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Madhu-My Fiance



hello friends ,happy to meet you all through my new ss😊😊😊. am amirtha , college going girl. I love madhubala daily soap a lot. Initially, I came to India-forums to read stories on madhubala, i did it too and doing...(process ongoing) ,finally I felt like implementing my idea's so I started off with puppy love story, just giving a trial😊.hey guys I am open for constructive criticism, so feel free. here goes the story ...hope yo all will like it😉😉😉...

A short description (story):

madhubala the daughter of Shamsher Malik-padmini is a childish and naughty girl who has just finished her degree, meets shamsher's friend- son(rk) , a tall handsome guy namely rishab mohan kundra...
This story revolves with the couple's love life, their unrevealed love , will they be able to join together????...their destiny will answer. The story moves backwards rk, thinking about the past memories of madhu.
chapter 1:

"madhu " rk screams ,his temper raising too the peak ,he felt completely collapsing himself for making her to go through such a pain, his pain was uncontrollable as he wasn't able to bear that madhu had left him only for his happiness. "happiness? " where is the space for that word in his life without madhu, his inner heart questioned him harder. he felt like hitting himself hard. he cried out heartedly as tears skipped out of his eye's badly.
" rk pls relax" the soft voice behind the rk made him turn a little to face the owner of the voice .she gently touched his shoulder to console him ,even though she knew that it won't work, as rk was going through the hell pain of losing his love madhu. rk spoke with desolation " ria ...i need her back ria, pls do something...i need her" ria as friend of rk from childhood knows about rk well, she felt sad for being a part of his stupid drama which turned his life upside down...ria spoke to console rk.
ria: rk, i already warned ,you several times this not good, i told you many times that this surprise plan may hurt her until she comes to know about the surprise. It's your plan that changed everything upside down now...
rk hugged madhu's diary letting out his tear's badly, he loved madhu madly, the pain of losing madhu in his eye's seemed to be plenty.
rk: ria please do something ria, i need my madhu back, i am a bloody idiot who made her to go through the such amount of pain...but i thought everything will be alright once she came to know that these arrangement's and this wedding is not for me and you ,it's for madhu and me. I just thought of making her quite jealous on me and play for little while ...but never knew that she is ...
ria: what? she is
rk: ria ...ria...in a shaky tone...madhu is
ria's eye's grew wider ,she galred angryliy at rk.
ria: rk tell me the truth...she is
rk: madhu is ...she is pregnant, she is carrying my child, even i came to know this only few minutes ago through her letter.
ria: what non-sense is this rk?... how can do such a mistake that too for a soft girl like madhu...is your heart turned stone????...she fumed.
rk: pls stop it ria...i am already hurt ,your word's are just piercing my heart...i know i did a big mistake, but give me one chance to fix everything, ria please i need her back ...
ria felt the pain of rk was much more...since knew his love for madhu well, she agreed to help him nodding her head and shedding tears silently ,she also know she has to help rk to fix everything not only because she is close friend of rk. she felt it as her responsibility since she took part in his stupid drama which turned everything upside down.
ria finally decided to make everything alright by consoling rk , and helping him to get back his madhu...
ria consoled rk who was sitting in the floor, hugging madhu's dairy which she had left for him. His pain was horrible.
ria touched rk shoulder's , to give him the enough courage and regain his strength to fix everything back to normal.
ria: rk pls ,i am able to feel your pain. There is no use of sitting and crying like this by putting yourself in the darkness and blaming yourself for what ever that had happened so far.
"Come on rk , there is no possibility ,madhu could have not gone too far...come on let's start searching her already we wasted too much of time .you have to get back her as soon as possible. we have to start searching for her from right now onwards to find her. don't worry let's find her .she gave her hand for rk to gain his strength and raise up. rk wiped off his tear's .he agreed with ria's word's finally which gave him little courage and hope .
ria sat in driving seat while rk took the seat next to her.
ria: any idea? rk where should we go now?
rk: madhu let's have a check at sultan's home i mean madhu's brother.
ria: fyn rk...she might have gone there , u are right let's check...
rk and ria started off from nainital to mumbai.
ria was confused with rk's story since she doesn't know about madhu and his love life. she felt confused even though she gave him some courage, question's came running in to her mind
" What is in that dairy?
i went to US only 5 year's before leaving rk .what could have happened within his 5 year's? .
why did he ask me to come to india?? If he invited me for his marriage with madhu...then why he played such a game making me as his bride in front of madhu and all other guest ...jus to make madhu jealous???
rk says he is responsible for madhu's baby but he said he knew that later that too only after she left him ...how come its possible??.
madhu was rk's employee his personal (PA ) is all i know about madhu right now.
Ria(to herself):" I need to know about madhu- and rk's love story so that i can give my full effort to help him.i finally made a conclusion to ask and know about their love life, which will ultimately answer my question's too." she silently apologized to god for supporting rk by taking part in his drama and hurting an innocent girl . she prepared herself to speak ...she started to arrange the word's
she finally asked rk to reveal his entire love story , she started questioning him as the question's keep on raising in her mind.
To calm down ria , rk asked her to relax , he also promised her that he will reveal about his relationship with madhu wich started before 4 year's .
ria stopped questioning rk and maintained silence allowing rk to speak and reveal about his relationship with madhu
rk took deep breath as tears started skipping out of his eye's he started opening up his relationship with madhu...

flashback:
It was about 4 years ago , I met my madhu for first time. I was waiting for my manager to pick up me as my car got repaired ...i was standing in the middle of the high way seconds later it started to rain .I hid myself in the near by tea shop, waiting for my manager to pick up...suddenly a car stopped exactly opposite the tea shop...she slid her car window, she was merely an angel. so far i have never seen a girl like my madhu , ria even you know i am not or never been attracted by any girl, but on seeing madhu i gave up my heart accepting my defeat...i fell in love with her .it was even so hard for me to believe that i love her. she held her hand's out to catch the rain drops .i was enjoying watching her having the hot tea. It was the most beautiful memory in my life which still remains in ma heart strongly.

hey guys, hope you all liked it😊😊😊, i know the first update will be little confusing but upcoming updates will clear your doubt's ...so pls drop down your views through comment's so that I will think about continuing this story. kindly ignore the mistake's😉😉😉 .
am eagerly waiting to know your views.
silent reader's hit the like button pls.

chapter 2: pg5
chapter 3: pg8
chapter 4: pg11
Edited by rishbalaa - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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vrry nice dear love it but alas i hv to go from forom for 7 day i think i miss any update sooo pplz pm me dear for sure
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superb start dear...
waiting for next update
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Me totally loved it 😃😛 !! I want to know what's that cooking in this RK's head and way Madhu left and she is pregnant 😲...
Oh pls continue soon and add me to your pm list okay 😛
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nyc update suspense Huh? thanks 4 PM do cont soon u r too KAAMCHOR just like me :P
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lovely update amritha me too eagerly want to know about rishbala love story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting..update soon😊
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dis is really intrestn..
his plan made evrythn worse!!
curious 2 know the story of rishbala...
continue soon..
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Superb start n thnx for pm
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Awesome start Amritha Di!Pls continue soon & pm Me!

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