when it struck her, that her son is playing with his own daughter without knowing it, and she pledged herself that she will re-unite her little family of her son at any cost.

So she decided to speak to madhu first, and as expected, after long arguments, madhu was firm with her decision, that she doesn't want RK back in her life,after hearing such disgusting words from him, she never wanted to return into the life which might have more happiness. Then Radha placed the questions which were unanswerable by Madhu, she insisted Madhu that she may not need a partner in her life, but what about Maya, can she have a happy life without a father,which she was longing for ,and the next question shooked madhu completely,and she started to think a lot about it and finally agreed that Rishab will do not speak a word against her and will not let anyone speak against her, but its RK who spoke those disgusting words, who was not in his own senses, and has forgot whom madhu was in his life, never a moment, her Rishab would hurt her,a it would hurt him thousand times more. And she readily agrees for radha's plan.

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Part 4

It seems to be more than a week,and RK had become like a dead person, without seeing Maya, it was a week's time now, he waited for hours near her school, and to the park, where he used to take her all the day,and to all the places, and even he checked at Maya's house, but it was locked for this whole week. And RK was back to his partner - alcohol. And he left the whole day for his partner,a nd went home fully drunk. He pressed the calling bell and waited so long. He repeatedly pressed the bell and finally opened, and he was shocked.

Shocked was a simple word, he felt more than happy seeing his little princess Maya standing at the door, but he could see her stepping back and slowly started to run, he called out her name, but she didn't stop and he ran behind her and that is when he realized that he had scared the little soul with his form, and he went to his room and took a hot shower and waited for morning to get back to his princess,and ask for forgiveness, he practiced what he should speak, and he decided to promise her that he would not touch this drink, and he closed his eyes,and there he could see himself promisinga girl that he would never touch this drink in his life, and he advanced towards the girl for a kiss,and the girl began to run and he chasing her, and then his head started to spin heavily and he opened the eyes suddenly and he tried hard to remember what it was, but he couldn't remember the girl's face, as it was completely blurred.

And the next two days were the most happiest days for RK, as he has convinced his princess and promised her that never in her life he would do such things disgusting her and she readily gave in for him like her mother, and they both spent valuable time with each other, he took her out for shopping,and bought her all her fav candies, toys and dresses and she was very much happy. Then finally on the third day,when maya was having her after noon nap, RK went to his mom to ask about Maya at their mansion,and Radha was more than happy that her plan started to work, as her son, who doesn't even care to mind about her presence, had now come to talk with her.

And she filled him up with some stories that her distant relative was held up with some imp work, and had requested radha to take care of her daughter for one week till she returns, and RK believed it. And the whole week went very well with RK, Maya and Radha, and finally when Radha told that maya was starting back to her home next day, as her mama was coming back, There were complete traces of happiness and sadness all over there, Maya at extreme end of happiness, as she was going to meet her mama back,and RK was sad that his princess leaving him, he pleaded Radha to request maya's mom to let maya stay with them for some more days, but radha replied that she will not be able to do that, as maya's mom will not be able to accpet this as maya was the only reason for her to live, but Rk was in no mood to give up, so finally radha let out her final move and asked RK to speak with Maya's mother. And he, who was ready to do anything to get Maya back in her life, he

doesn't understand why, but he felt there was a pull between him and Maya, and he was not in mood to give her up.

He got ready to speak to Maya's mom, he was ready for any high bidding to get maya back, money doesn't matter for him, all that matters was Maya for him, and with that thought, he confirmed the address and entered the one-bedroom apartment, and there she stood in a simple plain saree with border colored blouse, with no accessories, but with a sindoor on her forehead, she had simply plaited her hair in a neat manner, at a simple look, one could understand that there was no trace of happiness in her life. And his eyes slipped to her eyes, and they had a brief eyelock, he understood that there was something connected between him and her, he totally forgot talking about Maya, which was the main reason for his presence there, he thought for so long to get where he had seen

this eyes, those eyes filled with love, care and concern, he was happy for seeing it, but he didn't realise why he felt happy for that, he closed his eyes in frustration, and again he could see him standing near a girl with his famous smirk, and the girl stood really tensed, and then the girl raised her eyes and nodded and he was the more excited and in his happiness he hugged her and scooped her in his arms and went inside his room and all the while walking to his room, he was thoroughly kissing her, and then he vigorously shaked his head to break the chain of thoughts, and

he realized that never in life he have taken any girl to his bed, nothing more than a kiss, that too when he was totally frustrated when his mom talked about a girl named MADHU who was his wife, according to her, and he never trusted with her words.

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Part 5

But never ever he remembered marrying a girl in his life, and he came back to his senses, and saw the lady staring at him, he keenly watched her features, her eyes, which speak volumes, her buttin nose, her pulpy lips, he felt like tasting it, and he suddenly moved near her looking into her eyes and something within him drew him more and next moment he placed his lips on hers, and he felt the taste was more familiar to him, but he was so sure that he was seeing this lady for the first time, he left her immediately and moved out for fresh air and he was in deep thinking, stirring his mind to bring out this mystery which disturbs him a lot. He felt the usual head ache, but this time, he was not going to give up to this head ache, he closed his eyes and tried recalling something, but nothing in particular, he thought and thought, and again those blurred image showed up, where he was walking

before a girl, and both of them dressed up in bridal attire, and he didn't stopped this time,and he could see himself placing sindoor in her head and placing mangalsutra in her neck and then he smiled at her and she replied the smile,and there was so much love in her eyes. Those eyes. He opened his eyes abruptly and remembered the eyes.

He ran to his mom asking about his past, but she showing some attitude said that "Whats the use in telling it again and again Rishu, you will not trust me, if is say, you got married and you were so much love in with her" and he cut her off by saying "Mom, can i have a look at her, i mean any photo of hers" Radha looked at him intently and asked "Why are u asking about all these suddenly after 2 years Rishu?" He just bend his head down and said "From very long ago, i have blurred images of a girl with me all the time, and when i saw Maya, i felt as if she is my own, and when i went to make her my own by paying off to her mom, i felt the same with her mom, i felt, she was also mine" and looked at her helplessly.

Radha smiled inwardly and said "Rishu?" and he continued " By any chance, is maya's mother the girl you said, i meant, is maya's mother name is Madhu" and radha hurried back with his marriage album and filled him with all that happened. After she finished her story, he flew back immediately to the place where he felt peace and the door swung open and next moment he hugged the lady who opened the door and he murmured "sorry Madhu".

Madhu was beyond happiness to get her Rishab back , and she parted from him and looked at his face, which was tear-stained yet confused, and she slowly made him sit and she sat next to him and asked "do u remember me?" with a hint of doubt and he nodded his head to NO and she burst out in tears and she went back to the next room and there cried her heart out, and after few seconds, she felt a pat on her shoulder and turned back to see him standing there staring at her with a painful eyes filled with tears. And he said "Pls madhu, don't cry, stop it, you had cried enough" He accepted the fact that he doesn't remember her but he had the trust that whatever his mom tried to tel him was all the fact that happened in his life, and thepull he felt towards Madhu and Maya was a evidence for it, his memory could play pranks with him but not his heart.And he was a fool who took this much long to realize all these.

And madhu readily gave in and kissed him in the forehead, since she could see the pain he felt seeing her in pain, which she had earlier witnessed with her rishab, though he had forgotten the happenings of the past two years but that they will not let it affect their love anymore, as she needed him to be by her side, and that too as Rishab and not as RK. And she felt warm being in his arms again.And he felt peaceful with the kiss on his forehead and the blurred images now seem to vanish off from his thoughts and he felt peaceful with her. And then life was more blissful than ever for this lovely couple.

Siggie credits goes to shriyakadge, pls do appreciate her to do further.,sorry if you have felt that the story was left incomplete, if i decide to continue, then u ppl know how long i might take, so i decided to end it here with a happy note, hope u all will accept this ending. Now time for likes and comments.

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An amazing Story sis!!! I am speechless!!! Really, I felt as if it was happening in front of my eyes...

Let me first applaud Shriya for her Awesome work... Kudos to you Shriya... What an amazing Siggie... It truly depicted the story... So apt for the plot!!! Claps!!!

Coming to the story, Part 1 was filled with Madhu's pain to see her angel always wishing to be with her family... Especially with her Papa!!! That little soul could only satisfy herself with her drawings... You emoted so well...

Part 2 presented the old RK who hated everyone and whom everyone hated... And to be honest, I was confused to why Madhu hated him when she knew he lost his memory... The hurt to see him flirting with some random girl was clearly imaginable...

Part 3 finally developed a bond between him and his daughter... I so loved this part!!! Radha was a sweetheart all this while since the first update... She didn't forget her duties as a Grand mother and a mother in law!!!

Part 4 made Radha a cupid to get back her family once again together!! RK Maya bond grew so strong. I so loved it!! The difference of RK and Rishabh was so evidently written throughout!!!

Part 5 was an awesome one!!! His stubbornness to get his loved one to be with him was clearly visible!! He was all set to get Maya from her mother by hook or crook... And finally the moment came when they met... It was so touching moment when RK denied to remember anything. It would have definitely broke Madhu's heart but she could easily feel his love and pain for her...

Overall, I truly loved the way you didn't bring back his memory as expected... So, now they will make new memories with their Maya... And finally she got her Papa and Mama back... A complete Family for her... WOW!!!

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shasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

fantastic update dear
thanks for pm

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Shriya kadge

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Posted: 11 years ago

res/unres

u dedicated it to me ...thank u ...🤗

d ss was awesome ...i loved every inch of it ...

i just kept reading n reading n then it came 2 an end ...it was damn interesting ...

i loved maya in d first part wen she asked madhu tht was she afraid of injections ...it was cute ...😳

loved it !!!!

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rekha

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Posted: 11 years ago

wonderful story uma👏👏👏👏👏 it yaar ,poor madhu with out her rishab she single handly raised maya 😭😭😭 and rk jerk why did not he listen his mother and radhaji she is nice 😃😃and maya is so cute and lastly rishab come back to madhu. loved it😃

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