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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rdave1

I'm trying to wrap my head around what I want to say but since I can't formulate anything, I shall ramble. First of all, as much as I'm not pleased with not knowing which prince is RK; the anonymity works better for the story. At the moment the fifth prince comes off a bit nicer though we know he will always take his brother's side. The fourth is rude, harsh and manipulative and few other things which is why he comes off as the bad guy. BUT we also know Saya is his slave yet he doesn't completely treat her as his slave, he doesn't physically take advantage of her, why? Yes, all of the other type of abuse is there but why not the final step, complete domination. I don't know, at one point I felt the two brothers treat her as part of their group of friend but like the friend everyone always teases, pranks but in the same sense I suppose Saya is their toy to play with then throw away when bored.

Okay! I know none of that made any sense but that's my comment. LOL

thank you. so we can agree that it is best you not know who RK is. keke. keep guessing.
like I said with Sangeeta, there may be political motivations here that we don't know about.

also, they are teenagers and teenagers do stupid shit that they later regret. maybe the kids will turn out be better adult versions of themselves? atleast I am counting on that.

the fifth prince's loyalties clearly lie with the fourth brother and why not? if need be, fourth can possibly save him but madhu is just a hostage in their cruel palace. so he is also looking out for himself.

they are all pitiful at some level, some more than others. but ultimately, someone else holds power over them. for saya it is fourth prince, and for the princes it is the king.
Sidenote: did you hear? Chris Evans and Sandra Bullock maybe dating. OMG!!!! I am out and out fangirling. This made me so happy I can't even. Hurry up and get married you two!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

thank you. so we can agree that it is best you not know who RK is. keke. keep guessing.
like I said with Sangeeta, there may be political motivations here that we don't know about.

also, they are teenagers and teenagers do stupid shit that they later regret. maybe the kids will turn out be better adult versions of themselves? atleast I am counting on that.

the fifth prince's loyalties clearly lie with the fourth brother and why not? if need be, fourth can possibly save him but madhu is just a hostage in their cruel palace. so he is also looking out for himself.

they are all pitiful at some level, some more than others. but ultimately, someone else holds power over them. for saya it is fourth prince, and for the princes it is the king.
Sidenote: did you hear? Chris Evans and Sandra Bullock maybe dating. OMG!!!! I am out and out fangirling. This made me so happy I can't even. Hurry up and get married you two!!!!!!


No I didn't know those two were dating. Who knew?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
^ apparently she is his schooldays crush. and they are in the getting-to-know-each-other phase. I am just over the moon. these two are the cutest. and my girl sandy b. needs to be happy at all costs. who better than mr. america? eee!! so excited
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jasu after reading dis part...

One thing is sure...saaya is rebellion...fighiting for dignity...feels lk she is a mere toy for dis two bros...to play nd throw wen dey ll be bored...

5th prince is somewhat nice types bt ll be always siding his bro,...
nd 4th he is total ulta
dominating...fierce...strange...bt at d same time...he has not yet crossed his limits..dat makes him a bit ...good a times...

waitn to c how long...saaya will hav to bear d torture and get rid of dis two princesss...

lovly update...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desire6

Jasu after reading dis part...

One thing is sure...saaya is rebellion...fighiting for dignity...feels lk she is a mere toy for dis two bros...to play nd throw wen dey ll be bored...

5th prince is somewhat nice types bt ll be always siding his bro,...
nd 4th he is total ulta
dominating...fierce...strange...bt at d same time...he has not yet crossed his limits..dat makes him a bit ...good a times...

waitn to c how long...saaya will hav to bear d torture and get rid of dis two princesss...

lovly update...cont soon

thank you. i pretty much agree with everything you said. see you soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Discontinued
Reason: This plot is a lot of work for little reward. The story drains every ounce of energy our of me and I do not want a heavy load at this moment. Even so, this story is one of my more cherished works. I am happy with what I wrote.

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